Your donations help keep this site running,
thank you very much for the support!
Reviews For Bella? Marie?
Reviewer: Lowana (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 12: Never Forget

Hurry up and update! Great story!



Author's Response:

 

Hey! Glad you liked the chapter! 

 

I'm sorry it's taken me so long to reply, but chapter 13 is now in with the beta's and will be up real soon. I hope you enjoy the following unbeta'd teaser from Bella in Chapter 13: Friends:

 

Tucking my hair behind my ear, I adjusted my glasses and took a deep breath before stepping out onto the patio. The delicious smell of grilled meat and onions was strong in the air, causing my stomach to grumble with impatient hunger.

 

The bright sunlight shone down on the patio, making me sigh in pleasure from the heat on my skin. I was glad I'd taken off my sweater before coming out into the warm sunshine, but I was still a little nervous about Edward's reaction.

 

He, and everyone else, was listening to Alice tell a story about something her boys did yesterday. As I walked towards the table, Edward glanced at me sideways with a smile on his face. The cheerfulness in his expression warmed my heart, but when he did a fast double take and fixed his eyes on me, a chill of concern made my breath hitch and my steps falter. He trailed his burning gaze over me, up and down. Fearful that he had recognized me as Marie, my stomach churned with queasiness and my breaths turned shallow. I slowed my approach to a near stop, my wide eyes glued to his.

 

I knew I shouldn't have taken off my damn sweater!

 

 

Reviewer: persuasion72 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 12: Never Forget

thanks for updating...I've been missing this great story!



Author's Response:

 

Hey! I'm thrilled that you liked chapter 12! Thank you so much for reviewing. It means so much!

 

I'm sorry it's taken me so long to reply, but chapter 13 is now in with the beta's and will be up real soon. I hope you enjoy the following unbeta'd teaser from Bella in Chapter 13: Friends:

 

Tucking my hair behind my ear, I adjusted my glasses and took a deep breath before stepping out onto the patio. The delicious smell of grilled meat and onions was strong in the air, causing my stomach to grumble with impatient hunger.

 

The bright sunlight shone down on the patio, making me sigh in pleasure from the heat on my skin. I was glad I'd taken off my sweater before coming out into the warm sunshine, but I was still a little nervous about Edward's reaction.

 

He, and everyone else, was listening to Alice tell a story about something her boys did yesterday. As I walked towards the table, Edward glanced at me sideways with a smile on his face. The cheerfulness in his expression warmed my heart, but when he did a fast double take and fixed his eyes on me, a chill of concern made my breath hitch and my steps falter. He trailed his burning gaze over me, up and down. Fearful that he had recognized me as Marie, my stomach churned with queasiness and my breaths turned shallow. I slowed my approach to a near stop, my wide eyes glued to his.

 

I knew I shouldn't have taken off my damn sweater!

 

 

Reviewer: ktcullen17 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 12: Never Forget

Good chapter! Update soon please!



Author's Response:

 

Hey! I'm thrilled that you liked chapter 12! Thank you so much for reviewing. It means so much!

 

I'm sorry it's taken me so long to reply, but chapter 13 is now in with the beta's and will be up real soon. I hope you enjoy the following unbeta'd teaser from Bella in Chapter 13: Friends:

 

Tucking my hair behind my ear, I adjusted my glasses and took a deep breath before stepping out onto the patio. The delicious smell of grilled meat and onions was strong in the air, causing my stomach to grumble with impatient hunger.

 

The bright sunlight shone down on the patio, making me sigh in pleasure from the heat on my skin. I was glad I'd taken off my sweater before coming out into the warm sunshine, but I was still a little nervous about Edward's reaction.

 

He, and everyone else, was listening to Alice tell a story about something her boys did yesterday. As I walked towards the table, Edward glanced at me sideways with a smile on his face. The cheerfulness in his expression warmed my heart, but when he did a fast double take and fixed his eyes on me, a chill of concern made my breath hitch and my steps falter. He trailed his burning gaze over me, up and down. Fearful that he had recognized me as Marie, my stomach churned with queasiness and my breaths turned shallow. I slowed my approach to a near stop, my wide eyes glued to his.

 

I knew I shouldn't have taken off my damn sweater!

 

 

Reviewer: momof2monkeys (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 12: Never Forget

I want to "knock" a little sense into Edward and then give Bella a "pair". LOL :)



Author's Response:

 

Hey! You and me both! We all do stupid things, and Edward is no different. :) Hope you enjoy the next chapter!

 

I'm sorry it's taken me so long to reply, but chapter 13 is now in with the beta's and will be up real soon. I hope you like the following unbeta'd teaser from Bella in Chapter 13: Friends:

 

Tucking my hair behind my ear, I adjusted my glasses and took a deep breath before stepping out onto the patio. The delicious smell of grilled meat and onions was strong in the air, causing my stomach to grumble with impatient hunger.

