Reviewer: KaitlynLucilleHouston (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 18: Hair Combs and Stolen Kisses
What color didishe die her hair just wondering i dont know who i wnat her to end up with you are making me flipflop eighter way i still love the story
Reviewer: Kyramy (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 18: Hair Combs and Stolen Kisses
OMG!! Jasper is can be such a Jackass!! Mind you, so can Bella XD
I'm deffo Jasper/Bella for this story, even though I usually go for Bella/Edward fanfic. I think Bella and Jasper are just perfect for each other in this story!! As long as he stops chatting to leggy blondes and she stops snogging his best friend.. and Maria stays out of the way.
Naughty Bella.. No repeat performances, when you only snogged him cos you saw Jasper in the grocery store!!
I love this story and I promise I will no matter which pairing you go for.
Despite all the angsty bits this story flows in a real-kinda way, love isn't simple and this story gets that point across completely as well as the point that being a teenager is hard and confusing.
Love it, Love you,
Love Kyra xx
Reviewer: MiaCullen (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 18: Hair Combs and Stolen Kisses
Ohh wow I really liked that chapter! You need to update faster, I was waiting for this for so long!
But I really love this story, and from what you've said, even if I hate the ending, it'll be a good ending none the less. I'll still love it!
My God, I love this story.! Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: kalee (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 18: Hair Combs and Stolen Kisses
I love everything about this story! I don't know if i want Bella with Edward or with Jasper, I think I'd be happy either way....Thanks for writing and updating :)
Reviewer: snowwolf (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 18: Hair Combs and Stolen Kisses
lol i like your last quotes from the chapter haha
Reviewer: nessiebells (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 18: Hair Combs and Stolen Kisses
hurry please. LOl JK. I cant wait to see what happens next. I think they are all being stupid. But it fits the story line.
Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 18: Hair Combs and Stolen Kisses
Brilliant chapter! I loved the kiss! yay! XD Bella and Edward make such a great pair, even after all the turmoil. I think I'm on team Edward now for this story, but that could very easily change depending on what you write. Jasper and Bella were so sweet together!
So you know what!?.... I'm just going to be happy with whatever you decide! It's your story after all! I just hope you update soon! >.< lol
Reviewer: book_lover224 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 18: Hair Combs and Stolen Kisses
awww edward is really trying to be a gentlemen! its cute!
Reviewer: MissAmi (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 18: Hair Combs and Stolen Kisses
Yay!!! They're getting close! You don't know how much the whole Jasper/Bella things rattles my head. Lets have some Edward/Bella lovin'!
Reviewer: Starglow31 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 18: Hair Combs and Stolen Kisses
I died a little when Emmett imitated Chris Crocker. Don’t stress about the ending and outcome; if we strive to please everyone else then we tend to make ourselves miserable.
Reviewer: devilsgenie (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 18: Hair Combs and Stolen Kisses
I really liked this chap... :) and i know that i myself may begin to get hate mail but i think that edward being a douche can be funny at times :D thanks for the update and i can't wait to see how this ends... you've piqued my interest!
Reviewer: shell29bell (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 18: Hair Combs and Stolen Kisses
OK after you B/J and B/E disclaimer I have a weird feeling it will end up being a Bella/James. He is nice and all, but charlie is 'dating(GAG) Tanya......
I am enjoying the story and I knw you won't disappoint in the end regardless of the end :)
Reviewer: areminder (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 18: Hair Combs and Stolen Kisses
Love it!! Keep up the fantastic work :)
Reviewer: Monk85 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 18: Hair Combs and Stolen Kisses
This is so great! I need more!
Reviewer: lovesfool (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 18: Hair Combs and Stolen Kisses
Oh how I love this story! I hate not knowing how it's gonna end though lol. Your little note at the top kinda scared me. I thought, "crap, am I gonna be one of those people upset at the end??" I hope not! It's like sweet sweet torture not knowing lol. I am totally pro Edward and Bella ending up together (as I always am), but...I think you might make it all Jasper at the end. Idk. I feel like J&B have a foundation and history together that E&B don't...which would make more sense to have them end up together and Edward out of the picture. It's just the Edward's changed into a better person and Jasper is just being a crybaby lol! Did I say you scared me lol?
Reviewer: Twi-delighted (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 18: Hair Combs and Stolen Kisses
Personally, I enjoy Edward and Bella being confused about their new feelings. I prefer it to be Bella and Edward. I like the stolen kisses and I enjoy reading Jasper cower away. Bravo, great chapter!
Reviewer: mcape32 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 18: Hair Combs and Stolen Kisses
I really love this story. Maybe you could make Jasper move to another state. Maybe his mother had to go tend to her dieing Father or something, then that would leave Bella/Edward.
Reviewer: lily_zen (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 18: Hair Combs and Stolen Kisses
Yayyyy. Here's some review-love for you.
Reviewer: piperann_25 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 18: Hair Combs and Stolen Kisses
I was so excited to see your update, I LOVE that edward and jasper are fighting over bellan keep it coming
Reviewer: ladge (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 18: Hair Combs and Stolen Kisses
nice. but it seems like ts too short. :( please update!
Reviewer: Ronie444 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 18: Hair Combs and Stolen Kisses
Imagining Emmett in a "Chris-Crocker-Mode" just made me LOOOOL !!!
I'm totally Team Jasper for this story...As I like the plot, I will follow the story wherever it ends ^_^...(And I'll take care of Jazz if he stays alone ;-) )
Can't wait for next chapter !!!!
Reviewer: My Hubby is no Edward (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 18: Hair Combs and Stolen Kisses
Well, I must say I loved this chapter. At the beginning I squealed when I found out it was going to be a Jasper/Bella, but now I've gotten all giddy at the possiblity of it becoming a Edward/Bella. So, I don't know how others feel, but I would love you & this fic either way. Thanks for the update, and I will be eagerly awaiting the next.
Oh, btw, Edward & Bella's kiss was hot! I love how she makes Edward all shy, boyish, & cute.
Reviewer: cullenfreak (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 18: Hair Combs and Stolen Kisses
OMG!!!!! duz irina die like in the real books!!!!!!!?!?????!?!??!??!?!?
Reviewer: Southern_Magnolias (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 18: Hair Combs and Stolen Kisses
Yeah! I love this story... Thanks for the update! Now quite reading your damn reviews and go write!
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 18: Hair Combs and Stolen Kisses
Please find the motivation! This chapter was great...this story is finally going somewhere again. Please update again soon - and don't wait so long!!!!
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