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Reviewer: pearlgem (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sunday's Are For...

Love love love this story! Hope you have fun on your holiday and can't wait for the next chapter. With BAFTA Rob comes Kristen drama...looking forward to it! 



Author's Response:

pearlgem,

Thanks hon!  I love, love, love that you love this story!  Hehe!  Had a great holiday thanks!  My beta is away at the moment, but she is returning today so hopefully not too long before the next one's up.  And Kristen drama?  Hmmnn...

Duders x

Reviewer: newyorkminute (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 3 - He's Just a Boy

"I just gave Robert Pattinson a hard on."  You have the best lines! I'm just re-reading some chapters Duders so even though I'm up to date, I think I missed reviewing some previous chapters because of RL crap and I didn't review when I was catching up? Hope you don't mind that I'm sort of going backwords? I loved this chapter, you can really feel the getting-to-know you tension, but tension in a good way, when you're first seeing someone and I love your writing when Twee is in an analytical mood....
 
Jodi xo
 
PS Keeping with the whole Twee as a counsellor thing, I do this grief counselling thing (don't ask, very boring but very beneficial and this is a HAPPY place!) and I was asked last week to do a Top Five of Things That Brought You Joy This Month.  You and RobTwee made my list (yes, you personally as well as your story, because even though I don't know you from a bar of soap and I could be walking past you on the way to work every day - er, actually not, because I don't think you live in Australia - you're clearly a fabulous person because you're writing RobTwee after all!). Er, maybe don't get too excited though because you came in third after my dog and Weiss Bars............
PSS Gees I ramble...

Author's Response:

Jodi,

I missed this review last night!  How'd I do that?!  Gosh, I absolutely love the fact that you are re-reading!  Love it!  And of course I don't mind you reviewing previous chapters!  Goodness me no!!  I adore hearing from you every time!  I really enjoyed writing the early chapters where there were nerves and tension a plenty!  Hehe!  I like that line...Can you imagine the realisation that you did that? Robert Pattinson.  Has a hard on.  Because of me.  *THUD* Hehe! 

Okay, so the counsellor thing.  I am a counsellor myself, and I work with young people (hence Twee's job).  I'm glad that you find the grief counselling beneficial.  I think I recall you mentioning something in a previous review that connects to this? I had some myself when I lost my best friend a few years back, and I found it very useful too. I think the timing has to be right, you have to be in a certain place to do it, but then if you are it can be so beneficial.  Plus I had to have twenty four hours worth of therapy to qualify as a counsellor myself, so been there done that too!  Anyway, what I want to say is, I don't care if I was third behind your dog and Weiss Bars....I was on your list?!!!  Jodi, that makes me sooooo incredibly happy!  I write this story because I love writing, I love Rob, I love the characters I have developed, and I love escapism. THIS is my perfect escapism. To hear that other people get pleasure or a little bit of happiness, a giggle, a smiley moment from anything that I write is just the biggest compliment!  But me and RobTwee?  Okay, I'm blushing now!  LOL!  Thank you for that lovely comment.  I think you can tell quite a lot about a writer through their work, so I feel honoured to be sat alongside Rob and Twee on your list.  And finally, nope, I live in London...But I have quite a few Aussie readers!  It's wonderful!  You should drop by the forum sometime...We have great fun over there!  It'd be lovely to see you!

Ps.  I sooooo ramble too!  Constantly...Hence why the next chapter is 10k.  I think I nearly gave my poor beta a heart attack! 

Thank you so much again. And please do drop by if you are re-reading because it's fantastic to hear second time around.

Duders x 

Reviewer: Uglybear23 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 8 - 'So, Take Me Upstairs...'

I know Io've reviewed this chapter before, but I'm rereading it again and it may just be my favorite. You right thier love scenes so perfect. I could read it and read it again and still love it. It's so honest and just the way it should be. Rob is the perfect gentelmen and Evie is a lucky girl, she's just the right girl to get the kind of loving Rob is giving lol. Like I said before, I simply love this chapter and all the rest :)



Author's Response:

Uglybear23,

Wow!  Read it again eh?  I'm soooo unbelievably flattered!  Thank you!  It was one of my favourites to write.  That and the IOW chapters.  I think it shows their overpowering attraction to one another and their growing intimacy - not just in a physical sense.  I try to always write with an honest touch, because to me that makes the characters more real.  Evie is so very close to my heart, she's a complex soul, sometimes a mix of contradictions, but her intentions are always well meant and she has a lot to give to Rob.  She's going to have a bit of a blip in the next chapter, so be prepared!  I hope you'll understand where she's coming from and stick with her....My beta is on holiday at the moment, but back later  this week I think so hopefully not too long before it's up.

