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Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2008 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 8: Bikini Strings and Testing
Whoever or however Edward gets redeemed will have to be pretty major. Gah, he's got little in the way of morals nowadays it seems. Spreading evil rumors, geez the guy didn't learn a thing from what he did to Bella years ago did he? I bet his parents are so unhappy. I love Laurent, so happy to see his appearance. And the test - so sneaky!! Loved it!
Reviewer: sweetmahogany (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2008 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 8: Bikini Strings and Testing
I love it...it's so out of character for Edward, but I love to hate him in your story! I so want Jasper and Bella to hook up, I know that would piss Edward the fuck off. I would love to see his face if he walked in on them actually sexing it up, I'm sure that would be priceless! I can't wait to read the next chapter! Great story!!
Reviewer: mamagrace (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2008 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 8: Bikini Strings and Testing
Well, this was fun! I enjoyed Edward getting caught in his lie. At this point I don't want B & E to end up together ... he's too much of a jerk.
Reviewer: youraisemeup (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2008 04:42 AM · On: Chapter 8: Bikini Strings and Testing
8D are you kidding me? i'm lovin' edward getting put in his place for being a complete and total asshole. if he gets redeemed, please let him become gay and end up with laurent or something. 'cos that sounds totally cool, without disrupting the jasper/bella. though i'm loving james/bella too, jasper is still my homeboy. :D
Reviewer: Jencrane (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2008 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 8: Bikini Strings and Testing
That was amazing! The test was so funny, Edward is such a dick! I can't wait for you to update again. You have a real talent.
Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2008 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 8: Bikini Strings and Testing
Great chapter. I cracked up at the end. Poor Edward has foot in mouth disease! Update again soon. This story rocks!
Reviewer: venomousgal (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2008 02:23 AM · On: Chapter 8: Bikini Strings and Testing
Ohhh Edward is a assbag! STD's.....can you scream jealousy much? LOL! Great chapter!
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2008 01:52 AM · On: Chapter 8: Bikini Strings and Testing
That was fricking priceless! LOVED what Laurent did and Edward is such an ASS!! Cannot wait for more!!! Awesome job!
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2008 01:29 AM · On: Chapter 8: Bikini Strings and Testing
hahahah, Edward cannot catch a break. I am glad it´s laurent instead of Jacob, a nice change. Great update!
Reviewer: obsidian (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2008 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 8: Bikini Strings and Testing
seriously fucking love it. i even love doucheward. god, what is it with us girls? turn on a little britney and we all get gay and slutty! lmao i miss it.
Reviewer: NyteRock (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2008 12:04 AM · On: Chapter 8: Bikini Strings and Testing
"I think it's safe to say you failed"
Omg, I about died at that line. Awesome! Update soon.
<333
Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 8: Bikini Strings and Testing
wow great story line. alice being lesbian has me cracking up!! cant wait for another chapter!
Reviewer: Morgan (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 8: Bikini Strings and Testing
This is great!
Reviewer: Wordy (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 8: Bikini Strings and Testing
I love the fact that Edward is having a hard time......Wish Jaz would man up a bit, though i get that he is nervous around B. Now that another man is in the mix i wonder how he will copy.
Any chance of seeing more of alice and angela it makes a change to see her with someone else?
Thank you so much for updating, Any chance of another chapter before christmas? :)
Reviewer: lambTOslaughter (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 1: Five Years Ago to the Present
I love this story! I'm rooting for Jasper but I love James too... What a sweetheart you made him into! And yeah Cam is hot. Jackson is too! Great story, keep writin =)
Reviewer: Annaleah (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 8: Bikini Strings and Testing
I am really enjoying this so far. Rock on for strong Bella. jasper is adorable, but I have to say...I am a serious sucker for James (cause I always fall for the arrogant but nice, chiseled athlete, and cause in real life...Cam Gigandet is HOTT). Edward can suck it, at least for now while he's still being an ass. As for the friend-in-shining-armor, I figured it would be Laurent, but I was half prepared for it to be Jake. Anywho, this is interesting and I really like how we aren't sure where it is headed, the surprises and the many men keep it fresh and exciting. Keep it up, I look forward to more.
AL
Reviewer: AppleDarling (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 8: Bikini Strings and Testing
haha, i have to say that it would be good times if it was an "edward is a dick and gets schooled every chapter" story, but it still is good times, so it really doesnt matter. its just funny to watch him get owned at everything.
oh, btw, IFREAKINGLOVETHISSTORY. =]
Reviewer: zess (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 8: Bikini Strings and Testing
Oh you got me! I wasn't expecting Laurent! Sneaky. :)
Reviewer: lily_zen (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 8: Bikini Strings and Testing
I vote that there is no redemption for Edward with Bella.... Well, I take that back. Maybe they can be friends. BUT I am all for this Jasper/Bella love affair. It's making me nostalgic for my first love. XDD
Reviewer: Britt01 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 8: Bikini Strings and Testing
LOLOL Go Laurent! Nice job:)
As long as Edward is being a prick, he should get schooled. Not that I expect him to ever be completely reformed, but somebody needs to finally call him on all of his shit like this. I like Bella with this Jasper, and I don't think it would be too weird in this story for Edward to end up with someone else. Could it be Newton or Yorkie? No? LOLOL Just as well ;) ewwwww <shudder>
I like how you have the James & Bella story going, with them having to deal with their folks. Things like that make this a nicely balanced story, substance along with fluff. I also like that you have unique descriptions. I am a bit sick of Bella's strawberry & freesia smell - I like that you made her minty - and that Jazz was the one trying not to sniff her hair that time. You are also good with not using other stock descriptors - I don't think that you've used "pixie" or "teddybear" at all - thank you thank you thank you.....*g*
Reviewer: LaurenCullen (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 1: Five Years Ago to the Present
Just discovered this story. Love it. Added it to my favorites. Hope you reward with another chapter soon.
Reviewer: Britt01 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 7: Vinyl and Interruptions
It's gotta be Laurent...? I like this chapter - a good mix of bravado, uncertainty, angst and fun. Can't wait to find out who is on the phone. And what Jasper will do...
Reviewer: Britt01 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 6: Slow Dances and Awkward Glances
Ewww Ewww Ewwwww!!! Great excuse for them B & J to go to J's place though. Great scene at the club, especially with Alice being helpful "FYI" LOL
Reviewer: Britt01 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 5: Confrontations and Conversations
Too many good lines to count. Just enjoying this totally!
Reviewer: Britt01 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 4:Texan Twangs and Salad Dressing
Ohh, good one! Tell me what you deserve. Love it. And LOVE Bella setting up Rose & Emmett. I LIKE this Bella *g*
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