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Reviewer: jimmyd (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2013 09:32 PM · On: The I Hate Edward Cullen Club?
Wow! I can't wait to see how Edward is going to fare when he returns! Please post soon!
Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2011 09:42 AM · On: The I Hate Edward Cullen Club?
Great stuff...can't wait for the next chapter
Reviewer: ToTouchTheseInnocentLips (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2010 02:48 AM · On: The I Hate Edward Cullen Club?
I could practically hear Rose saying, "That bitch" to Alice's text. These were some good chapters! I think they're both wrong, kind of. Trying to forget everything won't work, but pushing the argument may not have been smart either. Great job, can't wait for more!
~Jazz~
Reviewer: tushka (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2010 05:08 AM · On: The I Hate Edward Cullen Club?
Really enjoy all of your work - looking forward to where this leads - can't figure out on my own what Bella has planned - thanks for a different take on "poor me" Bella -
Reviewer: babsnorwood (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 04:59 AM · On: The I Hate Edward Cullen Club?
Very good chapter!! I enjoyed the girls working in out and getting all the feeelings and angst out!! Can't wait til next chapter :)
Babs
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2010 06:44 AM · On: The I Hate Edward Cullen Club?
I'm still trying to picture Esme knocking on the window! I'm glad the "girls" are there for Bella. Now if we can just get Emoward to chill!
Reviewer: Snowdove (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2010 07:40 AM · On: Motherly Guilt
Found this via a recommendation and love it!
Reviewer: seadragon (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 04:57 PM · On: The I Hate Edward Cullen Club?
i love how the cullen women are closing ranks around bella. no one in the family is going to let edward be a complete idiot again. he is going to fix this whether he likes it or not ;)
Author's Response: Hey seadragon,
yup the cullen gals protect their own. nope not gonna happen again. He wants to though, he REALLY does and all this crap he has pulled comes from a good place, a misguided place of love.
Here is the un-beta’d teaser.
““Where’s Edward?” Charlie scowled when he said the name.
“He’s not coming over tonight,” I said, not looking him in the eye. I hated lying to Charlie, even thought I had done so much of it lately.
“What did he do now?” he raged. Before I could answer he continued, “Did you have a fight? Did he hurt you, again? Is he leaving you again? So, help me…” he continued, and I cut him off.
“No, he is not leaving. Please don’t speak about him like that! His parents decided he was coming over too often, and had to stay home as part of his punishment. We are going to be seeing each other at school Monday, and they wanted him at home tonight. He apologized profusely because of it,” I stated angrily.
Charlie didn’t believe me. He just beamed, and thought that Edward was not leaving but that we were fighting. This made my temper flare, but I reined it in.”
Okay before I get into the reason why understand this will probably change/be edited/ expanded etc… but it is the best I could give you right now, read further to understand why. So, it’ll be a while before the final chapter is published because I’m considering a sequel. If I do that I have to re-write the chapter, which I was not satisfied with at all. I’m sorry it’ll be a few weeks, I may or may not do the sequel but either way the chapter is not up to snuff and this story deserves a better ending. Thank you SO much for reading and reviewing this story it means the world to me. Thank you again!
Warmest wishes this holiday season.
~E
Reviewer: momof2monkeys (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 06:57 AM · On: The I Hate Edward Cullen Club?
How about the outtakes and a sequel????
Author's Response: Hey momof2monkeys,
Ur vote has been noted and I'm working on outlines to see if and how it'll work.
Here is the un-beta’d teaser.
““Where’s Edward?” Charlie scowled when he said the name.
“He’s not coming over tonight,” I said, not looking him in the eye. I hated lying to Charlie, even thought I had done so much of it lately.
“What did he do now?” he raged. Before I could answer he continued, “Did you have a fight? Did he hurt you, again? Is he leaving you again? So, help me…” he continued, and I cut him off.
“No, he is not leaving. Please don’t speak about him like that! His parents decided he was coming over too often, and had to stay home as part of his punishment. We are going to be seeing each other at school Monday, and they wanted him at home tonight. He apologized profusely because of it,” I stated angrily.
Charlie didn’t believe me. He just beamed, and thought that Edward was not leaving but that we were fighting. This made my temper flare, but I reined it in.”