 

The bright sunlight shone down on the patio, making me sigh in pleasure from the heat on my skin. I was glad I'd taken off my sweater before coming out into the warm sunshine, but I was still a little nervous about Edward's reaction.

 

He, and everyone else, was listening to Alice tell a story about something her boys did yesterday. As I walked towards the table, Edward glanced at me sideways with a smile on his face. The cheerfulness in his expression warmed my heart, but when he did a fast double take and fixed his eyes on me, a chill of concern made my breath hitch and my steps falter. He trailed his burning gaze over me, up and down. Fearful that he had recognized me as Marie, my stomach churned with queasiness and my breaths turned shallow. I slowed my approach to a near stop, my wide eyes glued to his.

 

I knew I shouldn't have taken off my damn sweater!

 

 

Reviewer: brown0520 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 12: Never Forget

Hehe.... I love that she called him out on his lie : ) that is freakin awesome. Poor Edward is seeing things now huh.

Great chapter update. These two are alot of fun to read about. Thanks for this story I am sorry to hear you have not been feeling well recently. Hope all is well now and your doing good. Have a good week.



Author's Response:

 

Hey! I'm thrilled that you liked chapter 12 and seeing Bella call Edward out on his lie! Thank you so much for reviewing. It means so much!

 

I'm sorry it's taken me so long to reply, but chapter 13 is now in with the beta's and will be up real soon. I hope you enjoy the following unbeta'd teaser from Bella in Chapter 13: Friends:

 

Tucking my hair behind my ear, I adjusted my glasses and took a deep breath before stepping out onto the patio. The delicious smell of grilled meat and onions was strong in the air, causing my stomach to grumble with impatient hunger.

 

The bright sunlight shone down on the patio, making me sigh in pleasure from the heat on my skin. I was glad I'd taken off my sweater before coming out into the warm sunshine, but I was still a little nervous about Edward's reaction.

 

He, and everyone else, was listening to Alice tell a story about something her boys did yesterday. As I walked towards the table, Edward glanced at me sideways with a smile on his face. The cheerfulness in his expression warmed my heart, but when he did a fast double take and fixed his eyes on me, a chill of concern made my breath hitch and my steps falter. He trailed his burning gaze over me, up and down. Fearful that he had recognized me as Marie, my stomach churned with queasiness and my breaths turned shallow. I slowed my approach to a near stop, my wide eyes glued to his.

 

I knew I shouldn't have taken off my damn sweater!

 

 

Reviewer: wifie_b (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 12: Never Forget

Loved it! He is so jealous it makes me laugh :) . The tension is so thick it is bound to snap soon and I am peeking from between my fingers to see how he "shows her the kind of man he really is" ;could be bad or good ;)! Can't wait to find out how that goes! Keep up the great work! Really loving the story; on the edge of my seat for more!



Author's Response:

 

Hey again, wifie_b! I'm thrilled that you liked chapter 12 and all the crazy UST! Thank you so much for reviewing. It means so much!

 

I'm sorry it's taken me so long to reply, but chapter 13 is now in with the beta's and will be up real soon. I hope you enjoy the following unbeta'd teaser from Bella in Chapter 13: Friends:

 

Tucking my hair behind my ear, I adjusted my glasses and took a deep breath before stepping out onto the patio. The delicious smell of grilled meat and onions was strong in the air, causing my stomach to grumble with impatient hunger.

 

The bright sunlight shone down on the patio, making me sigh in pleasure from the heat on my skin. I was glad I'd taken off my sweater before coming out into the warm sunshine, but I was still a little nervous about Edward's reaction.

 

He, and everyone else, was listening to Alice tell a story about something her boys did yesterday. As I walked towards the table, Edward glanced at me sideways with a smile on his face. The cheerfulness in his expression warmed my heart, but when he did a fast double take and fixed his eyes on me, a chill of concern made my breath hitch and my steps falter. He trailed his burning gaze over me, up and down. Fearful that he had recognized me as Marie, my stomach churned with queasiness and my breaths turned shallow. I slowed my approach to a near stop, my wide eyes glued to his.

 

I knew I shouldn't have taken off my damn sweater!

 

 

Reviewer: bellacullen81 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 12: Never Forget

I was dying waiting for an update and I was not let down. I liked the way Edward was just enjoying watching Bella. Emmett..gay....haha!! Please don't take long to update, pretty pleeeeease.



Author's Response:

 

Hey again, bellacullen81! I'm thrilled that you liked chapter 12! Thank you so much for reviewing. It means so much!

 

I'm sorry it's taken me so long to reply, but chapter 13 is now in with the beta's and will be up real soon. I hope you enjoy the following unbeta'd teaser from Bella in Chapter 13: Friends:

 

Tucking my hair behind my ear, I adjusted my glasses and took a deep breath before stepping out onto the patio. The delicious smell of grilled meat and onions was strong in the air, causing my stomach to grumble with impatient hunger.

