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Reviews For Bella? Marie?
Reviewer: camille3456 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 1: Edward Meets Marie

love your story! update quickly!!!



Author's Response:

Hey! Thanks for your review and your keen interest. Hope to see you at chapter two!

Nyomi xx

Reviewer: accsmom (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 1: Edward Meets Marie

yes please keep it going!

Weird to have Rose be the ex.. but eh i can adjust :)



Author's Response:

Hey! Thanks for the review and for your encouragement. I wanted to have Rose in a unique situation and not have Edward's ex being Tanya or Heidi. Love originality! And she's not completely canon Rose either... just a little OOC. Hope you enjoy chapter two. :D

Nyomi xx

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 1: Edward Meets Marie

I really like this. I know from the summary they are going to get it on. I almost think it would be better if they waited - like a cinderella story. He is trying to find the girl right there before his eyes. I wonder how Rose is going to handle this lol.

Great writting



Author's Response:

Hey!

Thanks for the review and for your rating! You're fab!

So pleased your enjoying it and hope to see you at chapter two, shortly. :D

Nyomi xx

Reviewer: Belindella (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 1: Edward Meets Marie

Yes, I'm interested in more. Very interesting premise. Sounds like things are going to get very interesting between these two!



Author's Response:

Hey Belindella! :)

So pleased you like it!

Thanks for the rating, too sweety! You rock!

Nyomi xx

Reviewer: kaghanyou (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 1: Edward Meets Marie

I'm definitely interested in more so you better post soon. This is very interesting and I can't wait to see what happens next. Nice banner btw.



Author's Response:

Hey kaghanyou!

Thanks for the rating and for admiring my banner. I love it, too! chapter two should be up shortly!

Nyomi xx

Reviewer: Jharris1313 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 1: Edward Meets Marie

This is a very good start to what seems like a great story!  Please post soon!?!?!



Author's Response:

Hi! Thankyou for reading, reviewing and rating! You're awesome!

Nyomi xx

Reviewer: HeToldMeBeSafe (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 1: Edward Meets Marie

Yes, I want more! :D What a great first fan-fic story!



Author's Response:

Hi! thanks so much for your rating and for your review! :D

Nyomi xx

Reviewer: deleepowman (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 1: Edward Meets Marie

Definitely liking this story. Curious as to the backstory between Rose and Edward. Bella sure must look a lot different that Edward didn't recognize her.

I hope you update soon



Author's Response:

Glad to hear that the story has spiked your interest for the backstory! It will be revealed slowly so hope to see you at chapter two!

Nyomi xx

Reviewer: Emily-Masen (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 1: Edward Meets Marie

This chapter is really good. It has me hooked. When will you get your next chapter up?

Emily-masen*



Author's Response:

Hey!

Thanks so much for your interest and rating! 

Nyomi xx

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