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Reviews For Bella? Marie?
Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2011 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 21: Sex Kitten

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Reviewer: frosticles (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2011 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 20: Perfection

Love this story, please can we have more soon I need to know what happens next. Please! ;-)

Reviewer: Erilu77 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2011 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 20: Perfection

Hi. read through the last few chapters again and wondered when would we have more updates? I know you said you're going to University (over at FF) but it doesn't hurt to ask, right?

Reviewer: helen2912 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2011 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 20: Perfection

Please update sooooon, love this story!

Reviewer: helen2912 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2011 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 20: Perfection

Please update sooooon, love this story!

Reviewer: helen2912 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2011 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 20: Perfection

Please update sooooon, love this story!

Reviewer: Cagri (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2011 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 20: Perfection

I miss this story. Please update soon :)

Reviewer: twilightblusher (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2011 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 4: Changed Perceptions

Henry was Rosalies human best friends little boy. love the story btw.

Reviewer: Bevey99 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2011 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 19: Unexpected Events

Stress=migraine

Reviewer: Bevey99 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2011 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 17: Revelations

Edward = cad. rake, bastard

Sorry, he's not looking pretty to me thinking of fucking her for fun when he clearly knows she desires him in a more loving relationship kind of way.

Reviewer: Bevey99 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2011 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Truth

Trying to type, wipe my nose and eyes at the same time.  Keyboard's getting wet.  And, damn, just damn.

And., OMG, poor little Henry.

Reviewer: Bevey99 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2011 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 11: Massage

Should be a category in some contest for "The hottest non-foreplay".  Jeez my own nether regions started warming up.  Got to figure out how to bookmark this chapter.

;-o

Reviewer: Bevey99 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2011 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 5: Tampons & Alice

Good story.  Love the pics. Visuals always help set the scene.

Reviewer: britbrat14 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2011 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 20: Perfection

This is an awesome story and i check every week for a new chapter. Please continue to write. I abosolutely love this story!!! <3

Reviewer: helen2912 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2011 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 20: Perfection

Loving this story so much! Please please please update soon! Xxx

Reviewer: Carlisles Beloved (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2011 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 17: Revelations

ok so she is preggers?  and Edward is planning on being a cad.  Fun.

Reviewer: Carlisles Beloved (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2011 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 16: Consequences

yes, he was in need of data, so snooping though wrong is at least understandable.  Good chapter.

Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2011 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 20: Perfection

Bella's period indeed!  I still say she's pregnant.  And, yeah, what is with Rosalie's change of demeanor?  She is quite the mama bear but does Royce not want Henry around?  Would she even put up with that?  IS she pregnant too?  Well I will just have to stay tuned.

I am so happy that Bella is going to have a place of her own.  And I will try to hold down the decibles of my squeeing sounds lest you hear me all the way down under.  OMG!  She is going on the camping trip after all.  

I LOVE THIS STORY! 

Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2011 03:38 AM · On: Chapter 19: Unexpected Events

Idk if she is pregnant or not.  A part of me really hopes that she is!

The moment Bella began to comfort Edward I just knew that Rose would walk in.  I had no idea what her reaction would be but I can understand it.  Will she change her tune when Henry comes around?  And now that we know Henry is going to be alright will Edward set her straight?  Alice was awesome, giving Bella an update and all. 

I was very happy that Edward sent her a text.  Can't hardly contain myself waiting for their next encounter.

And now Bella has her own place.  This is good.  Very good.

Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2011 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 18: My Exception

I have been gone for 5 months and you have no idea how happy I am to have multiple chapters of Bella? Marie? to read.

Loved how Edward's thoughts of Bella have changed in this chapter.  Now I am real excited to read how they will progress.

I am a bit worried for Rosalie though.

Reviewer: tkj001 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2011 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 20: Perfection

I AM DYING FOR THE NEXT UPDATE.  I'VE RE-READ WHAT'S UP MULTIPLE TIMES.  I JUST LOVE THIS STORY.....

 

Reviewer: pcdogmom (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2011 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 20: Perfection

Ectopic pregnancy?

Reviewer: xXElle-BelleXx (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2011 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 20: Perfection

It's not a period! It's spotting! Her eggo is preggo!!

Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2011 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 11: Massage

You know that I just have to try to review, but Twilighted sometimes goes crazy when you review and they get lost, but  I have to say that this story is fucking great and I just loved this chapter, especially the way you had it in both of their POVs and I loved the way she was able to touch him and the way he was actually reacting to her.  He was realizing that he wanted her both physically and emotionally which he has not done in a very long time.  THANKS FOR THE FUCK AWESOME READING.  Sher

Reviewer: mrs_n (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2011 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 1: Edward Meets Marie

I'm good at a lot of things. Being patient is NOT one of them. Please update! I'm going crazy over here lol I seriously have had dreams about this lol I need a fix hahaha :)

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