 

The bright sunlight shone down on the patio, making me sigh in pleasure from the heat on my skin. I was glad I'd taken off my sweater before coming out into the warm sunshine, but I was still a little nervous about Edward's reaction.

 

He, and everyone else, was listening to Alice tell a story about something her boys did yesterday. As I walked towards the table, Edward glanced at me sideways with a smile on his face. The cheerfulness in his expression warmed my heart, but when he did a fast double take and fixed his eyes on me, a chill of concern made my breath hitch and my steps falter. He trailed his burning gaze over me, up and down. Fearful that he had recognized me as Marie, my stomach churned with queasiness and my breaths turned shallow. I slowed my approach to a near stop, my wide eyes glued to his.

 

I knew I shouldn't have taken off my damn sweater!

 

 

Reviewer: Synecdoche (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 12: Never Forget

Did he tell you he's gay? ha... classic! thank you for another wonderful update...



Author's Response:

 

Hey! I'm thrilled that you liked chapter 12! Thank you so much for reviewing. It means so much!

 

I'm sorry it's taken me so long to reply, but chapter 13 is now in with the beta's and will be up real soon. I hope you enjoy the following unbeta'd teaser from Bella in Chapter 13: Friends:

 

Tucking my hair behind my ear, I adjusted my glasses and took a deep breath before stepping out onto the patio. The delicious smell of grilled meat and onions was strong in the air, causing my stomach to grumble with impatient hunger.

 

The bright sunlight shone down on the patio, making me sigh in pleasure from the heat on my skin. I was glad I'd taken off my sweater before coming out into the warm sunshine, but I was still a little nervous about Edward's reaction.

 

He, and everyone else, was listening to Alice tell a story about something her boys did yesterday. As I walked towards the table, Edward glanced at me sideways with a smile on his face. The cheerfulness in his expression warmed my heart, but when he did a fast double take and fixed his eyes on me, a chill of concern made my breath hitch and my steps falter. He trailed his burning gaze over me, up and down. Fearful that he had recognized me as Marie, my stomach churned with queasiness and my breaths turned shallow. I slowed my approach to a near stop, my wide eyes glued to his.

 

I knew I shouldn't have taken off my damn sweater!

 

 

Reviewer: fangrl17 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 12: Never Forget

Good to no your feeling better :) This was a great chapter even though there was no impala reference lol jk ;) Cant wait for teh next chapter and i trust you on the whole pushing the plot forward thing lol Hurry and post the next chapter! hehehehehe, thanx :)



Author's Response:

 

Hey! I'm thrilled that you liked chapter 12! Thank you so much for reviewing. It means so much!

 

I'm sorry it's taken me so long to reply, but chapter 13 is now in with the beta's and will be up real soon. The Impala gets a mention, too! I hope you enjoy the following unbeta'd teaser from Bella in Chapter 13: Friends:

 

Tucking my hair behind my ear, I adjusted my glasses and took a deep breath before stepping out onto the patio. The delicious smell of grilled meat and onions was strong in the air, causing my stomach to grumble with impatient hunger.

 

The bright sunlight shone down on the patio, making me sigh in pleasure from the heat on my skin. I was glad I'd taken off my sweater before coming out into the warm sunshine, but I was still a little nervous about Edward's reaction.

 

He, and everyone else, was listening to Alice tell a story about something her boys did yesterday. As I walked towards the table, Edward glanced at me sideways with a smile on his face. The cheerfulness in his expression warmed my heart, but when he did a fast double take and fixed his eyes on me, a chill of concern made my breath hitch and my steps falter. He trailed his burning gaze over me, up and down. Fearful that he had recognized me as Marie, my stomach churned with queasiness and my breaths turned shallow. I slowed my approach to a near stop, my wide eyes glued to his.

 

I knew I shouldn't have taken off my damn sweater!

 

 

Reviewer: sbr (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 12: Never Forget

I do love this story!!  Get so excited about updates in my inbox!!!!!!!!  It has to be my favorite!!!



Author's Response:

 

Hey, sbr! I'm thrilled that you're enjoying the story so much! Thank you so much for reviewing. It means so much!

 

I'm sorry it's taken me so long to reply, but chapter 13 is now in with the beta's and will be up real soon. I hope you enjoy the following unbeta'd teaser from Bella in Chapter 13: Friends:

 

Tucking my hair behind my ear, I adjusted my glasses and took a deep breath before stepping out onto the patio. The delicious smell of grilled meat and onions was strong in the air, causing my stomach to grumble with impatient hunger.

