Reviewer: MomLovesEdward (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Bella's Toys
Just found your story and love it . Read all 15 chapters in three days at the computer .. which in my house is never free LOL . Wondering when you usually update Looking forward to seeing where Edward will go in his quest to get Bella back !
Reviewer: Linzmshell (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Bella's Toys
Holy s***. Go Esme!!!!!
Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Bella's Toys
ha ha ...carlisle with nipple rings could be so hot,,,,,,hmmm
i love it,,,i hope that edward gets kinky it should be fun with bella and i am glad he didnt give into her stupid tests,,,i think throwing julian in his face was a little much though
Reviewer: Debbie1870 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Bella's Toys
O.k. you better post soon. The readers frustration with Edward is about as
bad as Bella's. She is all but throwing herself at him AGAIN. What is wrong with this picture? Edward is repressed with a bag over his head (the one with eyes). Hahahaaa.
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Bella's Toys
Way to go Eddie. I loved all of his responses to her teasing and trying to shock him. Way to hide the shock and provide a little shock value of his own. I can just imagine gorgeous Emmett with nipple clamps. That is just too hot. And how about Esme asking if vamps can get nipple piercing. Talk about embarrassing. Great job. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: mtoldme (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Bella's Toys
This is a totally histarical chapter!!!!! I still am laughing. I especially liked the part where Edward wants to congratulate Bella for being environmentally conscious. :] Hahahahaha. Also Emmet trying out the nipple clamps, and then there is Esme's thoughts. Too funny. Part of me wants to knock Bella on the head for putting Edward though all of this (has she lost all self respect?!). I know it is going to get worse. Hang in there Edward. We know you love her and will put up with almost anything.
Reviewer: ElektraLane (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Bella's Toys
Oh my word! that was FANTASTIC! They are both playing with eachother and it's halrious! I LOVED how Bella reacted to Edward's nonchalant attitude, FABULOUS!
Reviewer: ElektraLane (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 14 - The Road To Hell...
LOVED it! Although I agree with Bella, I want to smack her in her face! I think they are both right and both wrong.
Reviewer: RoseKnott (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Bella's Toys
OMG !! I can't stop laughing !!! My family thinks I'm nuts because of my out loud hysterics. I love it when Emmett tries the clamps !!! Can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: EdwardsHeartbeat (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Bella's Toys
I literally fell out of my chair I was laughing so hard at that last line. Of all the people to ask that I wouldn't expect Esme. Alice maybe or Rosalie. Hehe great chapter.
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Bella's Toys
oh esme..you dark horse!!!
Reviewer: Natalina (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Bella's Toys
hahahahahahahahahahah Go edward!! I love it! hook a girl up with her crack lol
Reviewer: frogiea (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Bella's Toys
"Can vampire nipples be pierced"
Sooooo unexpected and soooooo perfectly good!!!!!
Keep it up!!
Reviewer: stephsmith (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Bella's Toys
That was completely ridiculous and hilarious at the same time. I laughed so hard.
Reviewer: edwardybella2006 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Bella's Toys
hahahaha omg this chapter was great! I totally love the sexual banter. Kudos to both characters trying to one-up each other!
Reviewer: I_heart_jacob__ (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Bella's Toys
HAWT
Reviewer: Bookworm03 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Bella's Toys
This has been my favorite chapter yet! You have such a wicked sense of humor...great story and please keep going!
Reviewer: Dijah (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Bella's Toys
Poor Edward... this must be torture for him...
Reviewer: 98765 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Bella's Toys
very funny!!
Reviewer: LCCullen (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Bella's Toys
This chapter made me literally LOL! I'm so glad Edward is finally coming around a little, such a prude... j/k Thanks for sharing!
Reviewer: xxkittykatxx (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Bella's Toys
That was so funny! Edward walking in on Bella holding a vibrator,ha ha. I have to admit he is learning to hold in his thoughts. By the way I thought that the way Bella reacted in New Moon to Edward returning was unrealistic, she should have made him suffer, like she does in this.
Love it!!
Reviewer: txgrl (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Bella's Toys
Hmm, maybe the spanking would have gotten them together 10 chapters sooner!
I just about fell out tho - Bella gave EMMETT nipple clamps? Oh too funny!
Poor Edward. You've tortured him alot. I hope he gets a chance to use all his new found knowledge soon!
Reviewer: gabthebomb1 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Bella's Toys
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Esme.
Great chapter :) Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Bella's Toys
Please update soon! This is great!!
Reviewer: magicalheather (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 06:16 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Bella's Toys
HAHA that was awesome I love Esme's question.
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