Thanks so much for dropping by to tell me this!  It made me smile!

Duders

Reviewer: newyorkminute (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2010 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Sunday's Are For...

"Respect the pan!  It's Tefal..." oh Duders, you cracked me up with that, I completely lost it!! The hornies, "commando pup," the beanie returns, I loved all of it. I adore this story, I really do, you strike a chord with your writing, you really go. Am a bit nervous about the Bafta's for Twee....

Once again, you've made my day with your update (to be honest, this time you made my week - my $#@!%^ computer went to Computer Heaven last Monday and took with it all my favourites, stories, photos...you should have heard the wail!!) so getting all my stuff back yesterday was like, aaaaaaah....and then, ooh, has Duders updated? So glad you had, loved it.

Hope you had a really good time in Dubai, so good to have a holiday from real life, but fabulous that you're back for more updates (priorities and all that haha).

Jodi xo 



Author's Response:

Yay! Jodi!

I have to admit - I am rather like Evie in many ways, and the Tefal line just popped into my head when I imagined Rob making a mess in her kitchen! So pleased you enjoyed!  And 'commando pup'!  You pick out some of my fave bits to write!  My dog actually did that once, and continues to do so occasionally.  Commando pup just sums it up for me! She really looked like she was on some kind of military operation!

Thank you so much for your wonderful comment about my writing.  Keeping it real, and character development are so very important to me.  Evie is very close to my heart! 

Nervous about the BAFTA's?  Hmmn.  She does have a bit of time...I hope people by now know her character well enough to empathise with what happens in the next chapter.  We shall see! 

Ohh noooo!  Bad computer!  You have no idea how much I squee-ed to hear from you now though!  Thanks! 

Loved Dubai thanks - and yep, update has been submitted!  My Beta is away on holiday, but it's in the queue awaiting her return!  I'm soooo impatient to get it out there. 

Lovely to hear from you again!

Mwah!

Duders

Reviewer: Vampyre (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sunday's Are For...

I see you're steadily approaching the 500 review mark.  Well Done~!



Author's Response:

Vampyre,

Oooh, thanks!  Bit of a way off...I think reviews are slowing a little...not sure...views are consistent, but not always reviews.  Hey ho! Thanks so much for continuing to let me know your  thoughts.  It really does mean a lot. 

Next one coming very soon!

Duders

Reviewer: Vampyre (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sunday's Are For...

The physical side of their relationship certainly seems . . . satisfying ~!

He's such a shy baby.  Evie seems a bit more bold in realtionship communication  (try saying that 10 times fast).  Regardless, they are getting so close to each other. It's lovely. 

I've seen Eastenders once or twice.  I LOVE Are You Being Served? - Mrs. Slocum and her hair - what a hoot. 

I have also enjoyed As Time Goes By, and Keeping Up Appearances - Hyancinth is a riot!  Sometimes I would watch Fawlty Towers and Absolutely Fabulous on occasion.

I adore Helen Mirren who portrayed Detective Jane Tennison on Prime Suspect.  I was riveted during the season when some poor girl was buried under a slab in some bloke's garden.  It still creeps me out.

Of course the hubs and I watch Top Gear nightly.  Cheers!

 



Author's Response:

Vampyre,

Satisfying indeed!  Their attraction is strong, and Rob likes to try...he's a tryer! ;)  You're right, Evie is bolder than he is, although not so bold when the attention is turned on her.  She's getting there though. They are learning each other, slowly but surely. 

Are You Being Served - Another Brit classic!  And yes, you mention some other fab examples too!  Can't beat a bit of old school Brit comedy in my opinion!

Ooooh, I remember that Prime Suspect with the girl under the patio!  That freaked me out too! But a fantastic series! 

And yes, Top Gear - my hubs loves that! 

Duders x

Reviewer: Vampyre (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Home Turf

What a cockblock by Lily and Tom.  And another cockblock by Evie in her bedroom.  Poor Rob!  Such a patient lad!

The party was perfect~!  Guess Brent got all his questions answered!  Hah!!

Oh yeah, the Spanking Stick - heh heh heh.

And some yummy lemonade!



Author's Response:

Vampyre,

I know!  Poor Rob!  He didn't have much luck early on did he? 