 

The bright sunlight shone down on the patio, making me sigh in pleasure from the heat on my skin. I was glad I'd taken off my sweater before coming out into the warm sunshine, but I was still a little nervous about Edward's reaction.

 

He, and everyone else, was listening to Alice tell a story about something her boys did yesterday. As I walked towards the table, Edward glanced at me sideways with a smile on his face. The cheerfulness in his expression warmed my heart, but when he did a fast double take and fixed his eyes on me, a chill of concern made my breath hitch and my steps falter. He trailed his burning gaze over me, up and down. Fearful that he had recognized me as Marie, my stomach churned with queasiness and my breaths turned shallow. I slowed my approach to a near stop, my wide eyes glued to his.

 

I knew I shouldn't have taken off my damn sweater!

 

 

Reviewer: emmw (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 12: Never Forget

Incredible how you managfe to writte such a good chapter if you where feeling ill.I wish you are much better now cause i absolutely love your story.



Author's Response:

 

Hello again, emmw! I'm thrilled that you liked chapter 12! Thank you so much for your kind words, and for reviewing and rating. It all means so much!

 

I'm sorry it's taken me so long to reply, but chapter 13 is now in with the beta's and will be up real soon. I hope you enjoy the following unbeta'd teaser from Bella in Chapter 13: Friends:

 

Tucking my hair behind my ear, I adjusted my glasses and took a deep breath before stepping out onto the patio. The delicious smell of grilled meat and onions was strong in the air, causing my stomach to grumble with impatient hunger.

 

The bright sunlight shone down on the patio, making me sigh in pleasure from the heat on my skin. I was glad I'd taken off my sweater before coming out into the warm sunshine, but I was still a little nervous about Edward's reaction.

 

He, and everyone else, was listening to Alice tell a story about something her boys did yesterday. As I walked towards the table, Edward glanced at me sideways with a smile on his face. The cheerfulness in his expression warmed my heart, but when he did a fast double take and fixed his eyes on me, a chill of concern made my breath hitch and my steps falter. He trailed his burning gaze over me, up and down. Fearful that he had recognized me as Marie, my stomach churned with queasiness and my breaths turned shallow. I slowed my approach to a near stop, my wide eyes glued to his.

 

I knew I shouldn't have taken off my damn sweater!

 

 

Reviewer: bellamina (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 12: Never Forget

Oooh! So what happened in high school them hmm? ;)

I was disappointed that Edward and Bella didn't get any further, I really wanted Edward to go and comfort her after she ran :( but that prob would have been bad.

Looking forward to you updating again!



Author's Response:

 

Hey, bellamina! Good spotting on the clues!!! More will be revealed next chapter ;) I'm thrilled that you liked chapter 12! Thank you so much for reviewing and for the wonderful rating. It means so much!

 

I'm sorry it's taken me so long to reply, but chapter 13 is now in with the beta's and will be up real soon. I hope you enjoy the following unbeta'd teaser from Bella in Chapter 13: Friends:

 

Tucking my hair behind my ear, I adjusted my glasses and took a deep breath before stepping out onto the patio. The delicious smell of grilled meat and onions was strong in the air, causing my stomach to grumble with impatient hunger.

 

The bright sunlight shone down on the patio, making me sigh in pleasure from the heat on my skin. I was glad I'd taken off my sweater before coming out into the warm sunshine, but I was still a little nervous about Edward's reaction.

 

He, and everyone else, was listening to Alice tell a story about something her boys did yesterday. As I walked towards the table, Edward glanced at me sideways with a smile on his face. The cheerfulness in his expression warmed my heart, but when he did a fast double take and fixed his eyes on me, a chill of concern made my breath hitch and my steps falter. He trailed his burning gaze over me, up and down. Fearful that he had recognized me as Marie, my stomach churned with queasiness and my breaths turned shallow. I slowed my approach to a near stop, my wide eyes glued to his.

 

I knew I shouldn't have taken off my damn sweater!

 

 

Reviewer: tinamarie6624 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 12: Never Forget

Great Chapter.  Can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

 

Hey! I'm thrilled that you liked chapter 12! Thank you so much for reviewing. It means so much!

 

I'm sorry it's taken me so long to reply, but chapter 13 is now in with the beta's and will be up real soon. I hope you enjoy the following unbeta'd teaser from Bella in Chapter 13: Friends:

 

Tucking my hair behind my ear, I adjusted my glasses and took a deep breath before stepping out onto the patio. The delicious smell of grilled meat and onions was strong in the air, causing my stomach to grumble with impatient hunger.

 

The bright sunlight shone down on the patio, making me sigh in pleasure from the heat on my skin. I was glad I'd taken off my sweater before coming out into the warm sunshine, but I was still a little nervous about Edward's reaction.

