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Reviewer: ikecheer24 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 12: Lamb Chop and Dilemmas

YAY I'm glad you updated I missed this story! =)

Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 12: Lamb Chop and Dilemmas

Dang nice teaser!

Reviewer: rectangle_curve (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 12: Lamb Chop and Dilemmas

I love Jasper and Bella together.  I'm fearful for what's going to happen in their relationship!

Reviewer: memegan_rox (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 12: Lamb Chop and Dilemmas

hahahaha, i love the teaser!! i seriously can not wait for you to post it :)

Reviewer: cindysark (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 12: Lamb Chop and Dilemmas

I'm not sure if you're going to keep Jasper and Bella together in this story or if you are going for Edward/Bella at some point but I have to say I'm enjoying the J/B while it lasts. I realize the shit is about to hit the fan but they're all kinds of hot together in this story. Not that Edward and Bella wouldn't be hot too....damn...

Reviewer: saranic (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 12: Lamb Chop and Dilemmas

Awwww, so sweet.  I am sure it will be quite the drama since we got this chappie .  Love this story, can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: MyBrownEyes (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 12: Lamb Chop and Dilemmas

Awww! Bella and Jasper are pretty cute together. But a sense trouble brewing since Maria came back. Is Bella going to get her heartbroken?

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 12: Lamb Chop and Dilemmas

Arrrggghh!  the chapter itself wasn't a cliffie, but your teaser was!!!  I loved it up until then!!

Added to that, I'm totally caught up :(  so now I need you to update right away.

Emm please???

Reviewer: Rinalysee (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 12: Lamb Chop and Dilemmas

I can't help but hope for the worst between J/B. I'm still routing for Edward. I had to skip the lemon though, hope you understand. I am wondering if he's redeemable by this point. Bella's too enraptured with Jasper. I honestly hope Edward can and will show Bella his a good guy.

Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 12: Lamb Chop and Dilemmas

Ah!  I wanted her to say it!

Reviewer: Kellie (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 12: Lamb Chop and Dilemmas

AHHH! Seriously? no more? I just read the whole thing thus far, and am sitting here DYING to know what happenes, but not wanting the story to end... but I have to know!!! I got so caught up while reading this.. you should have SEEN me cursing at my computer when it decided to freeze up on me after ch 11... PRETTY please update with more! I am LOVING Bella and Jasper together! The writting is awesome, the story is supurb... I neeeed more!

Reviewer: makovitza (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 12: Lamb Chop and Dilemmas

Great update. Loving the happy ending (yeah, I'm a hopeless romantic) even though I know it's not going to last. Oh, and for the record - your Jasper is soooooo hot!! :-D

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 11: Laughing Games and Melodrama

Still on board.  Not sure who I want bella to end up with though, that's how mindfucked I am by this story!!

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 10: Silk Robes and Car Cables

Hmmmmmm getting me all hot and bothered and leaving??  Who's the clockblocker now ???  LOL

another great chapter..

Reviewer: vickitori303 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 12: Lamb Chop and Dilemmas

Uh-oh it sounds like shit is going to hit the fan in the next chapter.
I think Bella has changed since meeting Jasper and she isn't willing to give herself to just anyone anymore. So that was a special moment for her especially since she loves him. I understand her fear of him not reciprocating, she has never felt like this before.
Great chapter.

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 9: Linen Closets and Calls Accepted

Oh shit!  How can dickwad have any good redeeming qualities???  This story reminds of when I first moved to the states and was fascinated by all the dram on the american soaps.

Reviewer: tisaveeone (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 12: Lamb Chop and Dilemmas

Awwww, sukie, sukie now! Sounds like the shiznits is fixin to hit the fan!

*End crazy ghetto hillbilly talk*

But seriously, that was a great up date, thanks for the lemonade, I was a bit parched.  Jasper can't be dumb enough to think he can be friends with Maria.

SMH...boys.

Reviewer: christinemarie13 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 12: Lamb Chop and Dilemmas

Poor Bella. I can just see the amount of pain that is likely to be inflicted with so much of this drama.

Reviewer: Alternative_Emo (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 12: Lamb Chop and Dilemmas

so great!!! I know what you mean, just showing us her feelings so we have the right perspective for the following chapters.

Still... I can't wait until the next one. your story is really good, original, and the teaser just leaves me wanting to read more :)

Reviewer: r-pks (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 12: Lamb Chop and Dilemmas

Eek!  I loved that lemon but I tried to replace Jasper's image with Edward... I'm a perv I know :) but that's okay!  Oh and please tell me this isn't going to end up being a J/B story?  Just, pleaseee.   Update soon bb because this is fantastic.

Reviewer: dazzled19 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 12: Lamb Chop and Dilemmas

Finally our favorite over sexed teens actually do some sexing!

This is my favorite story on twilighted, and when you update its like getting a basket of puppies, winning $50 on a scratch off lottery ticket, and getting laid all at once! Keep it up!!

Reviewer: Linds14 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 12: Lamb Chop and Dilemmas

OH boy...that teaser scares me for the next chapter!

Sooo I still am unsure..is this actually a JXB story?? Or will it change?? YOu probably won't tell me.. :(

Reviewer: ambar82 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 12: Lamb Chop and Dilemmas

Love it can't wait till the next chapters!!

Reviewer: iamtwilighted (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 12: Lamb Chop and Dilemmas

Wow!

Awesome story...but just hurry up and finish the damn story! I have to see how it ends! And plus I was waiting for this chapter forever! You better not make me wait that long again!  checked every hour of the chapter to come out! Now, don't let me down!!!!!!!!!!

^_^

Reviewer: Luv_Twilight (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 12: Lamb Chop and Dilemmas

GOD!!!

WHY DON'T YOU JUST FRICKIN' HURRY UP AND FINISH THIS STORY?!?!?!

It's like my brand of heroine, straight from the screen.

SO PLEASE, DON'T STOP!!!!!

Luv it like I own it, baby.

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