OMG!!!  This is awesome!  Hahahahahaha, Julian is a douche to not do that for her, though.  

Loved this one as well - but most of all looooovin that you post this often! I find my self jumping in my seat every time a new update of the story is in. Can't wait for more Bella & Eddie, and waaaaay less Julian. What a dick he is.

i am laughing so hard! Never trust a guy who won't at least OCCASSIONALLY...jeez...julian as selfish lover...good call *laugh*

Emmett is the shit!!! Oh my God, I nearly peed myself reading the 'meeting', they have a war room strategy session for a visit to the southern hemisphere. Shear brilliance.

Really good chapter. Your Edward really makes me laugh!

Poetry + horny Edward = Delicious!  More please! ;-)

Great chapter!  Loved the quotes from the family at the end.  And, I can't wait for the next update to see what happens at the Halloween Horror Nights.

You gave me some great laughs today, thanks!  And it was so fun matching up the quotes to family members, but why would Alice share that information?  "Oh, by the way, Edward was jerking off in the public bathroom.  Just thought you'd all want to know."  Hilarious!

Oh I know which is which and they were priceless!

Emmett, Alice, Jasper, Rosalie ... ?

First off, in regard to our discussion of alternatives to the word 'minx' I think I prefer vixen although I don't know if its period appropriate to Edward. I'd planned to come up with more. However, my brain is currently swimming in a big swamp of virus. So, lets leave it at vixen.

Second, I love it when Edward growls. I love this story, and I don't really want it to end, but at the same time I sort of want Tanya to dispatch Julian and let B and E get on with the whole nothing but some beautiful CFM shoes and lots of lemon juice.

Yeah! Great chapter!! Oh, BTW, I don't think I'd put it past Emmett to *ahem* use a public bathroom. Just saying...

 

 

 

haha use lubrication! haha thats good. :D

Great chpater as usual and yes! She isnt over him :DDD

I mean it when i say this is probably my favorite story! :D

halloween horror nights are freakin awesome here in orlando. Bella needs to move the seduction along

I was rolling on the floor reading about Edward's "gastric issues."  Julian's thoughts were absolutely hysterical.  I love the way he thinks he's figuring it all out, when truthfully he couldn't be farther from the truth!

That sly Bella - she's definitely changed in the last four years.  And for the better, I might add.  She has come into her own, and now she is ready for a real relationship with Bedward - uh.... I mean, Edward.  Four years ago she never felt like an equal, but life has definitely taught her that she is just as deserving as any other human or vampire when it comes to love.

I have to admit, when I first read the poetry I was wondering if there was going to be some surprise that Bella wrote it - I thought this because of the line dealing with 'teeth dangerously caressing your skin' or something like that.  Edward's reaction couldn't have been more perfect, though.  Well done!

Still my favorite story.  Thanks for the quick updates - they make my day!  While I love to get a response, no teaser, please.  I love the anticipation too much!  

Best - Jenn

Author's Response:

Jenn:  Sexy high heels and erotic poetry are too much for poor Edward. Who knew?  Thanks for saying such kind things about the story. THAT makes my day.  And just so you know chapter 21 has just been submitted for validation....