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Reviewer: His Gem (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Truth

soooo sad! I hope that you update soon!

Reviewer: twibi (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Truth

He should learn more about her past - so that he'll understand her more.

HE SHOULD, MUST CHASE AFTER HER!!!!! I'll kill him if he doesn't!

He should just tell Rose the truth, and oh, tell her also he loves Bella owkay!

Henry, owh my poor little boy. Well, a white lie will do.... what kind of white lie... ermmmm i dunno lol~

And lastly ms author, BIGGGGGG HUGGGGGGG to you for writing such a super great chapter! Can't wait for next :)

Reviewer: kathy6900 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 03:10 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Truth

Edward took it better than I thought he would.  He needs to man up and be honest about much of it to everyone.  And, of course, he's going to wait a while to go after Bella.  :)

Reviewer: wifie_b (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2010 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Truth

I hope she doesn't get in an accident being so emotional, though it would probably wake Edward up in a big way.  I understand his point and I am very glad he let Bella explain but I definetly don't want to see them split up; they were both so close to being together and being happy...if the kids weren't going on the camping trip (because this would be harder on Henry) then Alice could "invite" Bella saying that Edward wasn't goinig to be there and then, though of course she would offer, Edward won't send her away because of the guy he is :).  Just really excited to see them together.  Maybe Alice and Henry can set them up to where Bella comes to get her stuff, thinking Edward isn't there, and they make up an excuse for Edward to be there and lock them in the basement until everything is ok again ;D!!  Sorry, it has been one of those days and my imagination is running away from me...you are doing an amazing job and I know it will be great however you continue it (just please don't make us...uh...them suffer too long) lol!!  Keep up the great work :D!!

Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2010 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 13: Friends

Go GIRL GO DO NOT STOP!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2010 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 9: Fish & Chevy's

I think she should keep Marie as a secret.I would let them fall in love and when they make love for the first time he may or may not figure out Bella is really his Marie. Then he will have the best of both worlds. Love your story. 

 

Lilly

 

 

 

Reviewer: babyariel (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2010 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Truth

ouch! You're breaking my heart *sniff* well, she is very brave, and i know how it feels when you lose your job and the one you love.. IT REALLY HURTS! Don't break my heart please ..please Update SOOON!

Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2010 01:55 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Truth

Very dramatic chapter was a little awkward but felt transitional so I'm looking forward to more.

Reviewer: caz0novagum (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2010 11:46 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Truth

ooooooomgmgmmgg UPDTAE

Reviewer: carog91 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2010 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Truth

omg!!..Um...Idk..sooo many options!!.maybe a bit of all of them!!..but it'd be nice to hear more about Bella's past, and maybe Edward should look into her past?!!.

Reviewer: sperrin17 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2010 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Truth

ahh.. go after her!!! lol.. love the story!! keep up the good work!

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2010 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Truth

I love this story...you made me cry!

I say lie to Rose and go after her!!!

Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2010 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Truth

Interesting conversation between them.  I'm glad Bella came clean on her own...Edward does have a right to feel betrayed and wronged.  I have no idea where you're headed next...

Reviewer: MrsCullen30 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2010 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Truth

Hmm... what's Bella going to do now? So interested to see what Edward is going to tell Rose and what he will do about Bella

Reviewer: lifesaver918 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2010 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Truth

I feel like Edward overreacted. Bella didn't "trick" him into bed. He went just as willingly and it's not her fault he overlooked her so much as a person he couldn't recognize her. He's as much to blame for the situation as Bella is. Granted she knew the entire time, but if he hadn't treated her so poorly to begin with he probably would have recognized her or she wouldn't have been so afraid to tell him who she was.

I'm sorry if it feels like I'm ranting. It was a great chapter and I truly liked how you wrote the whole confrontation/confession, but I feel like the blame was being solely placed on Bella with Edward acting like the betrayed saint. I feel if Edward goes looking into Bella's past or should there be another confrontation Bella needs to take him down a notch or two because she isn;t the only one who screwed up.

Heather

Reviewer: cherromate23 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2010 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Truth

Snoop & Chase :)

Reviewer: dupak (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2010 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Truth

Good reveal - lovely angst, and more approaching I imagine...

She should disappear.  He should chase her later, after he's had time to properly miss her. :-) Maybe he'll find himself doing some morally questionable stalking or digging to find her/learn about her and have to forgive her for her own indiscretions?   He should tell Henry the truth - Bella loves him, but she doesn't work there anymore.

He should lie to Rose.  If he tells her the truth, both he and Bella will look bad because Rose will assume Edward did something wrong and blame it on him anyway.  If he lies and says Bella had an emergency - schedule change - anything - it's just an unfortunate circumstance she had to leave and they both come out looking good - and there's no reason to stress Rose out any more than she's going to be looking for a new nanny anyway! 

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2010 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Truth

I think in a few days Edward will wise up and go after Bella.

Reviewer: brown0520 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2010 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Truth

There is no other option in this situation... he should definatley chase after her.  Please.

Reviewer: littlemonstercpb (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2010 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Truth

At first I wanted to be really pissed at him, but...he does have a point. Except, technically she stays with rose most of the time. I can't wait to see how rose responds!!!

Reviewer: 4ever17 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2010 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Truth

Oh.   My.   Gawd.  I'm a blubbering mess..literally!! If that wasn't a heartbreaking chapter, I don't know what is. The line that really made my heart ache is "I dragged in a deep breath, knowing all too well what it was like to feel lonely, to crave another's touch, to feel wanted for just a night" Cuz I very sadly know EXACTLY how that feels. *sigh*

One of many things that really really pisses me off is why are women sluts & whores? What are the men that fuck those women called??? Studs? I absolutely HATE that double standard, ya know?

Anyhow, I think HE owes her an apology. She stated very good reasons for her actions, acknowledged she was wrong & apologized. HE should know she's not the type who'd deliberately hurt anyone.  I hope she makes him grovel for awhile. *humpf*crosses arms & looks away.  Great job..Linda

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2010 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Truth

Great chapter!

It's all out and in the open...Poor Bella. I'm glad she has Angela to support her. (I have to say that Bella telling him before he could say anything was something admirable.)

I think that if Edward sees that she's the nice sweet person he's seen since she's worked with him, then there should be no need to look into her past.

I don't know what he'll tell Rose...Maybe he won't tell her anything. Once he forgives her (at least I hope he will) Bella will have a job again.

I can't wait to see what happens next! Please update soon?

Reviewer: Lowana (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2010 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Truth

Ahhh...Edward must forgive her and find her and f*ck the living daylights out of her! Yay....

Reviewer: cullenscougar (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2010 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Truth

Wow that was intense. I'm glad she told him, and even that he'd already guessed. It's just a shame that he feels he can't trust her. So sad when she drove away. I hope Edward realises soon that even though she lied he can't live without her. Please update soon x

Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2010 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Truth

I don't know whether to say 'poor Bella', or rub my hands that he finally knows and one way or another, they'll move forward.

Thank you so much for the chapter.

Spikey

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