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Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 4:Texan Twangs and Salad Dressing

Okay, great payback, BUT--doesn't that bring her down to Lauren's level?  I guess in high school the eye for an eye thing is key to survival, but I'm just hoping there's still some sweet good Bella in there too.  Maybe Jasper will bring it out or see that side?

Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 3: Pwetty as a Little Pwincess

Great fuck-you scene.  I hope Bella will retain a little of the innocent girl she was at 12 and that she doesn't become consumed with the need for revenge.  Because that would be allowing Cullen to still have an awful lot of power in her life.

Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 2: James and Close Encounters of the Sexy Kind

If only they had a store labeled that, it would save me a lot of trouble.


 


Great line.


 


I love this premise.  Interesting to note that Edward toned it down after she left.

Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 1: Five Years Ago to the Present

Wow--great premise for a story.  And the conversations between Esme and Charlie and Esme and Edward were excellent.  Then to find out he actually liked her.  Wow.  I can't wait to read on and am so glad there are so many chapters!

Reviewer: tonks-shadow (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 10: Silk Robes and Car Cables

thats right edward, feel the guilt you jackass

 

and no!! why did you leave a spoiler like that!!!

im dying over here. please update soon i NEED to know what happens

Reviewer: MusicJunkie (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 10: Silk Robes and Car Cables

It's such a strange twist to have Jasper climbing through that window instead of Edward! lol

I am becoming very nervous at the prospect of this Maria chick coming into town... I don't like it one bit! 

You ABSOLUTELY MUST UPDATE SOOOOOON! Please please puh-LEASE! *insert extreme pouty face*

Reviewer: MusicJunkie (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 9: Linen Closets and Calls Accepted

"But what a sexy store it would be..."  Indeed!

And Oh nooooo! Not Maria!

You devilish lady, you...

I can't wait to witness the emergence of Edward's more... amiable qualities.

Reviewer: MusicJunkie (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 8: Bikini Strings and Testing

AHHHH! I LOVED Laurent's introduction!  Perfect.  I love him already.

Poor Edward for failing the best friend's test so MISERABLY.

Reviewer: MusicJunkie (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 7: Vinyl and Interruptions

Damn Edward = 'cockblock extraordinaire'! Haha.

My guess is it's Laurent she's calling, but who knows?!

 

Reviewer: MusicJunkie (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 6: Slow Dances and Awkward Glances

"My God, just hand your balls in at the door, you are turning into a chick."

Awww, Jasper! I heart you!

And a most affectionate "Ewww" to Charlie in boxers with lingerie-clad Tanya! Poor Bella... lol.

Reviewer: MusicJunkie (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 5: Confrontations and Conversations

The flirty, horny banter between Bella and James entertains me to no end.

And Bella's brazen comments to Jasper still catch me a bit off-guard... and I like it!  Still hoping for Jasper's heart to remain in tact when all is said and done...

Can't wait to read about their evening at the Bronze!

Reviewer: MusicJunkie (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 4:Texan Twangs and Salad Dressing

Oooo, I like ballsy Bella!

I'm really hoping that Jasper doesn't get hurt in the course of all of this...  With his secret crush, his blurted apologies, and little smiles, I just want to forgive him for not having the balls to stick up to his best friend!

GAH! Must read on! :D

Reviewer: MusicJunkie (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 3: Pwetty as a Little Pwincess

“Stop, please. If you say one more perfect thing I’ll have to bend you over the closest desk.”  HAHAHA!  I literally laughed out loud at that one.  Having James play such a welcome part in Bella's scheming is quite intriguing. Mmm, soccer players... :)

"Oh, and Lauren. Bitch’s ass was mine."  Oo, I can't wait to see what the girls have in store for that one! :D

Reviewer: MusicJunkie (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 2: James and Close Encounters of the Sexy Kind

Haha! I have never read a story that had Alice... batting for the other team!  Love it!  Or Laurent, for that matter. I think it's perfect that you made him her fashion-fabulous friend.

I'm interested to see the whole, Bella-goes-for-Jasper thing play out. :)

Reviewer: MusicJunkie (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 1: Five Years Ago to the Present

Oh, man, I really didn't want to start this story since I could see that it wasn't completed yet! So I told myself... just one chapter to see what it's all about.

HA!  Reading on! :D

Reviewer: EmmBonn (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 10: Silk Robes and Car Cables

Oh my gosh please update soon you're killing me here!

Reviewer: hull_girl_1989 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 1: Five Years Ago to the Present

loving this story plz continue with it xxx

Reviewer: VloodSucker (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 10: Silk Robes and Car Cables

OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD!!!!!!! Sorry, new reader, just read this from start to finish and i love it!! Can you please please please please give me just a litttle clue as to whether Bella and Edward actually hook-up??!! I love Jasper and all, but i live for bad boys, a little flaw of mine... xx

Reviewer: VAMPiREGiRL218 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2009 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 10: Silk Robes and Car Cables

I"m a new reader!

OMG i love this story. Your writing style draws me in. LOL on how you said that Edward sounds like comic book villain. I'm sure he must have some depth if Jasper & him have stayed friends for so long. 

Jasper is great in this story. Bella reminds me of me...lol. Needless to say I love her character. I'm glad she got into a relationship with Jazz. I'm interested to see what she will do with Maria. Stupid biatch...she thinks she can do what she wants with Jazz. No wonder she gets along with Edward. Grrrrrr. 

 

Update soon!! This story is going in my favorites =)

Reviewer: MyBrownEyes (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2009 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 10: Silk Robes and Car Cables

I love this story. Jasper and Bella are cute in this chapter. But then the night is ruined...by Edward.  I'm sad, but excited....I'm a fan of Edward/Bella relationship more than Jasper/Bella...so can't wait to see if and when we get there. But Edward is just going about it all wrong to break them up...ugh...when will he learn.

Can't wait to see the drama unfold! What will Bella do to keep Jasper!?

Reviewer: saranic (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2009 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 10: Silk Robes and Car Cables

Great story...can't wait for an update!

Reviewer: pixieyow (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2009 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 10: Silk Robes and Car Cables

what is edward going to do....tisk tisk tisk

 

great update!!!!!

Reviewer: Mamasebring (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 10: Silk Robes and Car Cables

Your Edward is such a Chuck Bass. I LOVE IT!

Reviewer: Knox (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 1: Five Years Ago to the Present

I cried for joy at this stronger and confident Bella. If anything else, I despise weak girls like she is protrayed in other fanfics and now your my hero :] 

Reviewer: Sunshine83 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 10: Silk Robes and Car Cables

I LOVE your story!! Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

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