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Reviewer: DestinyIntertwined (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2011 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 1

I have no words to describe this. This is just utterly beautful. I had tears in my eyes the entire time I read this. I just wanted to say that you are so brave to overcome the hand that you were dealt with. I admire your courage in being strong and also sharing your story with the rest of us. Thank you :)

Reviewer: DestinyIntertwined (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2011 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 1

I have no words to describe this. This is just utterly beautful. I had tears in my eyes the entire time I read this. I just wanted to say that you are so brave to overcome the hand that you were dealt with. I admire your courage in being strong and also sharing your story with the rest of us. Thank you :)

Reviewer: Bellalund (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2011 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow.. that was amazing! it was so well written and touching. got tears in my eyes :(

Reviewer: JavaMasta (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2011 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 1

You had me in tears almost from the beginning. You've touched on a fear that every mother has, and I'm so sorry that fear became all too real in your life. Beautiful story.

Reviewer: movieandbookgirl (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2010 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow, that was beautifully written and very touching. I cannot imagine the grief that goes along with losing a child, and this story from a teddy's perspective was amazing in giving just a small insight into that. Wonderful piece.

Reviewer: cbzoo813 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 1

lovely and sad, sorry for your loss but happy for your "edward"

Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh my goodness. Bless you for pouring your pain out in this story. Only a mother can understand that kind of love and anguish. I am so sorry for your losses, but I know you will have all your babies with you in heaven.

Reviewer: Gillybean (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 1

This is beautiful and very touching. thank you for sharing it with us.

Reviewer: MZmanda (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oh wow! I cried so hard! This was beautiful.

Reviewer: miaokuancha (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 1

There is no sorrow quite like the loss of a child. Sometimes telling is healing. Peace and blessings to you and your family.

Reviewer: kstabb1001 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 1

I want to write a long review explaining all the emotions and wonders that I went through reading this one-shot, but I can't. It was amazing and touched me so deeply. I am sorry that you had to write this from personal experience. I can feel your pain. You are right in that children are a gift and one that shouldn't be taken lightly. Thank you for letting us share this moment with you, and for pouring out your heartbreak into such an amazing piece of writing. I can only imagine how many women you will touch and how many hearts you will begin to help heal with this piece. So thank you for this and even for the tears that I am continuing to shed, it was brave of you and I just can't say thank you enough!

-Kari

Reviewer: CaliMum (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 1

Just beautiful. So heartfelt. I'm so sorry to hear of your lost babies, but I can tell that you have healed, if only a little bit. Thank you so much for sharing this sweet story with us.

Reviewer: newecullen1 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 10:31 PM · On: Chapter 1

this was very touching...you are an extremely courageous woman. i can imagine how hard it is to lose your children before they fully live. you are still very blessed and God has wonderful plans for you. wonderful story and well versed....kudos

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