Glad you enjoyed the party!  Rob marking his territory definitely sent out a message to Brent in the end...

Now that spanking stick...will it reappear?  Hmmmn....

Thank you!

Duders

Reviewer: Vampyre (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Doing it All, Putting it Out There

Wow!  You write such delicious long chapters!  Enjoyed reading about Evie's business trip to NYC and lucky girl! Gets to hear from RPattz!  Holy mackeral, she's a cool customer - I'd be squeeing all over the place.  Nice conversation that evolved into phone sex (*whispering*)  Such a vixen.

"Twee fetish."  Such  a creative bloke.  And Brent!  Kinda nosy - eh?  It's funny how she reacted to his questions.  And the Empire State blg - great moment w/ Ben.

Totally fab, as usual!



Author's Response:

Vampyre,

I do write long chapters I know!  So glad you like that - I'm a details girl...all about the details! 

As for Evie's responses to Rob on the phone - one word - alcohol.  Haha!  She squees...just not outwardly!  Hehe!  And yeah, the naughty side of her came out there didn't it?  And Rob! 

You picked up on the Twee fetish line!  Yay!  And yes, Brent, hmmn...he is a bit isn't he?  And the Empire State Building with Ben - proper bestie's moment there.  I love that you pick up on the detail! 

Thank you so much!

Duders

Reviewer: SwimmingBee (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Sunday's Are For...

Yayyyyyy for more RobTwee!!

Such a sweet chapter. Aww. Snuggles, chats, bacon sandwiches, fingers in butts...

Gah! Rob! What was that!? Whew. He might get the glitter lube out next time. Hehehee. Or her toys from New York and really go all out there. Hehee. Don't mind me. I'm delirious from lack of sleep!

I love these lines...

"You're good with your hands, your fingers," I whispered, giggling softly.

"Am I?" he asked.

Oh Rob, as if you don't know that already. ;)

So the BAFTAs are next, eeeek! I'm worried, and not just because of his bad hair! But awww, he's just so cute nearly telling her he loved her... but then chickening out. Awww! Love, love, love this story! Thanks so much, Duders! x



Author's Response:

SwimmingBee my forum buddy!

Bwahaha! I spat out my Twinings!  I know, but technically not 'in' the butt...around the butt...yes, very important distinction!  Haha! Glitter lube next time eh? 

Who can resist a man who knows what to do with his hands and fingers eh? (Twee...Gem...Both succumbed to the wonky ones!)

Yep, BAFTA's next...Hmmn, his hair...it was bad.  Poor Rob!  Should you be worried?  Well, you know what I said on the forum! ;)

Love, love, love that you love this story!

Duders x

 

Reviewer: KathyK (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sunday's Are For...

Good, no, great lemon! He seems so normal in this story, I love it.



Author's Response:

KathyK,

*Bows down* - Why thank you!  I do try!  I did blush a little writing that one though!  I strive to portray him as normal and real - so pleased you enjoy that about him.

Thank you!

Duders

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sunday's Are For...

Phew!!!! My laptop nearly spontaneously combusted.  The Pattinson wake up call.... well where do I get myself one of those??? I could cope with that every day of the week *yum yum* that was hot, hot, hot!!  Oh and I would like to pass on an open invitation for Rob to come round anytime - wake up call, bacon butties, a brew, Eastenders anything his heart desires - LOL.  Have you heard Bradley on the Orange adverts?  He's so funny - kerching!

Is he going to tell Evie soon that he loves her?  So close and yet so far,   come on Rob, spit it out!!  Can't wait for the Bafta's, sounds like it will be a good night.  Loved it all every chapter gets better and better. Have a lovely holiday and I will be waiting (im)patiently for the next chappy.  Jane x



Author's Response:

Robsblueeyes,

Phew indeed! I made myself blush writing that!  LOL! Glad you enjoyed it!  ;)

It's Bradley on the Orange adverts?!  I never realised!  Awww, loved Bradley!  Can't believe he left! 

Now, is Rob going to tell Evie that he loves her?  Hmmmn. Well we got close this chapter.  Next chapter?  Nope.  One after?  Hmmn...maybe...!  ;) I'm so happy you're still enjoying it!  I can't wait for the next few chapter to post! There's so much more to come! I have 29 chapters written so far, so I'm submitting a new one each time one has gone up.  My Beta is away at the moment, so there might be a little bit of a longer wait for the next one.  I'm as impatient as you are though, really I am! 