Okay before I get into the reason why understand this will probably change/be edited/ expanded etc… but it is the best I could give you right now, read further to understand why. So, it’ll be a while before the final chapter is published because I’m considering a sequel. If I do that I have to re-write the chapter, which I was not satisfied with at all. I’m sorry it’ll be a few weeks, I may or may not do the sequel but either way the chapter is not up to snuff and this story deserves a better ending. Thank you SO much for reading and reviewing this story it means the world to me. Thank you again!
Warmest wishes this holiday season.
~E
Reviewer: PrincessNerra (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 08:06 AM · On: The I Hate Edward Cullen Club?
Loved it! The bonding between Alic , Esme and Bella was Awesome. The Edward bashing was great. He needs to get his crap together.
Author's Response: Hey PrincessNerra,
Thanks so much. The bonding was girl...girl power! lol. He does and he is trying and yeah that was fun to write.
Here is the un-beta’d teaser.
““Where’s Edward?” Charlie scowled when he said the name.
“He’s not coming over tonight,” I said, not looking him in the eye. I hated lying to Charlie, even thought I had done so much of it lately.
“What did he do now?” he raged. Before I could answer he continued, “Did you have a fight? Did he hurt you, again? Is he leaving you again? So, help me…” he continued, and I cut him off.
“No, he is not leaving. Please don’t speak about him like that! His parents decided he was coming over too often, and had to stay home as part of his punishment. We are going to be seeing each other at school Monday, and they wanted him at home tonight. He apologized profusely because of it,” I stated angrily.
Charlie didn’t believe me. He just beamed, and thought that Edward was not leaving but that we were fighting. This made my temper flare, but I reined it in.”
Okay before I get into the reason why understand this will probably change/be edited/ expanded etc… but it is the best I could give you right now, read further to understand why. So, it’ll be a while before the final chapter is published because I’m considering a sequel. If I do that I have to re-write the chapter, which I was not satisfied with at all. I’m sorry it’ll be a few weeks, I may or may not do the sequel but either way the chapter is not up to snuff and this story deserves a better ending. Thank you SO much for reading and reviewing this story it means the world to me. Thank you again!
Warmest wishes this holiday season.
~E
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 06:39 AM · On: The I Hate Edward Cullen Club?
Lol i loved the girl power in this chap =] ! i really loved it =]
Author's Response: Hey Red,
Girl power indeed, thank you SO much!
Here is the un-beta’d teaser.
““Where’s Edward?” Charlie scowled when he said the name.
“He’s not coming over tonight,” I said, not looking him in the eye. I hated lying to Charlie, even thought I had done so much of it lately.
“What did he do now?” he raged. Before I could answer he continued, “Did you have a fight? Did he hurt you, again? Is he leaving you again? So, help me…” he continued, and I cut him off.
“No, he is not leaving. Please don’t speak about him like that! His parents decided he was coming over too often, and had to stay home as part of his punishment. We are going to be seeing each other at school Monday, and they wanted him at home tonight. He apologized profusely because of it,” I stated angrily.
Charlie didn’t believe me. He just beamed, and thought that Edward was not leaving but that we were fighting. This made my temper flare, but I reined it in.”
Okay before I get into the reason why understand this will probably change/be edited/ expanded etc… but it is the best I could give you right now, read further to understand why. So, it’ll be a while before the final chapter is published because I’m considering a sequel. If I do that I have to re-write the chapter, which I was not satisfied with at all. I’m sorry it’ll be a few weeks, I may or may not do the sequel but either way the chapter is not up to snuff and this story deserves a better ending. Thank you SO much for reading and reviewing this story it means the world to me. Thank you again!
Warmest wishes this holiday season.
~E
Reviewer: ludo (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 05:08 PM · On: The I Hate Edward Cullen Club?
The idea of the two out-takes sounds good. Thanks for posting this beautifully written chapter, I love the detail you are going into, I always felt SM rushed the whole aftermath of the reunion and you are successfully filling in the gaps of what needed to happen in order for Edward and Bella to move on together.
Author's Response: Hi ludo,
Thanks, and you are welcome thanks you for saying such lovely things and reviewing as well as reading. Thank you so much I always felt the same way.
Here is the un-beta’d teaser.
““Where’s Edward?” Charlie scowled when he said the name.
“He’s not coming over tonight,” I said, not looking him in the eye. I hated lying to Charlie, even thought I had done so much of it lately.
“What did he do now?” he raged. Before I could answer he continued, “Did you have a fight? Did he hurt you, again? Is he leaving you again? So, help me…” he continued, and I cut him off.
