Reviewer: bothen (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 14: Radio Stations and Lab Partners
I love the story!
Reviewer: Marijee (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 2: James and Close Encounters of the Sexy Kind
Ha! This is getting interesting!
Reviewer: Marijee (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 1: Five Years Ago to the Present
This is really a different Bella, good for her!
Reviewer: horse-nerd (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 13: Ultimatums and Tears
awe, dang. :/
Reviewer: MuffNbutter (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 14: Radio Stations and Lab Partners
Oh!!! I forgot about your Buffy tribute to the Bronze! seeing ti mentioned again made me smile so much... and made me want to watch the earlier seasons of Buffy again XD
And I loved how Edward has started being a little nicer to Bella, what with letting her nap and doing the work for her... hopefully she'll start to realize that he's not all bad now that theyre lab buddies...
Reviewer: MuffNbutter (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 13: Ultimatums and Tears
you know, I'm so not into the whole JasperxBella thing, that I thought she was with Edward at the beginning of the chapter because of how happy and playful they were being? XD she didn't say a name, just "he", and I had assumed it was a dream or something I guess. Needless to say, I was surprised when I saw the phone call, because that meant it wasnt a dream, and therefore not Edward... I was sad hahaha
But it was Jasper, and although I feel bad that theyre both upset (because I love Jasper... just not with Bella lol), I'm also glad... they better not get back together :P
Reviewer: Luv2readEdward (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 14: Radio Stations and Lab Partners
I absolutely can't wait to see where all this chaos will lead!
Reviewer: geauxdani (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 14: Radio Stations and Lab Partners
love this story! can't wait to read the next chapter!!!
Reviewer: aiysha (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2009 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 14: Radio Stations and Lab Partners
hey,
i have no criticism....EXCEPT
edward deserves BELLA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
bUt i like the JAZZ/Bells view.....kinda makes me sad that she isn't with Emmett though
Reviewer: bronsmum (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2009 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 14: Radio Stations and Lab Partners
I love this story. Poor Jasper. I really want him to get back with Bella, he should beg and crawl and she should lighten up! Edward would be a terrible best friend if he hooked up with Bella. Please update soon.
Reviewer: EmmBonn (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 14: Radio Stations and Lab Partners
UGH. I hate stupid Bella. So goddamn annoying and yours is being about as stupid as one has ever been. Can we have someone smack her please? An outtake even? just someone- Rose might make the most sense- smacking her really hard until she gets it, stops being imbecilic and work its out with Jazz. She made such a stupid choice and now they're both unhappy except Jasper has to be even more unhappy because his only friend is an asshole.
Reviewer: pink_sapphire (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2009 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 14: Radio Stations and Lab Partners
Wow, poor Jasper! There is nothing as entertaining as a scorned Bella! Love it!
Reviewer: memegan_rox (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2009 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 14: Radio Stations and Lab Partners
im reviewing because this story is GREAT. as great as starbucks with extra whip on a cold winter day, yum! :)
Reviewer: shyhorse (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2009 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 14: Radio Stations and Lab Partners
Please update soon! This is a fun story :)
Reviewer: mrseacullen (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 14: Radio Stations and Lab Partners
This fic has become my personal vice, it's like crack! Keep it coming SarahJayne!
Reviewer: shyhorse (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 13: Ultimatums and Tears
Ha ha, I love the preview --- I'm kinda glad Maria actually is a bitch, makes everything more simple :)
Reviewer: shyhorse (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2009 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 12: Lamb Chop and Dilemmas
Nice :)
Reviewer: shyhorse (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2009 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 11: Laughing Games and Melodrama
Liking liking liking :)
Reviewer: shyhorse (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2009 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 10: Silk Robes and Car Cables
Ooooh, this should be interesting... :)
Reviewer: shyhorse (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 9: Linen Closets and Calls Accepted
Ooh, evil! I like Bella/Jasper here :)
Reviewer: shyhorse (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 8: Bikini Strings and Testing
Hah! So funny :)
Reviewer: shyhorse (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2009 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 7: Vinyl and Interruptions
Fun :) I'm liking this.
Reviewer: shyhorse (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2009 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 6: Slow Dances and Awkward Glances
Ha ha - too funny ending! Loving this :)
Reviewer: shyhorse (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2009 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 5: Confrontations and Conversations
Ooh, VERY nice. I really like your version of James. Jasper is cute, too. Good stuff!
Reviewer: shyhorse (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2009 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 4:Texan Twangs and Salad Dressing
oooh - fun :)
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