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Reviewer: ast (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2011 04:06 AM · On: Chapter 35 Grounding

oh don't let Esme have cancer and die or else I'll have to hate you!

 

waiting for your next update... hopefully you'll let her be fine after the number of threats you'll get for this i am sure.... ;)



Author's Response:

Hate me??? Harsh! hehe I love the Esme love, very much.  I promise you'll get answers in the next chapter ;)

Reviewer: VAMPIRE JO (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2011 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 35 Grounding

Poor Esme! I hope its nothing and her results are all clear! (you can whisper to me the results just now if you like?! I won't tell anyone!) OH and will Emmett ever find rose's little (Maybe not so little) friend? He still cracks me up!

Jo x



Author's Response:

Aww I know!  I won't keep you hanging on that for long!  I don't know, Rose is pretty scary.  I think even if he found it he'd be afraid to take it away :)

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2011 12:49 AM · On: Chapter 35 Grounding

Good Chapter....



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: fallen_panda_21 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2011 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 35 Grounding

What about the elbow?. . .I got a feelin'....

 

I love this story and I have been following it for awhile. Its plot is awesome and well-written, but the lemons are the best. Thank you!



Author's Response:

We'll address the elbow soon enough, but it's not his throwing arm which is a good thing.

I'm so glad you love it!  Especially the lemons.  Always nervous with those :)  Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2011 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 35 Grounding

Great chapter! Can't wait for more!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it!  Thank you :)

Reviewer: Nights Eternal Dream (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2011 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 35 Grounding

Wow the end of this chapter brought back memories... I did laugh while they opened Renee's gift though. i can't wait to find out Esme's diagnosis.



Author's Response:

I promise you won't have to wait long.  I'm glad you liked the gift!  SO much fun.  I won't have sadness for long, you know me!

Reviewer: renesmeebellward (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2011 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 1 Halftime

OMG I am like certifiably insane from the craziness that is the wait everyweek for a new update If I don't review next week you know where I am :) bye bye for now

Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2011 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 35 Grounding

wasn't expecting an illness, and it is scary for him and his family, but its great that Bella can help him through this while getting to see how much he cares about family. so glad he got his act together about the trash talk. :)



Author's Response:

Yeah, we never expect things like that.  I'm very glad he has Bella and he's coming along pretty well with dealing with the heat from their relationship!  Thanks for the review here and there!

Reviewer: Velvetwhispers (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2011 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 35 Grounding

i cant wait till next week (cries) ok ok ok i can wait but Damn the wait is agony and I only finished this chapter a moment ago .. ugg what am I gonna do.(smile) Anyway I gotta say i am so hung up on this story .

Author's Response:

I know!  I'm sorry!  I promise you won't have to wait long!  I'm glad you are hung up on it!  Thank you :)

Reviewer: need2read (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2011 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 35 Grounding

Wonderful chapter. I can so see Renee as a hippy with all her crystals. I'm always excited for more.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it!  It'll be fun when we finally meet her in person, which is coming :)  Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: ubuhall (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2011 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 34 Celebration Flag

DAMN, that was an awesome chapter!!!!!!!!!! Cullen parents in the kitchen (LOL), basically getting caught sexting my boyfriend's sex-crazed mom (LMAO), Bella catching glimpse of Zeus's dad (LMFAO), Rose calling bimbo waitress for Bella (ROFL), then finally the commercial & Bella saying those to special words!!  awwww, it was just awesome!! I loved it all, thanks so much for sharing with us & making me laugh my ass off!! TWO BIG THUMBS UP!!!  ~Tracey xoxox



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  Haha I had a blast writing it and there was so much fun to be had.  The horny parents, sexting, Zeus Sr., Emmett's pants. hehe The fun went on and on.  Really loved having the commercial back up and all the sweet times with E and B.  Thanks so much for the review.  So happy you liked it!

Reviewer: Velvetwhispers (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2011 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 34 Celebration Flag

i havent commented until now cause i been reading trying to catch up qand i finnaly am caught up
gotta say i am not a big football fan but OMG I love this story ,it's funny and sexy and very fun to read

Author's Response:

I have plenty of non-football fans reading and I love hearing from you!  I'm so glad you're enjoying it!  I try not to bog it down with the football but include enough to appeal to the football gals and guys as well.  I'm so happy you're having fun reading it.  That's the point!  Thanks for reviewing!  More soon!

Reviewer: ccslover22 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2011 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 34 Celebration Flag

So sweet.

Author's Response:

Thank you!  Having a blast with it!

Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2011 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 34 Celebration Flag

Thanksgiving is usually interesting in my family....we are getting ready to have a holiday tomorrow.  Passover at my sisters.  It should turn to be an interesting event.  I just love how you make Edward and Bella so very comfortable together.  It is certainly wonderful to see.  I especially loved the parts with Carlisle and Esme.  It just goes to show you that being married for years can still be interesting. I certainly hope so for myself.  That is what keeps the juices flowing.  THANKS FOR THE AWESOME READING.  Sher



Author's Response:

I hope you have a wonderful Passover!  I must say my family events are nowhere near as fun as this one, but we do have a good time anyway! 