“No, he is not leaving. Please don’t speak about him like that! His parents decided he was coming over too often, and had to stay home as part of his punishment. We are going to be seeing each other at school Monday, and they wanted him at home tonight. He apologized profusely because of it,” I stated angrily.
Charlie didn’t believe me. He just beamed, and thought that Edward was not leaving but that we were fighting. This made my temper flare, but I reined it in.”
Okay before I get into the reason why understand this will probably change/be edited/ expanded etc… but it is the best I could give you right now, read further to understand why. So, it’ll be a while before the final chapter is published because I’m considering a sequel. If I do that I have to re-write the chapter, which I was not satisfied with at all. I’m sorry it’ll be a few weeks, I may or may not do the sequel but either way the chapter is not up to snuff and this story deserves a better ending. Thank you SO much for reading and reviewing this story it means the world to me. Thank you again!
Warmest wishes this holiday season.
~E
Reviewer: marsy-cat (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 03:52 PM · On: The I Hate Edward Cullen Club?
Love it!! I must say it was the one thing in the books that bothered me. I needed Bella to have her time with the Cullens to let them each apologise for leaving her and for them to agnolage the damage their leaving did to all of them. So once again I must say very very well done. The story feels like it could be missing chapters between New Moon and Eclipse.
Author's Response: Hi Marsy-cat,
Thank you so much, I'm happy u enjoy my story and vision. thanks SO much.
Here is the un-beta’d teaser.
““Where’s Edward?” Charlie scowled when he said the name.
“He’s not coming over tonight,” I said, not looking him in the eye. I hated lying to Charlie, even thought I had done so much of it lately.
“What did he do now?” he raged. Before I could answer he continued, “Did you have a fight? Did he hurt you, again? Is he leaving you again? So, help me…” he continued, and I cut him off.
“No, he is not leaving. Please don’t speak about him like that! His parents decided he was coming over too often, and had to stay home as part of his punishment. We are going to be seeing each other at school Monday, and they wanted him at home tonight. He apologized profusely because of it,” I stated angrily.
Charlie didn’t believe me. He just beamed, and thought that Edward was not leaving but that we were fighting. This made my temper flare, but I reined it in.”
Okay before I get into the reason why understand this will probably change/be edited/ expanded etc… but it is the best I could give you right now, read further to understand why. So, it’ll be a while before the final chapter is published because I’m considering a sequel. If I do that I have to re-write the chapter, which I was not satisfied with at all. I’m sorry it’ll be a few weeks, I may or may not do the sequel but either way the chapter is not up to snuff and this story deserves a better ending. Thank you SO much for reading and reviewing this story it means the world to me. Thank you again!
Warmest wishes this holiday season.
~E
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 11:31 AM · On: The I Hate Edward Cullen Club?
Can't argue with Bella, Esme is more of a mother-figure than Renee ever was. It is so good for Bella's mental health to be able to unload on Alice and Esme, secure in the knowledge she's sharing with two women that love Edward nearly as much as she does. I have my fingers and toes crossed that Edward will get that lightbulb over his head and get what Bella is trying to tell him. I want so much for them to be together, it hurts them both to be seperated, as history shows.
Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 10:48 AM · On: The I Hate Edward Cullen Club?
LOL I love it. He is such a dumb dumb head. hehe...girl bonding. I agree with Bella, I wish she would have been involved.
Author's Response: Hey JShay.
I so happy u love it. He is trying and I love girl power.
Here is the un-beta’d teaser.
““Where’s Edward?” Charlie scowled when he said the name.
“He’s not coming over tonight,” I said, not looking him in the eye. I hated lying to Charlie, even thought I had done so much of it lately.
“What did he do now?” he raged. Before I could answer he continued, “Did you have a fight? Did he hurt you, again? Is he leaving you again? So, help me…” he continued, and I cut him off.
“No, he is not leaving. Please don’t speak about him like that! His parents decided he was coming over too often, and had to stay home as part of his punishment. We are going to be seeing each other at school Monday, and they wanted him at home tonight. He apologized profusely because of it,” I stated angrily.
Charlie didn’t believe me. He just beamed, and thought that Edward was not leaving but that we were fighting. This made my temper flare, but I reined it in.”
Okay before I get into the reason why understand this will probably change/be edited/ expanded etc… but it is the best I could give you right now, read further to understand why. So, it’ll be a while before the final chapter is published because I’m considering a sequel. If I do that I have to re-write the chapter, which I was not satisfied with at all. I’m sorry it’ll be a few weeks, I may or may not do the sequel but either way the chapter is not up to snuff and this story deserves a better ending. Thank you SO much for reading and reviewing this story it means the world to me. Thank you again!
