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Reviewer: Rayday (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2010 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 16 Vampire Royal

I am so glad that Marcus is still part of the leadership. I think he along w/ Jane and Alec will be much better than Aro and Caius would have ever been.

I look forward to whenever you have the chance to update again, you have a great story here.



Author's Response:

thanks ;) I really felt like there had to be other reasons that people would join the Volturi. They couldn't all be pure evil...

Thanks fro reading and reviewing... more coming as soon as I can

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2010 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 16 Vampire Royal

well im glad shes ready to commit to ness and finally let edward have whats comming to him! cant wait till the next chapter



Author's Response:

i hope to have the next chapter in the queue this weekend... thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2010 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 16 Vampire Royal

i really hope that bella goes back to the cullen's and that she and edward can oercome their problems and be together!



Author's Response:

lol... there will be an HEA :)

thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: DaSrO (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2010 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 15 Changing Sides

So edward went all emo watching someone's hair but doesnt recognize her scent? =-P

Really enjoy the way your story is going,hope u can update soon

Have a nice day,

Daniela



Author's Response:

This is Edward we're talking about.... and I'm telling you... there is a reason he went all emo... he thinks that it's impossible for it to be Bella....

I think I'll be able to update this weekend if class doesn't get in the way....

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: ToTouchTheseInnocentLips (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 15 Changing Sides

I feel like she's weaving a very tangled web with the Cullens. What's going to happen to the vampire world if the Volturi fall? I mean, I know they're corrupt, but they DO keep things in order. Great chapter, can't wait for more!

~Jazz~



Author's Response:

Definitely a tangled web... funny that you said that... i've been mulling it over for the title for Edward's side of this... instead of the one i orginally had in mind...

the vampire world without the Volturi... well if that happens you will see ;)

Thanks for reading and reiveing... the next chapter is waiting on my beta ;)

 

Reviewer: byakuya (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2010 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 15 Changing Sides

ahhh i cant wait to see what edwards reaction to finding out that ness is his and that its been bella there the whole time not marie im sooo excited to see whats next and when the reveal happens



Author's Response:

more is coming soon.... including the reveal in not too many more chapters ;)

thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2010 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 15 Changing Sides

Can't wait for E's side, but it made sense, Bella went missing the cullens came back to find her and the wolves helped.

He should know it was her because of the name Marie, he knows her middle name, silly girl.

 

Your story rocks can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

yes welll Edward is rather emotional at the moment and not thinking logically....

and yes you've got the general gist of it...

more coming soon!

Reviewer: sophielynn31 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2010 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 15 Changing Sides

Cool Story cant wait for more.



Author's Response:

putting the next chapter in the queue today.... hopefully you'll have it within the week ;)

Reviewer: luvsux (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2010 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 15 Changing Sides

UGH! When is someone going to wise up?



Author's Response:

soon.... very soon.... give it a little longer ;)

Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2010 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 1 Eighteen

:)

Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2010 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 11 Newborn

:)

Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2010 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 12 Carlisle

:)

Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2010 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 13 Facing the Past

:)

Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2010 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 14 Charlie

:)

Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2010 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 15 Changing Sides

:)

Author's Response:

:D

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2010 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 15 Changing Sides

ohhh so I wonder if Edward is thinking it's really Bella but she has no memories, or if he's still just thinking Fate's messing with him?

Looking forward to finding out what's been happening in the "outside" world that the Cullens and the Pack have a much tighter alliance than during Bella's human life :)



Author's Response:

the alliance with the pack will be explained more thoroughly in Cause and Effect (Edward's side of Consequences) if I can ever get it finished....

Reviewer: Vampgurl20 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2010 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 15 Changing Sides

wow, for a vamp who has lived for some time she is kind of stupid. Cant wait until she comes to her senses



Author's Response:

lol... she's only 10 in vamp years... that's still a baby...

she's also a bit stubborn...

thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2010 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 15 Changing Sides

Loved that everyone in the guard sided with Bella! Hate that she didn't tell Edward the truth! Even if she doesn't believe that he loves her and that he's hurting over some other girl she can still come clean to him. All she has to do is show him who she is and then leave it up to him! She's slowly starting to piss me off!



Author's Response:

trust me for just a bit longer on this one....this was NOT the time for him to find out....

orginally it happened here and it messed up the rest of the story....

it's coming soon though!

Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2010 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 15 Changing Sides

i love it!! poor edward! i hope he and bella find each other soon!!



Author's Response:

poor edward indeed.... more coming soon!

Reviewer: sharon89 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2010 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 15 Changing Sides

Phew, I'm glad that the others joined Bella's side. I hope they'll formualte a successful plan against the council. :)

Oh God, I wish Bella would have said her real name... It's almost unbearable to see Edward like that. *sniff*

Amazing chapter, love it. Looking forward to more! :)



Author's Response:

we shall see what happens with the council...

Can you imagine what would happen if Edward found out now? he would try to go with her to face the council and it would be a huge mess.... I promise though... it's coming ;)

thanks for reading and reviewing! more soon!

Reviewer: roxnroll (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2010 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 15 Changing Sides

What can I say? I love it!!!

Rox



Author's Response:

I'm glad ;) more coming soon!

Reviewer: maidance (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2010 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 15 Changing Sides

love this story! i can't think of anything you could do better



Author's Response:

thanks ;)

more coming soon!

Reviewer: robert cullen (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2010 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 15 Changing Sides

God damn it, she could've just showed him then!



Author's Response:

trust me.... it didn't work.... i tried it ;)

there is something much better coming I promise!

Reviewer: angrykitten (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2010 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 15 Changing Sides

I always love seeing this story updated. I can not wait for the next chapter-it is excelent!



Author's Response:

thanks :) more coming soon ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: AnnieBella (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2010 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 15 Changing Sides

Wow loved it. Even though I wanted Edward to know it is Bella and the suspense is killing me I understand you dragging it out lol . I love the suspense really and can't wait to read Edwards POV. Keep me guessing ;)Can't wait for the next chapter. I even reread the whole story when a new chapter comes out lol am I weird?

Author's Response:

lol.... i have a couple of stories that I do that with myself....

the next chapter is going in the beta queue today ;)

the first draft had Bella telling him the truth here... but trust me... it doesn't work... it's coming..... soon ;)

thanks for reading and reviewing!

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