Thanks so much!

Duders x

Reviewer: Uglybear23 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Sunday's Are For...

oh my good god! man oh man what a chapter! I need a cold shower or something after all that! really, it was great. so many things to love about this one. you've really got a good thing going here dear, I love every chapter you put out. Evie and Rob are a pair and I love ittt. hope you enjoy your holiday! can't wait for more as always. :)



Author's Response:

Uglybear23,

Hehe! Thank you!  Twee got a wake up call and a half didn't she?! ;)

Why thank you so very much!  I'm ecstatic that you're enjoying it still!  I love writing Rob and Evie, and as long as people want to read them, I'll keep on putting them out there!

More on the way!

Duders

Reviewer: lil_jess (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Sunday's Are For...

I love the fact that your story is in England. I love our language like Bloody and little things like that. It's refreshing when most stories are American!! 

Confident Rob is very good!! Confidence is sexy so yea I like it when he takes charge.

The Bafta's should be interesting and I look forward to your update. Have a good holiday!!



Author's Response:

lil_jess,

I'm so pleased you like the English themes!  I couldn't write it any other way! 

Confident Rob continues to show up, mixed with the usual amount of goofiness that just has to be there though! ;)

The Bafta's are interesting...Update soon!  My Beta is away on holiday, but it's in the queue waiting for her!

Thank you!!

Duders

Reviewer: memepam (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Whiskey, Coneheads and Kisses

Well Well I never



Author's Response:

Oooh!  Hello again!

Duders

Reviewer: memepam (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Whiskey, Coneheads and Kisses

Well Well I never



Author's Response:

memepam,

Hehe!

Duders

Reviewer: memepam (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Red Cheeks and Clumsy Feet

I really like this story.I bet quite a few would behave the same way if we ever met Rob. Can wait to read the next chapter.



Author's Response:

memepam,

Ooooh!  A newbie to Rob and Twee!  I have to confess, when I met Rob, I totally ballsed up conversation wise!  It's what inspired me to write this story in the first place!  It's the eyes....they dazzle....

Hope you continue to enjoy!

Duders

Reviewer: Leprechaun (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Sunday's Are For...

Awesome chapter. I hope the real Rob get moments like this. I think he would really like your story. Gotta confess I was thrilled to see your update hit my email inbox. This is one of the stories that stays with me. Truly love these characters. So real and warm. Great job with character development. :)



Author's Response:

Leprechaun,

Thank you so much!  I really enjoyed writing their Sunday time together.  You think the real Rob would like my story?!! Crikey!!!  Do you know, I'd be so curious to actually hear what he thinks in more detail about his fan fics.  It must be weird!  I wonder if any of us have got him right? 

I love that my story stays with you!  Gosh!  It makes me smile so much!  I must admit, I didn't realise just how much I would become invested in these characters and what pleasure I would get out of writing them and seeing them grow together.  Character development was always paramount for me - I am all about the details.  It's so amazing to hear that people are enjoying them!  Evie is so very close to my heart.

Thank you!!

Duders

Reviewer: alexandra (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Sunday's Are For...

"Sundays are for".....some hot schmexin'!!!!!  Boy, I'd like to spend Sunday like Twee did!

Your trip was good?  Have a lot of fun?

 



Author's Response:

alexandra,

Yay! Sunday's are for....Pattinson wake up calls and shower naughties!  Yum!  Hehe! 

My trip was great thank you!  Lots of fun! 

Duders

Reviewer: Stello1 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 04:30 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Red Cheeks and Clumsy Feet

I love, love, love it! This chapter, the entire story... One of my favourites so far (and I´ve read a lot of ff....;-)..

 



Author's Response:

Stello1,

Wow!  THANK YOU!  One of your favourites?!  Ooooooh!  Thank you so much!

Duders

Reviewer: joss859 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Sunday's Are For...

Another amazing chapter! This Rob is just tugging on my heart strings like no other! I completly adore him. And I'm starting to wonder if Evie is good enough for him? Ohh, I'm getting all over protective! I just have the feeling that she is going to hurt him and I don't like that.

If only i wern't the most impatient person in the world. I want the next chapter NOW! and if Rob is going to be wearing a tux... words fail me. (as long as they don't you!)

REALLY enjoyed this chapter (in a need a ciggy kind of way) and REALLY looking forward to the next one.

 



Author's Response:

joss859,

Thank you!  Wow!  I love writing my Rob.  Sooooo happy you enjoy him!