Warmest wishes this holiday season.
~E
Reviewer: Sweetpea123 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 10:40 AM · On: The I Hate Edward Cullen Club?
Yes, another good update that moves the story along. I like the different viewpoints, and I don't care what you do next to this story, just do something to keep it going!!!
Author's Response: Hey Sweetpea123,
thanks. I'll try to keep it going....that is an idea, don't make it a sequel just change it to AU and continue on....u might be onto something. Now I have another option to consider thanks.
Here is the un-beta’d teaser.
““Where’s Edward?” Charlie scowled when he said the name.
“He’s not coming over tonight,” I said, not looking him in the eye. I hated lying to Charlie, even thought I had done so much of it lately.
“What did he do now?” he raged. Before I could answer he continued, “Did you have a fight? Did he hurt you, again? Is he leaving you again? So, help me…” he continued, and I cut him off.
“No, he is not leaving. Please don’t speak about him like that! His parents decided he was coming over too often, and had to stay home as part of his punishment. We are going to be seeing each other at school Monday, and they wanted him at home tonight. He apologized profusely because of it,” I stated angrily.
Charlie didn’t believe me. He just beamed, and thought that Edward was not leaving but that we were fighting. This made my temper flare, but I reined it in.”
Okay before I get into the reason why understand this will probably change/be edited/ expanded etc… but it is the best I could give you right now, read further to understand why. So, it’ll be a while before the final chapter is published because I’m considering a sequel. If I do that I have to re-write the chapter, which I was not satisfied with at all. I’m sorry it’ll be a few weeks, I may or may not do the sequel but either way the chapter is not up to snuff and this story deserves a better ending. Thank you SO much for reading and reviewing this story it means the world to me. Thank you again!
Warmest wishes this holiday season.
~E
Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 07:55 AM · On: The I Hate Edward Cullen Club?
A little too cryptic, I would say. Due to the fact that one cannot read a chapter after the previous one, one tends to forget details and eventually can't figure it out the psycological build up.
Author's Response: Hi Camilla,
oh sorry, it was an editing issue on my part. I had a lot of edits to do once i got it back and didn't have the time. I don't like working in dribs and drabs, so I waited until I could edit it right through.
Here is the un-beta’d teaser.
““Where’s Edward?” Charlie scowled when he said the name.
“He’s not coming over tonight,” I said, not looking him in the eye. I hated lying to Charlie, even thought I had done so much of it lately.
“What did he do now?” he raged. Before I could answer he continued, “Did you have a fight? Did he hurt you, again? Is he leaving you again? So, help me…” he continued, and I cut him off.
“No, he is not leaving. Please don’t speak about him like that! His parents decided he was coming over too often, and had to stay home as part of his punishment. We are going to be seeing each other at school Monday, and they wanted him at home tonight. He apologized profusely because of it,” I stated angrily.
Charlie didn’t believe me. He just beamed, and thought that Edward was not leaving but that we were fighting. This made my temper flare, but I reined it in.”
Okay before I get into the reason why understand this will probably change/be edited/ expanded etc… but it is the best I could give you right now, read further to understand why. So, it’ll be a while before the final chapter is published because I’m considering a sequel. If I do that I have to re-write the chapter, which I was not satisfied with at all. I’m sorry it’ll be a few weeks, I may or may not do the sequel but either way the chapter is not up to snuff and this story deserves a better ending. Thank you SO much for reading and reviewing this story it means the world to me. Thank you again!
Warmest wishes this holiday season.
~E
Reviewer: lpeaz814 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 06:27 AM · On: The I Hate Edward Cullen Club?
another great chapter...honestly I would like to see your idea for a sequel but the outtakes would be nice too. Either way it works out i will be happy:)
Author's Response: Hey Ipeaz814,
Thank you very much. your selections have been duly noted.
Here is the un-beta’d teaser.
““Where’s Edward?” Charlie scowled when he said the name.
“He’s not coming over tonight,” I said, not looking him in the eye. I hated lying to Charlie, even thought I had done so much of it lately.
“What did he do now?” he raged. Before I could answer he continued, “Did you have a fight? Did he hurt you, again? Is he leaving you again? So, help me…” he continued, and I cut him off.
“No, he is not leaving. Please don’t speak about him like that! His parents decided he was coming over too often, and had to stay home as part of his punishment. We are going to be seeing each other at school Monday, and they wanted him at home tonight. He apologized profusely because of it,” I stated angrily.
