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Reviewer: lain16 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2010 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 4 Pre Game Speech
great chapter, happy that they met again and sorted some stuff out
Author's Response: Thank you! I promise I don't really do angst, at least not for long! I prefer my characters to actually talk like real people :)
Reviewer: streetgurl (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 4 Pre Game Speech
great chapter!!! reallly liking this edward, his confidence is sexy. and picturing him all hot and sweaty in a football uniform......ugh! YUMMY
Author's Response: Hee, I'll have him uniformed and sweaty in no time! I can't wait! I'm glad you like him. He's definitely a decent guy despite being blessed in the talent and looks department. Yummy is a good word for him, I agree :) Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: deleepowman (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 4 Pre Game Speech
What a pleasure it is to read a story about a genuine couple who knows how to communicate and not run away from confrontation. Very light, fun, easy reading and best of all little angst.
Author's Response: Thank you! I don't plan on this being angsty at all. It's time to have a little romance and fun. They may argue and they may piss one another off but they will communicate! I'm glad you liked it, truly! I need a pick me up story so I'm writing it! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: HPsharpie123 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 4 Pre Game Speech
Can't wait for the next chapter ! Love, Love, Love it soo much!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying it! I'll get you a new chapter as soon as I can :)
Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 4 Pre Game Speech
Edward is so sweet...I love that he realizes that he has a connection to Bella even in her messy, hungover state. I'm happy that they worked things out and it didn't drag out. It's interesting knowing that the prologue is in the middle of the story but it's a cute/happy thing to look forward to instead of an angsty one.
I love the thought of Edward being tan (instead of pasty since he's not a vamp) and, of course, muscular because he's a football player. Yum.
--Melanie
Author's Response: Ha, yeah I didn't figure Edward would be all that pasty living in Arizona! And he's definitely got more muscles and a little less lean. All man!!
Well this was initially going to be a one shot and I had the option of either forging ahead from where it started or going back and showing how they got together and then moving ahead and that's what I took. I figured we all love a good falling in love story...hopefully that's what I'm writing :) Either way, I'm having fun!
This story will have minimal angst as promised, and even when they have issues, I plan on them working through them together like a real couple would do, instead of breaking up at contrivances! Hopefully you guys will like that! Thanks for reviewing ;)
Reviewer: kandyg (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 4 Pre Game Speech
i realy like this story cant wait for next update
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll get you an update as soon as I can. I have to do another chapter of Taste and then I can tackle this one ;)
Reviewer: gracebella (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 4 Pre Game Speech
great chapter!! Edward is so sweet. He actes civil even she was still bitch to him.lol looking forward to meeting Emmett at the next chapter.
Author's Response: Haha well he likes her and he gave her a chance to explain. They were both in the wrong, which I like, rather than having one fo them be the total bad guy.
I look forward to writing Emmett, I always have fun with him :) Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 4 Pre Game Speech
I am so glad that they talked and worked things out. It was a relief that their misunderstanding wasn't drug out.
Alice was great. She made me laugh.
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like Alice! I wanted her to be fun and nonannoying and so far I think she is :) That makes me happy!
I will never drag out a misunderstanding, I like fun and romance, not angst. I mean, I like angst but I can't write it. So it's good times ahead! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 4 Pre Game Speech
great chapter! i can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm glad you liked their little talk!
Reviewer: oreocookiesandmilk (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 1 Halftime
Can't wait for the next chapters!! :)
Author's Response: Awww thank you :) I hope you like them! I'll be working on the next one this week :)
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2010 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 3 Are You Sure You're Not a Kicker?
ah you and your atory own me
Author's Response: :) That's so sweet....and liable to give me a power trip! I'm glad you are enjoying it though! I'll be working on a new chapter this week! Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: oreocookiesandmilk (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2010 04:30 AM · On: Chapter 1 Halftime
This is sooo awesome, I loved the twist! Can't wait to read more :) ---Sorry I just read the first chapter and I had to review it already :)
Author's Response: Ha, never apologize for leaving a review! I live for them, I swear :) I'm glad you enjoyed the twist! Hope you like the rest!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 05:39 AM · On: Chapter 3 Are You Sure You're Not a Kicker?