 

He, and everyone else, was listening to Alice tell a story about something her boys did yesterday. As I walked towards the table, Edward glanced at me sideways with a smile on his face. The cheerfulness in his expression warmed my heart, but when he did a fast double take and fixed his eyes on me, a chill of concern made my breath hitch and my steps falter. He trailed his burning gaze over me, up and down. Fearful that he had recognized me as Marie, my stomach churned with queasiness and my breaths turned shallow. I slowed my approach to a near stop, my wide eyes glued to his.

 

I knew I shouldn't have taken off my damn sweater!

 

 

Reviewer: CullenMoM4 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 12: Never Forget

Awesome chapter, though I found myself wanting to slap some sense into both of them. 'Come on kids get it together' lol. I so can't wait to read more of this story. I think it is probably going in wonderful directions. Probably a million but wonderful non-the-less. Happy Writing.

Until we meet again. :)



Author's Response:

 

Hey, CullenMoM4! I'm thrilled that you liked chapter 12! Thank you so much for reviewing. It means so much!

 

I'm sorry it's taken me so long to reply, but chapter 13 is now in with the beta's and will be up real soon. I hope you enjoy the following unbeta'd teaser from Bella in Chapter 13: Friends:

 

Tucking my hair behind my ear, I adjusted my glasses and took a deep breath before stepping out onto the patio. The delicious smell of grilled meat and onions was strong in the air, causing my stomach to grumble with impatient hunger.

 

The bright sunlight shone down on the patio, making me sigh in pleasure from the heat on my skin. I was glad I'd taken off my sweater before coming out into the warm sunshine, but I was still a little nervous about Edward's reaction.

 

He, and everyone else, was listening to Alice tell a story about something her boys did yesterday. As I walked towards the table, Edward glanced at me sideways with a smile on his face. The cheerfulness in his expression warmed my heart, but when he did a fast double take and fixed his eyes on me, a chill of concern made my breath hitch and my steps falter. He trailed his burning gaze over me, up and down. Fearful that he had recognized me as Marie, my stomach churned with queasiness and my breaths turned shallow. I slowed my approach to a near stop, my wide eyes glued to his.

 

I knew I shouldn't have taken off my damn sweater!

 

 

Reviewer: destiny4eva (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 12: Never Forget

LOL! The last part of the chapter was hilarious, i'll be waitin 4 an update :)



Author's Response:

 

Hey! I'm thrilled that you liked chapter 12! Thank you so much for reviewing. It means so much!

 

I'm sorry it's taken me so long to reply, but chapter 13 is now in with the beta's and will be up real soon. I hope you enjoy the following unbeta'd teaser from Bella in Chapter 13: Friends:

 

Tucking my hair behind my ear, I adjusted my glasses and took a deep breath before stepping out onto the patio. The delicious smell of grilled meat and onions was strong in the air, causing my stomach to grumble with impatient hunger.

 

The bright sunlight shone down on the patio, making me sigh in pleasure from the heat on my skin. I was glad I'd taken off my sweater before coming out into the warm sunshine, but I was still a little nervous about Edward's reaction.

 

He, and everyone else, was listening to Alice tell a story about something her boys did yesterday. As I walked towards the table, Edward glanced at me sideways with a smile on his face. The cheerfulness in his expression warmed my heart, but when he did a fast double take and fixed his eyes on me, a chill of concern made my breath hitch and my steps falter. He trailed his burning gaze over me, up and down. Fearful that he had recognized me as Marie, my stomach churned with queasiness and my breaths turned shallow. I slowed my approach to a near stop, my wide eyes glued to his.

 

I knew I shouldn't have taken off my damn sweater!

 

 

Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 12: Never Forget

very very good post soon

bye bye



Author's Response:

 

Hey, Leenf! I'm thrilled that you liked chapter 12! Thank you so much for reviewing. It means so much!

 

I'm sorry it's taken me so long to reply, but chapter 13 is now in with the beta's and will be up real soon. I hope you enjoy the following unbeta'd teaser from Bella in Chapter 13: Friends:

 

Tucking my hair behind my ear, I adjusted my glasses and took a deep breath before stepping out onto the patio. The delicious smell of grilled meat and onions was strong in the air, causing my stomach to grumble with impatient hunger.

 

The bright sunlight shone down on the patio, making me sigh in pleasure from the heat on my skin. I was glad I'd taken off my sweater before coming out into the warm sunshine, but I was still a little nervous about Edward's reaction.

 

He, and everyone else, was listening to Alice tell a story about something her boys did yesterday. As I walked towards the table, Edward glanced at me sideways with a smile on his face. The cheerfulness in his expression warmed my heart, but when he did a fast double take and fixed his eyes on me, a chill of concern made my breath hitch and my steps falter. He trailed his burning gaze over me, up and down. Fearful that he had recognized me as Marie, my stomach churned with queasiness and my breaths turned shallow. I slowed my approach to a near stop, my wide eyes glued to his.