I'm glad you enjoy my E&B.  They're wonderful together I think!

Carlisle and Esme are enjoying that empty nest aren't they? :) 

Thanks for your kind words!  Have a great Passover tomorrow!

Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2011 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 33 Gaining Ground

Hmmmm movie night with this hot Edward Cullen.  Seems like an easy answer to me.  Very well done.  THANKS FOR THE AWESOME READING.  Sher



Author's Response:

Haha glad you enjoyed it!  Pretty good evening all in all!

Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2011 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake, The Second String

Once in a while, it is certainly good to hear from Rose......Surely, most people don't allow her to shoff her stuff......But she surely does give women a good name.  She just tells it like it is and it is about time.  I really enjoyed reading and THANKS FOR THE AWESOME WRITING.  Sher



Author's Response:

Thanks hon!  I had fun letting Rose get a say. She has a wicked sense of humor and does tell it like it is.  Thanks so much for reading! :)

Reviewer: kycee (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2011 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 34 Celebration Flag

Yes I enjoyed the Cullen Thanksgiving, I just wish I could see that commercial.  I wonder if renee and Charlie were watching that channel.  ;)



Author's Response:

I wish I could see it as well.  I think even if they weren't, they're bound to run across it soon!  So glad you enjoyed it, thank you :)

Reviewer: StarryLuna (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2011 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 34 Celebration Flag

Awwww....mush mush. :-)  So sweet.  I did about fall out of my chair laughing when Brett Favre emailed Emmett though!  Love this and you, as always!



Author's Response:

Hehe Brett is not happy with Emmett.  Too funny that I brought him up and Sterger reappears crying all over TV. 

Sweet and funny, just what I was going for :)

Love you too!  Thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: pinklady34 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2011 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 34 Celebration Flag

just caught all up in this story and i really have to say that this story is a perfect 10!  i am just wondering if we are going to read anything about james finally showing up.  bella's reaction in seeing him again and it would be awesome to see james try and get bella to go out with him, maybe hit on her in front edward.  i think it's edward's turn to see how it feels like to have your girl being hit on in front of him, only fair!  and yes i want him to punch the living day light out of him. 

 

love the charlie and renee conversation about bella moving in.  that was hilarious!  i can't wait for those two to meet.



Author's Response:

Haha Thank you!  I have no plans to bring James back but I think we'll see some jealous Edward again at some point.  Bella's got the public eye on her now and she's bound to get some attention :)

Charlie/Renee are a blast to write!  They'll be meeting shortly! 

Thanks so much for the review!  I'm so glad you like it!

Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2011 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 34 Celebration Flag

this was very very good keep going and post soon

bye bye



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it :)  I'll post soon!  TY

Reviewer: roxnroll (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2011 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 34 Celebration Flag

Awww!!! The end was so sweet!!! I absolutely love Carlisle and Esme... they are just one Hot couple. Who says that just because you're older that you can't still get busy??????

Can't wait to read more.

Rox



Author's Response:

Haha yeah it was!  Carlisle and Esme are so much fun to write ;)  Darn right!  They've got an empty nest, they need to have some fun!

 

Thanks so much for the review :)  See you soon with more!

Reviewer: Tina02 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2011 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 34 Celebration Flag

Great chapter.
This chapter had me laughing at some parts.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it and that you were laughing :)  Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: lbb83 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2011 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 34 Celebration Flag

THANK YOU THANK YOU i got my emmett time he is great !!!! esme and carlisle are to funny i love the way they are in this story !!! cant wait for the next update !!!



Author's Response:

Haha I'm glad I could you give you some Emmett time.  He's such a blast! 

Carlisle and Esme make me giggle to.  They're so very in love!

Thanks so much for the review!  See you soon with more :)

Reviewer: ECsfan (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2011 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 34 Celebration Flag

Oh how I love this chapter!!!! Can't get enough of Esme & Carlisle!!! OMG!!! How damn funny is Emmett & his MC Hammer pants!!!!!! Edward's toast was perfection!!!! Best chapter ever!!! Can't wait for more!!!!

Renee`



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you loved it!  It's fun getting the whole gang together!  Esme and Carlisle are so much fun aren't they?

Hammer pants are a must for any occasion.

Edward's toast killed me ;)  I got all teary.

Thanks for all the love, Renee!  It means so much to me :)

Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2011 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 34 Celebration Flag

Great chapter! Thanksgiving was a blast. I don't blame Esme; if Carlisle was my husband, I'd be all over him all the time too. Emmett in the Hammer pants was hilarious. Bella really does need to learn her music if she doesn't know who MC Hammer is though. Can't wait for more!!



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it!  Darn right, if you've got a Carlisle wanting you in your apron, you have it!

Emmett's Hammer pants kill me.  I love them so much!  They're younguns, remember. hehe Hammer was past his prime by the time Bella and Alice were into music!

Thanks so much for the review :)  More soon!

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