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Reviews For 100 Hours
Reviewer: JRAtkinson88 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 05:37 PM · On: When Alice Met Jasper

they should totally have their own story!!



Author's Response:

Oh thank you! That's really sweet.

xo

Reviewer: vampiremom1221 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 03:44 PM · On: When Alice Met Jasper

Too cute.  I always knew that Alice was the obsessive stalker type.  Glad to see she was rewarded for her efforts.



Author's Response:

She totally is! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xo

Reviewer: britablue (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 11:58 AM · On: When Alice Met Jasper

I loved how Jasper and Alice met so sweet =) Jaspers mama totally raised him right!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xo

Reviewer: jujubakiller (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 09:03 AM · On: When Alice Met Jasper

I was a bit disappointed that it wasn't another chapter on Edward and Bella. But after reading the chapter my disappointement disappeared right away! It was great, and really sweet. =)



Author's Response:

Aww thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

xo

Reviewer: warpedweaving (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2010 03:42 AM · On: 23 Hours

Fun chapter!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

xo

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2010 02:41 PM · On: 23 Hours

im excited that the guys were so chill about them dating and angela too. i hope that bella and edward's ending happens more often! they need it!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm glad that you are enjoying the story.

xo

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 01:56 PM · On: 23 Hours

Oooh, yeah, love it!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

xo

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 07:13 PM · On: 23 Hours

I'm sorry to hear about your health issues, take care of yourself! I loved the spontaneity of picking Bella up at school, and the deviousness of fooling around with the parentals downstairs. It's not nearly as exciting when you are the parents trying to dodge the kids!

Author's Response:

Lol, I guess it's more difficult trying to get around the kids! Thanks for reviewing and the kind words!

xo

Reviewer: nastia (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 12:01 PM · On: 23 Hours

yay new chapter!! It is a great story, I specially love confident Bella.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

xo

Reviewer: StellarBells (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 10:54 AM · On: 23 Hours

Awesome story. Can't wait to read more. Love the neutral POV also. Makes the story more interesting and multifaceted.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm happy that you're enjoying the story.

xo

Reviewer: emmw (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 07:36 AM · On: 23 Hours

Firts of all i hope you get well very soon.hot chapter,Edward master hands did it again!!!!.Congratulations for the nominations good luck .



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I really appreciate it.

xo

Reviewer: jujubakiller (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 07:34 AM · On: 23 Hours

I loved the diference between Bella's talk with Alice, Rosalie and Angela and Edward's talk with Jasper.  Lol.



Author's Response:

That was my fav part! I loved writing it. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

xo

Reviewer: Ma Cherie ya habebi (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 07:25 AM · On: 23 Hours

I really like two things about this chapter and this story. First I like how confident in her element Bella is - it is rare in stories and it is refreashing. Second I love how this Edward and Bella are perfectly willing to march to thier own drum in their relationship  instread of getting bogged down in the peer pressure angst and drama -content to be individuals together. Thanks for the update



Author's Response:

Thank you for reeading and reviewing! I'm so happy that you like Bella. I was getting sick of her always being insecure and clumsy. I had a moment of girl power and she was born out of it. I really appreciate all the beautiful words you left for me.

xo

Reviewer: amber133 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 05:22 AM · On: 23 Hours

wow wow wow

this chapter was freaking amazing

i am so in love with this story

please update asap



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm glad that you're enjoying it.

xo

Reviewer: edwardandbellaforever (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 03:28 AM · On: 23 Hours

hmm... revelations, emotions and smut! I like it. The comparison in the conversations they each had with their friends when they revealed the 'boyfriend/girlfriend' thing was genius... had me laughing out loud.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

(Yeah, that piercing that ripped out was a vertical tragus - right next to my ear... i'm sticking to the actual ears for the time being. lol)



Author's Response:

I actually said "ouch" out loud when I read that. *shivers* I hope you were ok after it happened.

Thanks for reviewing and calling me a genius. My head is now so huge I can't fit thru doors. Lol. I'm so happy that you enjoyed the convo's, it's my fav part.

xo

Reviewer: EMX (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 02:04 AM · On: 23 Hours

another great chapter from you! hope you sort out your health issues. Good Luck! Emx



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing and trhe well wishes!

xo

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 11:28 PM · On: 23 Hours

Love the short guy speak! lmao



Author's Response:

Thank you! I think that's my fav part.

xo

Reviewer: kristaa19 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 07:55 PM · On: 23 Hours

sucha good story!!!!!!

i love this!

update again soon. im addicted!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Is it wrong that I like that you're addicted? Does this make me a dealer?

xo

Reviewer: En426 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 06:24 PM · On: 23 Hours

Love this story! Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I love that you love the story!

xo

Reviewer: kikabr (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 1: 5 Hours

I'm just starting, but it seems great so far!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing! I'm happy that you're enjoying it.

xo

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 04:40 PM · On: 23 Hours

they are so great together



Author's Response:

Hey you! Thank you for the review!

xo

Reviewer: blb0157 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 03:35 PM · On: 23 Hours

I hope that you feel better soon

 

Congrats on your award, this story is fantastic !

Brenda



Author's Response:

Thank you but I haven't won it, the voting is thru Friday. And thank you for reading and reviewing! I'm so happy that you're enjoying the story. My sister's name is Brenda, I don;t hear it often.

xo- Alicia

Reviewer: twilighter1510 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 02:57 PM · On: 23 Hours

phewww!  Edward's so hot.  I hope you are feeling better soon. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing! And for the sweet thoughts.

xo

Reviewer: anduril1134 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 02:31 PM · On: 23 Hours

ROFL, the 3 line conversation between Edward and Jasper was epic.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm so happy that you liked that part.

xo

Reviewer: aly1390 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 01:51 PM · On: 23 Hours

This fic so doesn't get the attention it deserves -sigh-

 

"So Bella's your girlfriend now?" Jasper asked.

"Yup," Edward answered.

"Cool, bro. Did you do the English assignment?"

 

trust the boys to make confirming a relationship as non-awkward as possible, straight and to the point. No dramatics like the girls...

and yay! under-the-skirt gropage! wait.. so if B just had her first orgasm then.. what was she and Peter doing?

I love it that they are taking slow and their texts were funny, at least they didn't go all sweet and mushy just because they're in a relationship...

 



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you so much! It may not get a lot of attention here but I've been happy with the reception here and on FFn. Its also been reviewed on a few blogs. But I totally appreicate the support.

This wasn't Bella's first orgasm, she does state that kept her well-satisfied, this was just her first from Edward. I'm glad you enjoy the texts, I have fun with them.

If you're on Twitter follow me @wytchwmn75, I love talking to readers and will often post teasers as I'm writing.

xo

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