 

I knew I shouldn't have taken off my damn sweater!

 

 

Reviewer: Banriona (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 12: Never Forget

Sad to hear that you've been ill :( Hope you're alright, I love this story :) x



Author's Response:

 

Hey! Thank you for your kind words of concern. I'm thrilled that you liked chapter 12! 

 

I'm sorry it's taken me so long to reply, but chapter 13 is now in with the beta's and will be up real soon. I hope you enjoy the following unbeta'd teaser from Bella in Chapter 13: Friends:

 

Tucking my hair behind my ear, I adjusted my glasses and took a deep breath before stepping out onto the patio. The delicious smell of grilled meat and onions was strong in the air, causing my stomach to grumble with impatient hunger.

 

The bright sunlight shone down on the patio, making me sigh in pleasure from the heat on my skin. I was glad I'd taken off my sweater before coming out into the warm sunshine, but I was still a little nervous about Edward's reaction.

 

He, and everyone else, was listening to Alice tell a story about something her boys did yesterday. As I walked towards the table, Edward glanced at me sideways with a smile on his face. The cheerfulness in his expression warmed my heart, but when he did a fast double take and fixed his eyes on me, a chill of concern made my breath hitch and my steps falter. He trailed his burning gaze over me, up and down. Fearful that he had recognized me as Marie, my stomach churned with queasiness and my breaths turned shallow. I slowed my approach to a near stop, my wide eyes glued to his.

 

I knew I shouldn't have taken off my damn sweater!

 

 

Reviewer: sdnez (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 12: Never Forget

"Good boy," Edward praised, patting him on the head. Without glancing at me, Edward turned and strode away, disappearing into the panty where he usually left through the side door.

...........................................................
Maybe it's my perverted mind... but the miss spelling of pantry still worked ;) lol!

Author's Response:

 

Bahahaha! Thank you so much for pointing out my boo-boo! LMAO! 

 

I'm sorry it's taken me so long to reply, but chapter 13 is now in with the beta's and will be up real soon. I hope you enjoy the following unbeta'd teaser from Bella in Chapter 13: Friends:

 

Tucking my hair behind my ear, I adjusted my glasses and took a deep breath before stepping out onto the patio. The delicious smell of grilled meat and onions was strong in the air, causing my stomach to grumble with impatient hunger.

 

The bright sunlight shone down on the patio, making me sigh in pleasure from the heat on my skin. I was glad I'd taken off my sweater before coming out into the warm sunshine, but I was still a little nervous about Edward's reaction.

 

He, and everyone else, was listening to Alice tell a story about something her boys did yesterday. As I walked towards the table, Edward glanced at me sideways with a smile on his face. The cheerfulness in his expression warmed my heart, but when he did a fast double take and fixed his eyes on me, a chill of concern made my breath hitch and my steps falter. He trailed his burning gaze over me, up and down. Fearful that he had recognized me as Marie, my stomach churned with queasiness and my breaths turned shallow. I slowed my approach to a near stop, my wide eyes glued to his.

 

I knew I shouldn't have taken off my damn sweater!

 

 

Reviewer: NornIronGirlie (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 12: Never Forget

Yet another fantastic chapter. Absolutely fabulous. I loved the tension between Edward and Bella. Little Henry was so cute! And Emmett seems like a cool dude.

I need to know more about Bella's past!
~Anna-Margaret
xx



Author's Response:

 

Hey there, Anna-Margaret! I'm thrilled that you liked chapter 12! There's more on Bella's past next chapter!!! ;) Thank you so much for reviewing. It means so much!

 

I'm sorry it's taken me so long to reply, but chapter 13 is now in with the beta's and will be up real soon. I hope you enjoy the following unbeta'd teaser from Bella in Chapter 13: Friends:

 

Tucking my hair behind my ear, I adjusted my glasses and took a deep breath before stepping out onto the patio. The delicious smell of grilled meat and onions was strong in the air, causing my stomach to grumble with impatient hunger.

 

The bright sunlight shone down on the patio, making me sigh in pleasure from the heat on my skin. I was glad I'd taken off my sweater before coming out into the warm sunshine, but I was still a little nervous about Edward's reaction.

 

He, and everyone else, was listening to Alice tell a story about something her boys did yesterday. As I walked towards the table, Edward glanced at me sideways with a smile on his face. The cheerfulness in his expression warmed my heart, but when he did a fast double take and fixed his eyes on me, a chill of concern made my breath hitch and my steps falter. He trailed his burning gaze over me, up and down. Fearful that he had recognized me as Marie, my stomach churned with queasiness and my breaths turned shallow. I slowed my approach to a near stop, my wide eyes glued to his.

 

I knew I shouldn't have taken off my damn sweater!

