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Reviewer: ermireallydontcare (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2010 02:20 AM · On: My Comforter

To begin with a thought it was a Jasper. A truly original idea, as there are lots of 'Jasper slips-up' stories, but not many with Alice. I love how their roles are switched for a change - so it's Jasper comforting Alice.

I'd be glad to add this great story to my series :)

Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. That's why I wrote it. We know Alice slipped up at least once, but everyone is always on Jasper's case.

And thanx for adding this to your series :)


Reviewer: StupidLamb626 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2010 09:09 AM · On: My Comforter

Hahaha! Awesome how you added the twist. Thought it was Jasper, didn't you? Yup. It's good, I like it.

Author's Response:

I love twist endings, keeps you on your toes lol. Glad you liked it and thanx for the review :)

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2010 08:37 AM · On: My Comforter


I was just looking through the list and I saw the summary and I was like 'hang on just a minute! I know this story!'

I loved this one shot, and its great to read through it again now that I know Alice slipped up and not Jasper.

Can I add this to my Eternal Hope series? If you want a link to it, I can send it to you :)

You should totally put The Diary of Alice Brandon on here!!

Author's Response:

Hey Paula. Absolutely, I was browsing through that series. I would love to be a part of it. Send me the link. And I promise the next chapter of Diary will be uploaded TODAY!!!

Reviewer: idealskeptic (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2010 07:34 AM · On: My Comforter

I liked this. I had to start over twice before I realized it wasn't Jasper that slipped up. It was very sweet, just as it would be with Alice & Jasper.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. Everyone assumes it's Jasper that slips up...that's why I wrote this. Glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: Strider (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 07:08 PM · On: My Comforter

That was kind of sweet and sad.  I wouldn't expect Alice to slip up, but I really appreciate stories that truly take their vampiric nature into account.  I like how it took a while to figure out just who the POV character was, too.  Well done!

Author's Response:

Thank you. Jasper is always the one to slip up and we know that Rosalie is the only one who never had human blood. So I figured I'd write about Alice, but have everyone think it was Jasper ;)


Glad you liked it and thanx for the review.

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