I am really liking this. I am loving their chemistry and can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it so far! I'll try to get you an update pretty soon! I love the two of them together as well.
Reviewer: gracebella (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 3 Are You Sure You're Not a Kicker?
Interesting story!!
But what the hell Bella!? What she had done is so rude. If they were in date it is maybe acceptable but they aren't. They just met for Christ sake. He is not hers to claim. I think I'm not surprise if it take time to earn his trust back. she owe him that. great chapter! update soon.
Author's Response: She overreacted, no doubt about it. Her insecurites leaked out right away because she felt that draw to him and wasn't sure how to deal with it. I decided to bring their issues out in the early going rather than get them together and have them come out. I'd rather them deal and then get to good the stuff :)
Glad you liked it! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: lain16 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 3 Are You Sure You're Not a Kicker?
stupid bimbos interrupting something good,i know it will be fixed up soon though
Author's Response: It will! I can't leave those two apart for long :)
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 3 Are You Sure You're Not a Kicker?
GREAT JOB
Author's Response: Thank you my friend, for here & there! :)
Reviewer: polkadots90 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 3 Are You Sure You're Not a Kicker?
Great story, I love it when theres a little angst! Can't wait for future updates!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I can do a little but I can't do a lot! How people write heartbreak for chapter after chapter is beyond me. :) I can read it when I'm in the right mood but I sure can't write it! Glad you're liking it so far!
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 3 Are You Sure You're Not a Kicker?
i'm glad that the first chapter gives a glimse into the future because i want them to end up together, so hopefully they get over this misunderstanding soon.
Author's Response: They will! I'm definitely not much of an angst writer and I'm certainly not going to drag out a down time. It was important to bring their hangups to the table so they can build their relationship already knowing what issues they have, rather than finding out after and breaking up and getting back together. I don't like that! :)
Reviewer: kivacute (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 3 Are You Sure You're Not a Kicker?
groupies ruin everything dont they?
Author's Response: Hee, that they do. It's definitely something she'll have to get used to in order to date him though, even if they both hate it!
Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 3 Are You Sure You're Not a Kicker?
I'd be pissed if I was Bella, too, even if it was a misunderstanding! Your B/E are cute together--and very different from your other story, which I'm also enjoying!
Author's Response: I think this is one of those situations where they both have the right to feel slighted. She knew that he was leery of the whole journalism thing and turned it against him out of anger. She, of course, was pissed about the girl but instead of asking him, just lashed out. Both were in the wrong in their own ways. I'm glad you like them together.
Hee, yeah this story is very different from Taste! I'm having fun playing in the different groupings, sometimes all at once. Did my Canonesque AU, completely different AU and now AH. :) I like it!
Reviewer: deleepowman (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 3 Are You Sure You're Not a Kicker?
Come on now Edward, remember that you took the napkin and Bella saw you.
Wonder if Alice will tell Jasper and japer will tell Edward and then Edward will call Bella or vice versa
Author's Response: Yeah but he didn't really think about it. He knew he got rid of the napkin and he was really just trying to make the girl go away. One of those simple misunderstandings. How it gets resolved? You'll see soon!
Reviewer: jadeeyre (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 1 Halftime
That is an AWESOME chapter!!! i love twists like that! always fun!
Author's Response: :) Wow, thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! The response has been amazing!
Reviewer: kivacute (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 2 Where It All Began
ooo i wanna know more bout how they met!
Author's Response: I'll be sending out a new chapter this week! Thanks so much for reading!
Reviewer: deleepowman (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 2 Where It All Began
What great introductions, you have a great storyline going here
Author's Response: Thank you! I love football and writing so why not combine the two? I'd love to be a sportswriter...le sigh. I'll have a new chapter up soon so you can see how they're interaction went!
Reviewer: TigerGirl (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 2 Where It All Began
I am loving this so far! I am glad you are extending the story past the one shot.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll have a new chapter for you in a day or two. Love writing for QBward ;)
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