 

 

Reviewer: AnnaWinters (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 12: Never Forget

It should be funny when she talks to Angela or something.
In the bedroom or something and Edward is outside and she go's like.
No he can't find out about that.
What should i say ? Oh Edward i was wearing blue contacts and i told u i was Marie because  i was afraid to tell you im your nanny and i want to get in your pants. Yeah that would go smooth. Or should i just go to the berbeque with my blue contacts hi its me Marie or Bella you can pick .
I know way to much immagination XD
I really enjoyed this story



Author's Response:

 

Hey again, AnnaWinters! I'm thrilled that you liked chapter 12! Thank you so much for reviewing, rating and sharing your thoughts. It's so good to hear suggestions! 

 

I'm sorry it's taken me so long to reply, but chapter 13 is now in with the beta's and will be up real soon. I hope you enjoy the following unbeta'd teaser from Bella in Chapter 13: Friends:

 

Tucking my hair behind my ear, I adjusted my glasses and took a deep breath before stepping out onto the patio. The delicious smell of grilled meat and onions was strong in the air, causing my stomach to grumble with impatient hunger.

 

The bright sunlight shone down on the patio, making me sigh in pleasure from the heat on my skin. I was glad I'd taken off my sweater before coming out into the warm sunshine, but I was still a little nervous about Edward's reaction.

 

He, and everyone else, was listening to Alice tell a story about something her boys did yesterday. As I walked towards the table, Edward glanced at me sideways with a smile on his face. The cheerfulness in his expression warmed my heart, but when he did a fast double take and fixed his eyes on me, a chill of concern made my breath hitch and my steps falter. He trailed his burning gaze over me, up and down. Fearful that he had recognized me as Marie, my stomach churned with queasiness and my breaths turned shallow. I slowed my approach to a near stop, my wide eyes glued to his.

 

I knew I shouldn't have taken off my damn sweater!

 

 

Reviewer: renesalecau (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 12: Never Forget

Hahaha! Edward suffered a little 'Foot in Mouth' disease there! Oh well, they'll figure it out. I always look forward to Wednesdays when I get an update to this story. Even all of this UST isn't scaring me away. I'm a quick gradification kind of girl! Looking forward to more.

~Tay



Author's Response:

 

Hey again, Tay! I'm thrilled that you liked chapter 12 and are enjoying the UST! Thank you so much for reviewing. It means so much!

 

I'm sorry it's taken me so long to reply, but chapter 13 is now in with the beta's and will be up real soon. I hope you enjoy the following unbeta'd teaser from Bella in Chapter 13: Friends:

 

Tucking my hair behind my ear, I adjusted my glasses and took a deep breath before stepping out onto the patio. The delicious smell of grilled meat and onions was strong in the air, causing my stomach to grumble with impatient hunger.

 

The bright sunlight shone down on the patio, making me sigh in pleasure from the heat on my skin. I was glad I'd taken off my sweater before coming out into the warm sunshine, but I was still a little nervous about Edward's reaction.

 

He, and everyone else, was listening to Alice tell a story about something her boys did yesterday. As I walked towards the table, Edward glanced at me sideways with a smile on his face. The cheerfulness in his expression warmed my heart, but when he did a fast double take and fixed his eyes on me, a chill of concern made my breath hitch and my steps falter. He trailed his burning gaze over me, up and down. Fearful that he had recognized me as Marie, my stomach churned with queasiness and my breaths turned shallow. I slowed my approach to a near stop, my wide eyes glued to his.

 

I knew I shouldn't have taken off my damn sweater!

 

 

Reviewer: jessica-cullen (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 12: Never Forget

it was really good! i enjoyed it :) sorry to hear you were sick, hope you feel better!



Author's Response:

 

Hey again, jessica-cullen! I'm thrilled that you liked chapter 12! Thank you so much for reviewing. It means so much!

 

I'm sorry it's taken me so long to reply, but chapter 13 is now in with the beta's and will be up real soon. I hope you enjoy the following unbeta'd teaser from Bella in Chapter 13: Friends:

 

Tucking my hair behind my ear, I adjusted my glasses and took a deep breath before stepping out onto the patio. The delicious smell of grilled meat and onions was strong in the air, causing my stomach to grumble with impatient hunger.

 

The bright sunlight shone down on the patio, making me sigh in pleasure from the heat on my skin. I was glad I'd taken off my sweater before coming out into the warm sunshine, but I was still a little nervous about Edward's reaction.

 

He, and everyone else, was listening to Alice tell a story about something her boys did yesterday. As I walked towards the table, Edward glanced at me sideways with a smile on his face. The cheerfulness in his expression warmed my heart, but when he did a fast double take and fixed his eyes on me, a chill of concern made my breath hitch and my steps falter. He trailed his burning gaze over me, up and down. Fearful that he had recognized me as Marie, my stomach churned with queasiness and my breaths turned shallow. I slowed my approach to a near stop, my wide eyes glued to his.