Hmmmn, something tells me you're not going to be too happy with Evie next chapter....I may have to hide!  All I'll say is - stick with her please! Eeek! 

My wonderful Beta is on holiday at the moment.  I've submitted the next chapter, it's in the queue, waiting for her return.  Hopefully it won't be too long....I know how you feel though!  I want the next chapter up like NOW!  Hehe!

Thanks again!  And thank you for the stars!

Duders

Reviewer: mekent (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 11:41 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sunday's Are For...

Great update! loved the pattinson wake up call, his confidence around Evie is certainly starting to show more, which is just lovely! Can't wait to see more of that!

Hope you have a lovely little holiday!

x



Author's Response:

mekent,

Thank you so much!  He is gaining in confidence all the time with her.  Lots more to come of that later....(trip to Kent *nudge, nudge, wink, wink*).  Bit of a stumble in between though....

Had a great holiday thank you!  And thanks so much for continuing to let me know your thoughts.  It means loads really does!

Duders x

Reviewer: tgriffin (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sunday's Are For...

Why oh why does my alarm clock not come with a setting that will do THAT in order to wake me up? Seriously, I would have a much better start to my day with a Pattinson wake up call...

That was delicious...and I'm not talking about the bacon rolls! Those sounded like a heartattack on a plate...although I would probably also have a heartattack if Rob woke me up like that. The smexytimes...GUH. And seriously Clare, the description of him in the shower, I could so see his wonky legs giving out on him! The imagery was PERFECT!

Loved the teasing and the COMFORT they shared in the apartment...so sweet to see them just being. So cannot wait for Rob to man up and utter those 3 little words...when Twee is actually awake to hear them!

Hope you had a lovely holiday! And just so you know, the weather is cooling off here...there may be some Big Cups in your future!

Loved it!

~Tracy



Author's Response:

Tracy,

Hehe!  Yup, I wouldn't mind an alarm clock like that either!  Sod the Twinings tea, give me the Pretty any day! 

Yes, the bacon rolls were certainly not a healthy breakfast...Heart attacks all round, eh? ;)

Aww, you liked his wonky legs!  Hehe! I love his wonky legs...So pleased you got a visual there! 

The comfort - yes, it's all in their growing ability to just be themselves around one another.  And yeah, it's coming, he does man up - BIG TIME.  Not before Twee has a little meltdown though. 

Ooooooh! Big Cups!  Yay!  *Bounces up and down on sofa*  Can't wait! 

Duders x

Reviewer: GRLTRP (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sunday's Are For...

Great chapter, as usual! I am loving this story. Seems like this is how Rob would actually be in real life. So excited for the next update!!!!



Author's Response:

GRLTRP,

Ahhhhhhh! Thank you sooooo much!  See?  Every time someone says they imagine my story Rob to be how he might be in real life I just bounce around in delight on my sofa!  Hubs looks at me very strangely though...I really do try and write him as I see him. 

Update has been submitted, but my Beta is away at the moment.  Fingers crossed it won't be too long!

Duders

Reviewer: FrostysWiff08 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sunday's Are For...

*sigh* Okay, I think weird, awkward Rob is my favorite one so far. :)  I love that they can giggle and have fun together, even after a morning wake-up call like that! ;) (My husband and I giggle and have fun like that all the time - poking fun and picking on each other, and it's my favorite part of our relationship!)  

And bacon rolls!  What a good man!  I need a recipe for those! :)  I love that he wanted to serve her breakfast in bed too - so sweet.  Although, sweet Rob - don't you know that you NEVER cook bacon with no shirt?! :D 

Love it as usual, Duders.  Hope you're having a blast in Dubai!  We can't WAIT until you're back! 

xoxoxoxoxo



Author's Response:

FrostysWiffo8,

Hehe!  Do you know, I think weird, awkward Rob is one of my favourites too!  I really want to show both sides to their relationship - the growing intensity and overpowering attraction alongside the goofy, banter they enjoy together.  I banter a lot with my hubs too, and it makes life all the more sweeter! 

Rob's bacon roll recipe - Big, doughy white baps, lots of butter, ketchup, overdone crispy bacon.  Squish it together and voila!  Haha!  And I know, why on earth did he not put a shirt on?!  Silly boy! 

Thank you so much!!!

Duders x

Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sunday's Are For...

Love it!



Author's Response:

nsturms72,

Oooooh thank you so much!

Duders

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