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Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2010 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 1 Eighteen


Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: Jennixst (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2010 01:31 AM · On: Chapter 13 Facing the Past

Looking forward to your next update, this story is going from strenght to strenght.  I hope Bella and Edward are able to reconcile and that both Jane & Alec finds peace and love.

Author's Response:

Well I am an E/B girl so you can guess how that will turn out ;)

Jane and Alec... well there just might be someone else out there for both of them

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Rayday (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 13 Facing the Past

I can hardly wait for the next chapter. When is Edward going to realize that it is Bella and his daughter? I hope you have a chance to update again soon.

Author's Response:

The next chapter will go on the site tonight... but it will probably take a week for my beta to get to it...

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 13 Facing the Past

so glad we made the 10 year jump .

Hands up all who knew Aro would never let Bella just walk free !!!

Loving the Jane twist ...I just hope she's not playing both sides ....

Gotta love Alice ..has Nessie got the letter for Edward?


Awaiting the next update

 x x  

Author's Response:

lol... Aro would never give up such an advantage...

Jane is not playing both sides... you're seeing the real Jane at this point.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 07:07 AM · On: Chapter 13 Facing the Past

Great chapter. Glad Bella got to see the Cullens again and Jane and Alec are going to side with Bella and the Cullens. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:

More coming soon :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 13 Facing the Past

Amazing chapter, I hate edward a little even though I know Bella has it all wrong.

Author's Response:

Bella does have it all wrong- edward does too... don't have him too much- I promise he has a reason...

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: VampireinBetsey (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 03:45 AM · On: Chapter 13 Facing the Past

So many things just went on! Bella and Edward had 2 chances to be reunited and talk but both times didn't happen! He smelled her he has to know! I'm hoping that while Nessie is staying with the cullens her shield will drop and Edward will find out the truth! I mean she can't keep people out of her mind when she's dreaming right?!

p.s. I was surprised that the Cullens and the wolves stayed "friends" after Bella was gone. I'm assuming the wolves will play a role in this big battle with the Volturi. I doubt Aro will give up that easy.


Author's Response:

Things with the wolves will be explained later... more in Edward's side than Bella's honestly...

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: crossx (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2010 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 13 Facing the Past

Great chapter!  Can't wait to read the next one.

Author's Response:

Thanks :) Coming soon!

Reviewer: Emeraldshay (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2010 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 13 Facing the Past

I thought that this cahpter was great! I can't wait to read the next chapter and I definitely can't wait read when Edward finally finds out about Nessie being his daughter. One of my favorite stories to read. Love it, love it, love it!! :)

Author's Response:

Thanks :) I'm glad you're loving it :)

You honestly won't get the full Edward/Ness scene until I finish Cause and Effect... but I'm working diligently on it...

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2010 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 13 Facing the Past

why is edward so cranky? and i hope that bella can find peace and bring down the volturi!

Author's Response:

Edward has been through a lot. It would make anyone cranky- trust me... and read it as soon as I finish his side of things ;0


Reviewer: Arabella_ (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2010 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 13 Facing the Past

Really? I liked the red-haired little girl on your banner.

Author's Response:

Thanks... I am finding that now that it isn't up... I'm missing it... I might put it back on... but that's a lot of banner for my little story ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: JamesB (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2010 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 13 Facing the Past

You know, I'm even scared of the Volturi.  Great story line, and I am enjoying reading so much! 

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

More on it's way!

Reviewer: lionslamb13 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2010 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 13 Facing the Past

I like the twist!Can't wait to see how it plays out and how Aro get's brought down!

Author's Response:

Thanks :)

More soon!

Reviewer: sharon89 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2010 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 13 Facing the Past

What happened to Jane is so sad... but I'm glad that she is on friendly terms with Bella.

I hope their plan will be successful and they will be able to stop Aro.

Oh Edward, oh Bella... it's painful to see them hurting so much... I hope he will recognize her soon.

Great chapter, can't wait for the next one. :)

Author's Response:

Explains Jane a lot better doesn't it?

We'll see if they are sucessful...

I promise that they will be E/B again... just not when ;)

Next chapter joining the queue today... will take a week or two after that.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: VelvetishViolet510 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2010 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 13 Facing the Past

Very good chapter as always allthough i would have prefered it if ed had find out abt b and nes. post the next chapter soon. 9/10

PS at 50shades[.]com there's Master of the Universe sequel. did you know? i find out today. so far there are 3 chaps in about 10 days the 4th would b 50

Author's Response:

OMG!!!! a master sequel?????? (must finish answering reviews first... must finish answering reviews first.... must finish... must finish...)

I know there are many who would prefer it that way but I think you'll like where this goes anyway :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing and letting me know!!!

Reviewer: jh1266 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2010 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 13 Facing the Past

I love your story. I thinks it's one of the most creative twist on the Twilight saga I've read. I can't wait to see how your story progresses. Great job.

Author's Response:

Wow! Thank you so much!

More coming soon!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Amie Roberts (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2010 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 13 Facing the Past

loved the chapter. I am very excited that Jane and Alec are on board with protecting the Cullens.