Charlie didn’t believe me. He just beamed, and thought that Edward was not leaving but that we were fighting. This made my temper flare, but I reined it in.”
Okay before I get into the reason why understand this will probably change/be edited/ expanded etc… but it is the best I could give you right now, read further to understand why. So, it’ll be a while before the final chapter is published because I’m considering a sequel. If I do that I have to re-write the chapter, which I was not satisfied with at all. I’m sorry it’ll be a few weeks, I may or may not do the sequel but either way the chapter is not up to snuff and this story deserves a better ending. Thank you SO much for reading and reviewing this story it means the world to me. Thank you again!
Warmest wishes this holiday season.
~E
Reviewer: IssaBissa (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 06:16 AM · On: The I Hate Edward Cullen Club?
An interesting chapter. But the discussion about texting Rose was more then cheesy and had no imput on the chapter. You very well could have left that out.
Other then that you have done a good job.
Author's Response: Hey IssaBissa,
Thanks and thanks for the awesome rating.
Sorry, if it was cheesy, it needed to be done because it fit with the other chapter. We needed to see it happen for the timeline I'm working with. Also I was less cheesy than version one of the discussion.
Thank you very much. I appreciate the feedback as always.
Here is the un-beta’d teaser.
““Where’s Edward?” Charlie scowled when he said the name.
“He’s not coming over tonight,” I said, not looking him in the eye. I hated lying to Charlie, even thought I had done so much of it lately.
“What did he do now?” he raged. Before I could answer he continued, “Did you have a fight? Did he hurt you, again? Is he leaving you again? So, help me…” he continued, and I cut him off.
“No, he is not leaving. Please don’t speak about him like that! His parents decided he was coming over too often, and had to stay home as part of his punishment. We are going to be seeing each other at school Monday, and they wanted him at home tonight. He apologized profusely because of it,” I stated angrily.
Charlie didn’t believe me. He just beamed, and thought that Edward was not leaving but that we were fighting. This made my temper flare, but I reined it in.”
Okay before I get into the reason why understand this will probably change/be edited/ expanded etc… but it is the best I could give you right now, read further to understand why. So, it’ll be a while before the final chapter is published because I’m considering a sequel. If I do that I have to re-write the chapter, which I was not satisfied with at all. I’m sorry it’ll be a few weeks, I may or may not do the sequel but either way the chapter is not up to snuff and this story deserves a better ending. Thank you SO much for reading and reviewing this story it means the world to me. Thank you again!
Warmest wishes this holiday season.
~E
Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 06:06 AM · On: The I Hate Edward Cullen Club?
Another enjoyable chapter. The bonding with Bella, Alice and Esme was great but it would have been nice if Rosalie was included. Hopefully Edward gets a clue soon.
Author's Response: hi danimcket,
Thank you so much, I'm happy u liked it. I liked the bonding too, maybe in the future they will get the chance, but the fact that she helped said volumes.
He will he will
Here is the un-beta’d teaser.
““Where’s Edward?” Charlie scowled when he said the name.
“He’s not coming over tonight,” I said, not looking him in the eye. I hated lying to Charlie, even thought I had done so much of it lately.
“What did he do now?” he raged. Before I could answer he continued, “Did you have a fight? Did he hurt you, again? Is he leaving you again? So, help me…” he continued, and I cut him off.
“No, he is not leaving. Please don’t speak about him like that! His parents decided he was coming over too often, and had to stay home as part of his punishment. We are going to be seeing each other at school Monday, and they wanted him at home tonight. He apologized profusely because of it,” I stated angrily.
Charlie didn’t believe me. He just beamed, and thought that Edward was not leaving but that we were fighting. This made my temper flare, but I reined it in.”
Okay before I get into the reason why understand this will probably change/be edited/ expanded etc… but it is the best I could give you right now, read further to understand why. So, it’ll be a while before the final chapter is published because I’m considering a sequel. If I do that I have to re-write the chapter, which I was not satisfied with at all. I’m sorry it’ll be a few weeks, I may or may not do the sequel but either way the chapter is not up to snuff and this story deserves a better ending. Thank you SO much for reading and reviewing this story it means the world to me. Thank you again!
Warmest wishes this holiday season.
~E
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 06:03 AM · On: The I Hate Edward Cullen Club?
Kind of obsessively love this! More please!
