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Reviewer: SeeMyEvil (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 14: Radio Stations and Lab Partners

Argh! Idiots! I love this story but...my god Bella is being such an idiot! Listen to him.

Reviewer: TwilightFan2468 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 17: Solace and Slutterina Barbie

WHEN IS THE NEXT CHAPTER COMING?

Reviewer: twilightsagafan (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 17: Solace and Slutterina Barbie

update please and wait why are they buying hair dye is it for Edward or Bella? I would like to see Bella and Jasper get back together but there is part of me that wants her to be with Edward. 

Reviewer: Wolf_Lover (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 17: Solace and Slutterina Barbie

omg first you are an amazing writer!?!?!?! i mainly wanted to talk about the reaction bella had to the maria thing; i feel she was perfectly justified i mean if my bf ever did something like that i would react the same way but probably with a little more violence, lol!?! also i loved how you had bella and edward become somewhat friends. though i don't like how james isn't like talking to bella just because shes friends with edward. and just a few questions: are you going to bring jacob or any of the other wolves into the story?; why did bella decide to dye edward's hair?; and finally it more of a request then question: please don't let charlie marry the slutterina barbie!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Kels1986 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 17: Solace and Slutterina Barbie

:P


X

Reviewer: TwilightFan2468 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 17: Solace and Slutterina Barbie

no!! poor jazzz

Reviewer: TwilightFan2468 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 16: Covering and Junk Food

HAHA LOVE THIS

Reviewer: sweetierosy (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 5: Confrontations and Conversations

Oh my sweet lord, best. story. ever...

Reviewer: Miss Lady Vamp (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 06:40 AM · On: Chapter 17: Solace and Slutterina Barbie

Damn good story. Love it. I really think that you have done the right reactions for both Bella and Jasper's characters concerning the break-up and after in this story. Plus, love the fact that Alice is a lesbian, doesn't tip the balance. Good work. You've sort of got me changing perspectives, im not sure if i want Bella with Edward, cause i (L) bella and edward stories, but, Jasper and Bella are cute together in this.
LOVE IT. cant wait for updates :) kjsdifja. I'm sure you've got it all mapped out like i do when i write ha, but i think bringing laurent back in to the mix to stir things up and help Bella out, i feel like it needs another perspective, outside looking in, so to speak. but i love your story. utterly amazing piece of writing.

Reviewer: My Hubby is no Edward (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 17: Solace and Slutterina Barbie

Okay, sorry I haven't spoken up in a while, what can I say- that damn "next" button is too damned tempting. I apologize now tho. So, just like most situations in life, I'm riding the fence on everything. I feel like Bella overreacted a tad bit, but I was also pissed that Jasper never came back to try and win her over...pussy! However, I must say that I'm proud that hers' and Edward's and hers' and James' friendship has blossomed so well. The teaser has me curious. I will be patiently awaiting your next update.

Reviewer: Fictional-love (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 17: Solace and Slutterina Barbie

Love the story, it's positively brilliant. I love the Edward you have portrayed here, especially the small but very sweet things he does for Bella (such as hiding her from Jasper). Great story. can't wait for more!

Edward+Bella= <3

Reviewer: LiseH (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 8: Bikini Strings and Testing

I was kinda hoping it would be Jacob who turned up! x)

 

So far I like it, you are a good writer. Though I usually like the pink cloud, "fluffy" stories! But I really think this is a good story :)

Reviewer: TwilightFan2468 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 02:23 AM · On: Chapter 2: James and Close Encounters of the Sexy Kind

wow alice a lesbian and laurant a gay guy???

haha funny. actually lesbian would suit alice...

Reviewer: My Hubby is no Edward (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 5: Confrontations and Conversations

Well, I am loving this! Dickward is still kind of hot, but I'm swooning for me some Jasper & James! Yummy.... Rose & Emmett in the closet. Lastly, I'll have to say that I wish Jasper would have offered to give her a ride home.

Reviewer: My Hubby is no Edward (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 3: Pwetty as a Little Pwincess

Okay, so I was giggling like crazy in this chapter. Bella, the torture device, "Fuuuuuck!" I love it!

Reviewer: My Hubby is no Edward (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 2: James and Close Encounters of the Sexy Kind

I'm still intrigued. I'm a little hurt that Bella treated Mike that way. (Not that I like Newton, just seems like she was being a bit bitchy. Seeing as how she used to be treated so poorly, it seems like she wouldn't be so quick to be mean.) I'll just wait and see how things turn out later.

Reviewer: My Hubby is no Edward (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 1: Five Years Ago to the Present

Okay, so my interest was definitely peaked in this chapter. I am curious to see the direction you take this fic. I felt absolutely horrible for Bella in the beginning, but no more damsel in distress. I can tell that Eddie boy is in for a few surprises.

Reviewer: Mysticnyx06 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 16: Covering and Junk Food

aww! I want Bella and Jazz to be happy together again!!! Loving the story btw! Update soon for my sanity!

Reviewer: bella93 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 17: Solace and Slutterina Barbie

why are chapter 16 and 17 the same?

Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 17: Solace and Slutterina Barbie

Great teaser! I can't wait for the next chapter! I hope you update soon! :D

I'm really enjoying this story! You managed to make Bella forgiving Edward actually seem believeable! I love how everyone's reacting to it. lol. And I love the constant Edward/Bella/Jasper triangle you have going on. It's great!

Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 15: Edward and Drunk!Bella

No no no no no nonononono it's not going to be Jasper is it!? Damn, that'll be awkward!

Aww Edward was very sweet. It's funny, I don't know who I want Bella to be with, Jasper or Edward. I would say Edward but you said it wasn't a Edward/Bella story so I'm trying not to get my hopes up. >.< Anyway really great chapter! I can tell why you enjoyed writing it so much! You wrote a brilliant drunk!Bella. he he

Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 13: Ultimatums and Tears

Aww that was heartbreaking! Oh dear.... I wonder if they'll ever get back together and sort things out. What about Edward, is he still interested in Bella? Hmmm.... I guess I'll have to wait and see. Great chapter! Loved the teaser, really made me laugh. lol.

Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 03:43 AM · On: Chapter 9: Linen Closets and Calls Accepted

Maria? As in Jasper's Maria!? Oh dear..... lol.

Great chapter! I can't wait to see what you have in store for them next! :)

Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 8: Bikini Strings and Testing

I loved Emmet at the end. "Dude.... he like, tested us". LOL. That made me laugh so hard! Brilliant! I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 3: Pwetty as a Little Pwincess

lol I bet that felt good! Can't wait to read what she has in store for him! Revenge best served cold an all. he he. Great chapter! :)

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