Author's Response:

Thanks :)

More coming soon!


Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2010 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 13 Facing the Past

Amazing work!

Please update soon!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: stephsmith (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2010 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 13 Facing the Past

We're finally getting somewhere.  Don't leave us hanging too long, please!

Author's Response:

we are getting somewhere...  I'm putting the next chapter in today but it takes my beta a week or two to validate it...

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: ToTouchTheseInnocentLips (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2010 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 13 Facing the Past

How did he not figure that out?! Between her scent, silent mind, and her daughter that looks like a mix of them both, her identity was practically screaming in his face. Sheesh. I think they should get the Denali to come fight with them. Then Kate can see the truth, and perhaps Jane will get closure. Great chapter, I didn't see that coming!


Author's Response:

Sometimes when you beleive something absolutely- you are blinded to the truth...

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: lil_jess (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2010 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 13 Facing the Past

Wow, great Chapter. Edward is obviously in denial about her scent! Or thinks he's imagining it. It's sad she doesn't think it's her that he's pining for!! 

The next one with Charlie should be interesting and I'm excited about reading it!! 


Great work!! :D

Author's Response:

They both beleive what they have been told- which is all I can say on that ;)

Charlie is coming up next.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: jesicka309 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2010 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 13 Facing the Past

Don't be nervous, the chapter was great!!!

I felt like Bella shouldn't have told Ness about Edward being her father - sure she can block her thoughts, but how would she stop from thinking at any point ever when she sees Edward "oh that's my Dad?"

I LOVED the Jane thing, and the Alec thing I wasn't actually expecting to happen, even though you alluded to it in previous chapters.

Waiting for the next one impatiently! Jess xo

Author's Response:

When I give up this much information in one chapter- it always makes me nervous ;)

You'll see more of Nessie's skills later- she's extremely talented at blocking her mind...

I'm glad you liked where I took Jane and Alec. After all she had been there for ten years- she would have made friends and enemies...

The next one is going in the queue today- usually takes my beta about a week (sometimes two) to get to it...

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Dryad (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2010 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 13 Facing the Past

diggin' it! sounds like Aro; and alice's part is perfect.  enjoying the dynamics between bella, alec and jane and can't wait for whats next!

Author's Response:

Thanks :) I personally wanted to twist the Volturi just a bit. Glad you're enjoying my twists and turns :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: kaghanyou (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2010 05:39 AM · On: Chapter 13 Facing the Past

OMG! One misunderstanding after another, damn girl! So Charlie and the counsil is coming up...should be rather interesting to see. Can't wait to see what happens when she finally reveals herself to Edward.

Author's Response:

I know- I almost called this story something completely different because it really is just a series of misunderstandings that spin out of control.

The big reveal is coming soonish ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: KaoticKitten (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2010 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 13 Facing the Past

Wow amazing.  Your writing is getting better and better.  You have me anxiously awaiting every new chapter. 

Ok now when will Bella learn that it is her Edwad is morning over.  She needs to stop already lol.   Love how you had her go to the meadow and Edward be there.  Glad he didn't truely reconize her or that she realized he did.  Don't want him to ruin the fight for the family.

Boy oh boy,  I sure do not trust Jane.  She seems like a minuplater  to the core.  She seems to like hurting people.  I think she is planing an attack on Bella.  I sure don't trust her or Alec.  I turst those two as much as I trust Aro.   I like those two as much as I liked Tayna.  Which is to say none.  They all had parts to get us where we are in the story but none has been trust worthy.

Aro had to know that the Cullens were who Bella was protecting.  I wonder fi this wasn't a test to see if his hunches were right.  Maybe he is thinking if the Cullens were gone Bella would stay with him.  Bella couldn't have been the only one to have over-heard Aro saying she was the most important one of the guard.  I wonder if Jane over heard also.

I can not belive that Alice wasn't jumping up and down with Joy over Bella.  I am glad Alice and te Cullens have Nessie now.  One less thing for Bella to worry over. 

I so can not wait till the ext chapter is out.  Even thougt this is in my favs, I will be coming back everyday just to see if it hasn't been up dated.  Also to read the reviews.   I can not get enough of this story.  I can't wait till you put Edwards side up...   You are an amazing writer.  I don't see what you were nervous over.  This chapter was up to par, and may I say it one more time simply amazing.


Author's Response:

I was nervous because there was just so much in the chapter to let you know where the story is going... that alone always makes me nervous...

I'm putting the next chapter in today but my beta usually takes at least a week to validate... you'll probably get it next weekend.

Alice sees more than just Bella- she knows the best way for this to work itself out and so she's not going to interfere. Trust me- Alice is thrilled ;)

Aro does suspect something- I can't really explain what. Bella being in the castle was a careless moment on the trio's part. They thought that no one was around.

I am going to tell you- you can trust Jane and Alec. I promise. They have been manipulated just as much as Bella- if not more by Aro. You also have to realize that Volterra has been her home for ten years now- she has friends and enemies on the guard. Jane just switched camps ;) There is a reason for the loyalty most have to the guard- you'll find out soon enough.

It won't be long now before the truth comes out. Just a little bit longer :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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