 

I knew I shouldn't have taken off my damn sweater!

 

 

Reviewer: cjcullen78 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 12: Never Forget

That was great! Love your story and can't wait for the next update! :)

Author's Response:

 

Hey! I'm thrilled that you liked chapter 12! Thank you so much for reviewing. It means so much!

 

I'm sorry it's taken me so long to reply, but chapter 13 is now in with the beta's and will be up real soon. I hope you enjoy the following unbeta'd teaser from Bella in Chapter 13: Friends:

 

Tucking my hair behind my ear, I adjusted my glasses and took a deep breath before stepping out onto the patio. The delicious smell of grilled meat and onions was strong in the air, causing my stomach to grumble with impatient hunger.

 

The bright sunlight shone down on the patio, making me sigh in pleasure from the heat on my skin. I was glad I'd taken off my sweater before coming out into the warm sunshine, but I was still a little nervous about Edward's reaction.

 

He, and everyone else, was listening to Alice tell a story about something her boys did yesterday. As I walked towards the table, Edward glanced at me sideways with a smile on his face. The cheerfulness in his expression warmed my heart, but when he did a fast double take and fixed his eyes on me, a chill of concern made my breath hitch and my steps falter. He trailed his burning gaze over me, up and down. Fearful that he had recognized me as Marie, my stomach churned with queasiness and my breaths turned shallow. I slowed my approach to a near stop, my wide eyes glued to his.

 

I knew I shouldn't have taken off my damn sweater!

 

 

Reviewer: sarabara081 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 12: Never Forget

So glad you are feeling better. I love this story & every chapter leaves me wanting more! I'm looking forward to the barbecue! :)



Author's Response:

 

Hey! I'm thrilled that you liked chapter 12 and are keen for the barbeque! Thank you so much for reviewing. It means so much!

 

I'm sorry it's taken me so long to reply, but chapter 13 is now in with the beta's and will be up real soon. I hope you enjoy the following unbeta'd teaser from Bella in Chapter 13: Friends:

 

Tucking my hair behind my ear, I adjusted my glasses and took a deep breath before stepping out onto the patio. The delicious smell of grilled meat and onions was strong in the air, causing my stomach to grumble with impatient hunger.

 

The bright sunlight shone down on the patio, making me sigh in pleasure from the heat on my skin. I was glad I'd taken off my sweater before coming out into the warm sunshine, but I was still a little nervous about Edward's reaction.

 

He, and everyone else, was listening to Alice tell a story about something her boys did yesterday. As I walked towards the table, Edward glanced at me sideways with a smile on his face. The cheerfulness in his expression warmed my heart, but when he did a fast double take and fixed his eyes on me, a chill of concern made my breath hitch and my steps falter. He trailed his burning gaze over me, up and down. Fearful that he had recognized me as Marie, my stomach churned with queasiness and my breaths turned shallow. I slowed my approach to a near stop, my wide eyes glued to his.

 

I knew I shouldn't have taken off my damn sweater!

 

 

Reviewer: wingschick (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 12: Never Forget

I am so interested in this story, it is very engaging.  I can't wait to see how it all unfolds.



Author's Response:

 

Hey! I'm thrilled that you liked chapter 12 and are enjoying the story thus far! Thank you so much for reviewing. It means so much!

 

I'm sorry it's taken me so long to reply, but chapter 13 is now in with the beta's and will be up real soon. I hope you enjoy the following unbeta'd teaser from Bella in Chapter 13: Friends:

 

Tucking my hair behind my ear, I adjusted my glasses and took a deep breath before stepping out onto the patio. The delicious smell of grilled meat and onions was strong in the air, causing my stomach to grumble with impatient hunger.

 

The bright sunlight shone down on the patio, making me sigh in pleasure from the heat on my skin. I was glad I'd taken off my sweater before coming out into the warm sunshine, but I was still a little nervous about Edward's reaction.

 

He, and everyone else, was listening to Alice tell a story about something her boys did yesterday. As I walked towards the table, Edward glanced at me sideways with a smile on his face. The cheerfulness in his expression warmed my heart, but when he did a fast double take and fixed his eyes on me, a chill of concern made my breath hitch and my steps falter. He trailed his burning gaze over me, up and down. Fearful that he had recognized me as Marie, my stomach churned with queasiness and my breaths turned shallow. I slowed my approach to a near stop, my wide eyes glued to his.

 

I knew I shouldn't have taken off my damn sweater!

 

 

You must login (register) to review.




Share/Save/Bookmark


© 2008, 2009 Twilighted Enterprises, LLC. All Rights Reserved.
Unauthorized duplication is a violation of applicable laws.
Privacy Policy | Terms of Service

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the intellectual property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.