Author's Response: Hey agiismsxx,
best.compliment. ever. If U have time check out my other story Hamartia Rocks, if u haven't already/
Here is the un-beta’d teaser.
““Where’s Edward?” Charlie scowled when he said the name.
“He’s not coming over tonight,” I said, not looking him in the eye. I hated lying to Charlie, even thought I had done so much of it lately.
“What did he do now?” he raged. Before I could answer he continued, “Did you have a fight? Did he hurt you, again? Is he leaving you again? So, help me…” he continued, and I cut him off.
“No, he is not leaving. Please don’t speak about him like that! His parents decided he was coming over too often, and had to stay home as part of his punishment. We are going to be seeing each other at school Monday, and they wanted him at home tonight. He apologized profusely because of it,” I stated angrily.
Charlie didn’t believe me. He just beamed, and thought that Edward was not leaving but that we were fighting. This made my temper flare, but I reined it in.”
Okay before I get into the reason why understand this will probably change/be edited/ expanded etc… but it is the best I could give you right now, read further to understand why. So, it’ll be a while before the final chapter is published because I’m considering a sequel. If I do that I have to re-write the chapter, which I was not satisfied with at all. I’m sorry it’ll be a few weeks, I may or may not do the sequel but either way the chapter is not up to snuff and this story deserves a better ending. Thank you SO much for reading and reviewing this story it means the world to me. Thank you again!
Warmest wishes this holiday season.
~E
Reviewer: tracey (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 05:16 AM · On: The I Hate Edward Cullen Club?
Good chapter. I would rather have your version of the sequel instead of an out take. Update soon. :)
Author's Response: Hey tracey thanks for the rating, ur opinion is duly noted.
Here is the un-beta’d teaser.
““Where’s Edward?” Charlie scowled when he said the name.
“He’s not coming over tonight,” I said, not looking him in the eye. I hated lying to Charlie, even thought I had done so much of it lately.
“What did he do now?” he raged. Before I could answer he continued, “Did you have a fight? Did he hurt you, again? Is he leaving you again? So, help me…” he continued, and I cut him off.
“No, he is not leaving. Please don’t speak about him like that! His parents decided he was coming over too often, and had to stay home as part of his punishment. We are going to be seeing each other at school Monday, and they wanted him at home tonight. He apologized profusely because of it,” I stated angrily.
Charlie didn’t believe me. He just beamed, and thought that Edward was not leaving but that we were fighting. This made my temper flare, but I reined it in.”
Okay before I get into the reason why understand this will probably change/be edited/ expanded etc… but it is the best I could give you right now, read further to understand why. So, it’ll be a while before the final chapter is published because I’m considering a sequel. If I do that I have to re-write the chapter, which I was not satisfied with at all. I’m sorry it’ll be a few weeks, I may or may not do the sequel but either way the chapter is not up to snuff and this story deserves a better ending. Thank you SO much for reading and reviewing this story it means the world to me. Thank you again!
Warmest wishes this holiday season.
~E
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 09:18 PM · On: Yet I'll Hammer It Out
I really hope that Edward has figured it out, it will make his and Bella's life so much better. He truly does over-think everything. It's so simple, maybe that's the problem. If you treat everyone the way you want to be treated, you'll be much happier. At least, the whole family is trying to help and that will remind Edward how much they care.
Author's Response: Hi again k1942,
Sorry I'm answering all these at once, but I just have not had the time but I always respond.
Little secret, he has, and it will I think. He does, and that is what is standing in their way... partly. Again, you hit the nail on the head.
Thanks again for all the great review and i hope you enjoy the next chapters.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 06:01 PM · On: Sunday: Take Two
It helps a little to hear Bella's thoughts, and I agree that stuff is better out in the open than festering in side. I'm also thinking Bella and Edward both should be careful of what they say. Some things can't be unsaid.
Author's Response:
Hey k1942,
See I said have a little faith. I could not write that scene as one sides, you need both to understand the hurt and the anger. Yeah, they should have , but they'll have to deal with. I might use that line.... I'll credit you if I do.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 05:49 PM · On: Sunday: Take One
Not that he doesn't deserve some punishment, but I think you are being too hard on Edward. There is such a thing as making him too abased, I think it's not necessary to make him a doormat. Let him make amends, don't emasculate him.
Author's Response: Hi k1942,
I know where you're coming from, but it is the only way to make him get it, have a little faith, it'll all work out.
Thanks as always for reading and reviewing.
Cheers,
~E
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