Was your one shot posted at some point?  I'd like to read it while reading this longer take.  I can already tell this is going to be fun!

It is 2:30 am and I couldn't stop reading this story until I was done every chapter.  I love it...I didn't think I would but I gave it a try and I love it! Please update soon!

I think jasper was an ass for leaving but i dont think that bella should have freaked out so much. i would have gone with him or told him if he didnt come right back than we were thru. not if you walk out the door dont come back. evan though i can kinda understand how she would feel he was choosing Maria over her lol i have alot of different views of it

Wow. I started reading your story last night and I haven’t been able to get myself to take my eyes off the computer screen! Chapter 18 right before Jas didn’t pay attention to Bella when Irina was talking to him that kind of made me think that it would turn out to be Bella/Jas now i'm on the verge of changing it to Bella/Edward! I’m really looking forward to chapter 20! Keep up the good work! =]

Shimezu

this is the only chapter ive reviewed but i just wanna let u know that i think u should have jasper and bella get back together. i think bella was dramatic but i think jasper was an idiot but i still think they should get back together. i dont like the e&b couple. and i cant wait for u to write more chapters!!! especially cause i wanna see if bella and jasper get back together. i know bella still likes jasper and that jasper is in love with bella.

eeeeeeeeeeeek why didnt u update yet? oh em gee! that lauren -bitch! ughh i cannot believe her and poor Jasper and poor Edward and poor Bella god im pitying like everyone :P it kinda does seem like a love triangle like Jasper loves Bella and Bella loves Jasper but Bella has some feelings for Edward and Edward is totally falling for her....

im so excited to see what happens next and is it relli almost done? mann! i dont want it to end! its just sooo good and i like the whole idea of cliffhangers even tho i dont like cliffhangers -if that even makes sense. It tempts the reader keeps them wondering what will happen next and makes them axious to read more....

i think that at the dance, everything needs to fall into place. Edward shud came to his senses and like back away and Jasper shud finally express how he relli feels infront of like everybody and Bella shud forgive him and they all live happily ever after!

i noe u already hjave the ending mapped out but like just a thought u noe?... i cant wait to read the next chap(s) hopefully the next one isnt the last! ur story is absolutely amazing it blew me away! keep it up!

I check everyday to see when this is updated....i love the story...please gkeep it going :)

eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeek! edwards being a bitch!! what the hell is he doing? couldnt he be less selfish and maybe more sympathetic of his friend. his FRIEND he cant be happy for huim and let him be? i cannot believe this poor Jasper. I have a feeling im going to cry soon. Yes ur story has that effect on me. Its so touching and its like i could be the character and actually experience what theyre going thru which makes it so much more real! totally amazing!

the preview for chap 11 is tempting me to read on although its quite late and i shudnt be reading i cant seem to stop! ima keep reading :P

awe JASPER IS MY LOVER FOR LIFE!

okai i noe i noe u prob think im a creep but ur writing has got me hooked! its like a drugg :P i cant get enuff of this amazing fan fic! ima keep reading... and u obvi think im a creep but i dont give a shyyt :P

hey!

omg! this is totally amazing! like it was the most interesting story there was so i decided to read it and i noe theres quiet a lot of chaps still and im only on the first but i cant wait to see what happens next! ima keep on reading now

xo, ciao

Damn, I was really looking forward to crack whore Bella and her pimp daddy Eddie!

This is really interesting. Please continue.

this is pretty good. i like how she hated edward at the start.nice change