Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2008 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 4:Texan Twangs and Salad Dressing
excelllent... now write more please and thank you
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2008 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 3: Pwetty as a Little Pwincess
write... faster.. lol
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2008 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 2: James and Close Encounters of the Sexy Kind
bwahahahaha.. ok so i love it even more now.... if this story just drops off the face of the earth i will cry
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2008 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 1: Five Years Ago to the Present
im not so big on all human AU but i like this story and i hoep it keeps going
Reviewer: MuffNbutter (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2008 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 6: Slow Dances and Awkward Glances
hahahahah!!! Freaking TANYA and Charlie! Wonderful! I think that might be my favorite Twilght pairing EVER! XDXDDDDD
Reviewer: justagirl (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2008 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 6: Slow Dances and Awkward Glances
Aw, I really like Jasper... I hope he eventually gets the girl. In the meantime, this little love square is fun :) Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Shdwcat27 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 6: Slow Dances and Awkward Glances
Sweet. I loved pissed off Edward and yummy Jasper. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: Scarlett_Letters (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 12:43 AM · On: Chapter 6: Slow Dances and Awkward Glances
This is sinfully delicious! I like the couples mix-up (I'm a Jasper/Bella fan on the side) and the snarky dialogue is wonderful. I Heart this story!
Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 12:23 AM · On: Chapter 6: Slow Dances and Awkward Glances
I almost started liking James, thought that maybe he wasn't all games and shit, but naw, he had to go and do Victoria while on host patrol, what a dick! Edward, well he's just an idiot., self centerd bastard. But Jasper, sigh, is soo.. sweet and sexy. I have to tell you I was friggin giddy when I seen that you updated, I've been watching this story and waiting. So PLEASE PLEASE don't go hiatus on me, I seriously have been checking daily for an update, I'd be so sad(does the "Alice" pout) Oh and the Charlie and Tanya twist, well that was just some funny sick shit I must say! Hilarious! Oh, I really do kinda hope that Bella and Jasper hook up. He's just too sweet to trade in for douchebag fuckktard Edward.
Reviewer: rectangle_curve (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 1: Five Years Ago to the Present
i love this, because personally, i'm in love with Jasper. people ask me 'why Jasper?' all the time, and it's because i imagine him like this. keep writing!
Reviewer: bubblebum black (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 6: Slow Dances and Awkward Glances
ung. i love your jasper like how i love janna banana's. instead of thinking "what about edward?" i think, "this makes perfect sense and of course it's jasper!" they fit. and i hope bella's not too hard on james. awesome chapter! worth the wait!
Reviewer: lrynmjv (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 6: Slow Dances and Awkward Glances
I love it!!! What is going to happen next between Jasper and Bella??
Reviewer: LovesSparkles (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 6: Slow Dances and Awkward Glances
wowza - James really blew it - and Bella seems to actually like Jasper, not just as someone to use to piss off Edward. Ew, Charlie and Tanya. haha. update soon!
Reviewer: Alylyn (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 6: Slow Dances and Awkward Glances
I love this chapter. Please right more, becuase I am an addict!
Reviewer: Lanemyer (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 6: Slow Dances and Awkward Glances
YAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAYYYYYYYAAAAAYYYYY!!!!!!! Epicly, epicly AWESOME!!!!!!! So I have read a LOT of ff and I have to say yours is my all time, number one favorite of all time!!! (And just so you know that is special.) Ahhhhhh *sighs* I love you. xx
Reviewer: Twilighter 4 Life (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 6: Slow Dances and Awkward Glances
oooh I love it! I love that Edward is getting his ass handed to him. GO TEAM JASPER! (at least for right now) lol
Reviewer: iglitterinthesun (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 6: Slow Dances and Awkward Glances
Okay, so I might have sat here and read this whole damn thing in one sitting. Call me an addict. Can't wait for the next!!
Reviewer: Bae319 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 6: Slow Dances and Awkward Glances
The Bronze? Friggin' awesome! You described it just like it was on Buffy too. Love that show. Great story so far.
Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: November 25, 2008 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 6: Slow Dances and Awkward Glances
YEEEEEE!!! I LOVE Jasper and Bella together!! They are GENIUS!!
Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: November 25, 2008 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 5: Confrontations and Conversations
All around mourning for the Buffster, thank you for reviving a long-lost hot spot!! (my sister wrote a lot of killer Buffy fanfics, we are big fans!) I am so totally into this crazy little world - I love being able to enjoy James without the "he's going to kill me" fear!!
Reviewer: obsidian (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 05:31 AM · On: Chapter 6: Slow Dances and Awkward Glances
first off, i HATE that axe shit that guys wear these days. it smells awful and i swear they fucking use more then i do hairspray.
secondly, usually i abhor anyone but Edward with Bella and i am loving Jasper with her. mostly because Edward's a douche but it works haha.
Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 03:56 AM · On: Chapter 3: Pwetty as a Little Pwincess
Hmm. I'm not so sure I like Bella being so cocky.. but I suppose it's fitting very well with the story, after all she does want to get Edward back for all those awful things he did to her... I'm waiting to see how this will all play out. :)
Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 1: Five Years Ago to the Present
I really enjoyed this chapter, I love the way you included Esme's point of view.
Reviewer: bspest04 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 6: Slow Dances and Awkward Glances
wow, that was so great that i don't even know where to start! i sincerely hope that you continue with this story because it is freaking awesome. strangely enough, i actually really like the whole jasper and bella thing going on. im usually 100% ExB, but i love what you're doing right now. Can i just say, ew to finding your parent scantly clad with someone else... ew, but hilarious! Cant wait for the next update!
Reviewer: Wordy (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 03:12 AM · On: Chapter 6: Slow Dances and Awkward Glances
carpet munching, pantomime sex, how do you come up with such great lines? This story is "the grin on the face all day story". I seem to chuckle to myself when going over the fantastic one liners. The morning after will be interesting, the chances of E bumping into B in the kitchen have got to be high..... I hope. Does this mean HE is now the double dipper... he he
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