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Reviews For Bella? Marie?
Reviewer: emilyrose (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 13: Friends

you have to update i love this story

Reviewer: IssaBissa (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 13: Friends

This is a great story and I look forward to reading more.

As for your question at the end, yes I do think Bella should go after him.  Though I have a bad feeling that things will blow up in her face when she lets him know.

Reviewer: NornIronGirlie (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 13: Friends

Bella shuld most definitely go after him.

Yet another absolutely fantastic chapter! Edward was so cute in this one and I'm glad Bella and he were able to sort out their differences. I'm dying to know what happened in Bella's childhood but also cannot wait until they go camping. That wil be an intriguing event :P

Great chapter!
~Anna-Margaret
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Reviewer: destiny4eva (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 13: Friends

Omg! has he really figured it out?? I'll be waitin 4 the nxt chapter :)

Reviewer: Gone_Crazy109 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 13: Friends

HOLY FUCKIN SHIT!!! i think she should go after him....he mite be alittle happy thats shes marie ~shrugs sholders~ and i still dont think he knows tho i think it just turned him on?? idk but i hope that they end up together that would be super cool and i think emmett is really funny....OH and i think alice already knows somethings up with edward and bella but its just a thought =D write more and make it quick plz!!!! ~puppy dog eyes~ YOU KNOW U CANT RESIST!!!

Reviewer: babyariel (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 13: Friends

oh God! I think he'll have serious problem with bella around.. Hehe..

Reviewer: ipreferbrunettes (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 13: Friends

Really enjoying your story.....can't wait for Edward's reaction.  I don't think it's going to be good!!  But I love that ;)

Reviewer: SuperFrog101 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 13: Friends

Bella has to go after him loved the chapter update soon

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 13: Friends

Hmmmm.  I sense that Bella will be all too familiar with Edward's "other Friend and hsi girlfriend" who are going camping with them.... I love this story!

Reviewer: sarabara081 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 13: Friends

Yes she should go after him! The camping trip sounds like it will be alot of fun! ;)

Reviewer: yodagreenman (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 13: Friends

Please hurry with your next chapter! :D I am quite obsessed with this story ;)

Reviewer: hoodsgirl (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 13: Friends

MORE, MORE!!!!  DON'T STOP!!!

Reviewer: rhiannon113 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 13: Friends

I doubt he realized. IF anything it only reminded him of it, men are remarkably obtuse to that sort of stuff, no matter how much we'd lke to think they'd know us. I bet he just felt 'little Edward' give her the one gun salute when she moan and had to go shake hands with the sheriff. Either that, or all the baby talk reminded him of the baby girl.

I am sooooo glad you updates... I loved this story!!

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 13: Friends

Such a great story. LOVE IT.

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 13: Friends

Such a great story. LOVE IT.

Reviewer: lil_jess (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 13: Friends

Eeee!!! Bella should definitely go after him!! She has to. Is it about to come out or will he just think he's going crazy??

Can't wait for the next update, please hurry!! 

Reviewer: Tinkerbell Blake (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 13: Friends

The problemis if she goes after him it will look more obvious that shes Marie but I wouldn't be able to leave him I think Bella and myself would have to follow. I can't wait for the next chapter to see what you decide.

Reviewer: Jharris1313 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 13: Friends

Holy cow!!!!  I don't think that he had figured it out yet but he is damn close!!!  Great chapter, hope to see another one soon!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Ashqua (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 13: Friends

I really hope he knows about her being Marie, I'm so tired of waiting for him to realize it lol. I know it's better for them to wait a little but I'm freaking impatient to see what kind of reaction he's going to have, how he's going to act towards Bella

Great chapter like always ^^

Reviewer: im your density (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 13: Friends

i loved this chapter!!! it was so good, and i love that edward is totally falling for her! i don't think he is going to take it well when/if she tells him she is also marie. hes going to think she was trying to seduce him or something. i hope edward didn't recognise her moan! i think he just got really turned on ;)

i can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!! i hope you update soon!!! :D

Reviewer: movieandbookgirl (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 13: Friends

ruh roh! I can't wait to read what happens next. I think he ay just have figured it out. Not sure she should go after him though. I guess we'll see what happens next. I'm staying tuned :)

Reviewer: Synecdoche (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 13: Friends

she should definitely go after him! update,update... soon, please!!!!

Reviewer: fprm (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 13: Friends

I love this story more and more!!!!!!!! Pleeease don't let us waiting too much ...

Reviewer: campcathryn (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 13: Friends

Love it

Reviewer: indiainksky (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 13: Friends

oops! this chapter was delicious.

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