Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 14 Huddle Up
yay they said it to one another!
Author's Response: Haha yeah, earlier than expected but it felt right to me there!
Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 14 Huddle Up
So happy to see that this story was updated! Love it so much. The I love you's are very sweet. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you! For now it'll update every two weeks but soon it'll be faster when my other story wraps up :) So happy you liked it!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 14 Huddle Up
I loved Edward's conversations with Jasper and Emmett. They were supportive and insightful. I'm glad that Edward has such amazing friends to guide his through this.
Author's Response: Thank you! I enjoy the boys interactions more than anything else I think :) They're good friends and know just what he needs. So happy you enjoy them along with me :)
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 06:48 AM · On: Chapter 14 Huddle Up
those guys are just too funny! I can't wait to read about Emmett hearing Edward's dick is bigger than his and the name is better! That'll be prieless!
Author's Response: Hahah I think that's a ways down the road but it will definitely happen :) Should be a blast. I love writing the boys!
Reviewer: viking (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 14 Huddle Up
I loved the chapter! Jasper and Emmett going all therapist on Eddie's ass was phenomenol!!!!! LOL!!!!! Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Haha thank you :) They were pretty good therapists and I feel that they probably do TIVO Oprah. hehe Not that they'd ever admit it!
So happy you liked it! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: roxnroll (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 04:58 AM · On: Chapter 14 Huddle Up
Ha!!! That Brett Farvre part w/Emmett was hillarious. That guy is such a douche (Brett not Em).
I'm so glad that the feelings are out in the open. I'm hoping that the game is next. Can't wait .
Rox
Author's Response: The game is next :) Gotta let her see him live and in person, as well as let Alice loose on a stadium full of people. Should be fun!
Brett is a douche and of course Em had to do something. There's no way he'd let a perfect pranking opportunity go by like that. So happy you liked it!
Reviewer: Soccer1023 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 04:21 AM · On: Chapter 14 Huddle Up
awesome. love how u brought the farve situation in for humor. priceless
Author's Response: Hehe I've been waiting to use that for a few weeks :) No way would Emmett let that go by without action! I loved it too :) So glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 14 Huddle Up
Great Chapter......
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it :)
Reviewer: kycee (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 14 Huddle Up
Yeah! They said their I love you's and nobody died or ran screaming into the night. I can't wait to see how Edward gets Emmett and Jasper with the whole Zues conversation. ;)
Author's Response: Haha nope! They were scared and that's why having it slip out was the best way to go I thought! All is well! Zeus will come up (giggles at the pun) at some point, I promise!
Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 13 Two Point Conversion
FINALLY SEX WITH EDWARD CULLEN STAR QUATER BACK OF THE ARIZONA CARDINALS YES!!!!!
Author's Response: Hahah sounds like something Bella was probably shouting in her head at the time :)
Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 12 Touchdown
HELL YES IT WAS THANK YOU I THINK I NEED A CIGARETTE AFTER THAT CHAPTER
Author's Response: Hahah thank you :) So glad you liked it! Sweet, sexy and funny :)
Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 11 Team Meeting
OMG IT WAS GREAT ROSE IS ALWAYS SO BAD ASS AND I LOVE THAT SHE KNOWS HER CARS SHE'S MY HERO
Author's Response: Haha Thank you! I was glad to finally bring her into the picture. She's very cool! Glad you liked her!
Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 10 Illegal Contact
GOD I LOVE ALICE THAT WAS PERFECT!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Haha Thank you! I was mighty proud of her this chapter :)
Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2010 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 9 First Down
THIS IS A GREAT STORY I LOVE FOOTBALL SO IT'S RIGHT UP MY ALLEY!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm having the best time combining my two loves together. I adore it :)
Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2010 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 8 Flag On The Play
WAITING WITH BAITED BREATH
Author's Response: Hehe you picked a good time to join up :)
Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2010 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 7 Second Down
THE COLTS,NEW YORK GIANTS UNLESS THEY ARE PLAYING THE COLTS BUT I WAS A DALLAS FAN IN THE 80'S I LOVED DANNY WHITE HE WAS THE QB AT THE TIME
Author's Response: Excellent. I love the Colts as well, truly love watching Manning play football. I'm cool with the Giants too! The Bucs are my main team but I love football period and can watch just about anybody (maybe not poor Buffalo, hehe)
Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2010 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 6 Kick Off
WOW THAT WAS INTERESTING AT LEAST SHE'S NOT DROPPING PANTIES AT THE FIRST KISS
Author's Response: Nope! I wanted to make this story more real and hot as he is, you don't sleep with a guy on the first date if you want it to go anywhere. And they both do :)
Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2010 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 5 Game On
GOD I LOVE THE PLAY CALLING EVEN THOUGH THE COLTS ARE MY FAVORITE I WOULD SACRIFICE THEM ANY DAY FOR EDWARD CULLEN
Author's Response: Hehe I love it! You're the second Colts fan that said that :) Glad you liked the football, I wanted some actually included in the fic!
Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 4 Pre Game Speech
WOW I FEEL THE TINGLES
Author's Response: I'm glad! They're very hot and sweet together :)
Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 3 Are You Sure You're Not a Kicker?
WOW THAT REALLY SUCKED ON BELLA'S PART
Author's Response: They were both kinda at fault there. He shouldn't have assumed she saw the napkin drop and she shouldn't have overreacted. I wanted to get potential issues out there right away :)
Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 2 Where It All Began
ALL RIGHT
Author's Response: Haha I hope so! :)
Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 1 Halftime
OMG THAT WAS GREAT HERE I WAS THINKING BELLA WAS GIVING IT UP QUICK FOR THE HOT STAR QUATER BACK EDWARD CULLEN WHEN THEVE BEEN DATING FOR 2 MONTHS HOT DAMN SHE DID WIN THE LOTTERY
Author's Response: haha yeah I didn't want to make them total sluts and I liked the idea that they were tied together. Glad I could surprise you! And she certainly did strike it rich! I want one!
Reviewer: Jenny Cullen (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 13 Two Point Conversion
Whew! Hot, sweet, and funny! :D
Author's Response: Thank you :) That's what I was hoping for!
Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 13 Two Point Conversion
God I want that shower...does the football player option cost extra? Great chapter.
Author's Response: Hehe I think I've had nearly as many comments about the shower as the sexing. And I'm totally on board with both! I think the football player option would cost a tad more, but it's totally worth the upgrade :)
Reviewer: zimphella (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 13 Two Point Conversion
Love this story! Like Alice I know nothing about football, but since I don't have a football playing Jasper or Edward, I have no desire to learn about it despite my father-in-laws attempts. I'm really enjoying this story and glad to see that Edward and Bella are on their way.
Author's Response: Haha well I'm glad you love it despite your lack of football interest! They're a lot of fun and so cute together and it's nice to have a story without angst I think. Hope you continue to enjoy it!
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