Gosh! Now im super de duper curious! lol.

I wish you would update. This seems like a great story with a plot line I would just LOVE!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review :) I hope to update soon. I've been very busy over the past year with little time to my self, but I have not forgotten about my fic. I write a little here and there, but I'm sorry to say I'm not the kind of writer who can type out one chapter after another - I really wish I could because I have so many ideas. All in good time, I guess. Hope to see you around. 

i was wondering if you were going to update soon? i think this is really going somewhere amazing, and am anxious to see :)

 

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Author's Response:

I am hoping to update by the end of this month. If not, then early October. Real life has kept me extremely busy over the past couple of months, and as much as I would like to, I have not been able to sit down long enough to finish writing chapter four. I apologize for the long wait. Thank you for the comment, it brought a smile to my face in a time when I really needed one :D

What the hell?!?!? That was AWESOME!! I'm confused as all get out but i'm totally hooked!! Thank you!!

Edward has past memories of a loved one.  It appears she died due to the nightmares with skulls and bones.  The significane of the rusted warehouse I'm not sure.  Alice is right he doesn't want to reach the warehouse.  The fear of what lies behind it or who.  The burning of cherubs wonder if that would be about a baby death.  Could his love have died in childbirth along with the child?  The butterflies in the stomach was experienced by both Edward and Bella.  As Bella left to get TUMS the feeling dissipated as the distance between came greater.  The nightmare changed to incorporate Bella worried about it hurting and reaching to open the door of the warehouse.  Edward still wasn't able to reach it to either protect, save, or find the source of his happiness.  Meaning the source of happiness of having him able to pass the river of death in his soul to move forward to reach and grab for new life, love, and happiness.  Overcome the darkness and  move into the joy of the light.

" I cannot believe how much," he mouthed over the word 'shit', "can come out of a baby. Where does he store it all, and what, on God's green Earth, did they feed you at that daycare today, huh, little man?"

Henry answered timely by flatulating against his father's arm.

"Yeah," Emmett roared. "That's my boy!"

^ lol. I love that. I think Emmett and Henry are gonna be my new favorite characters in this story, lol. So funny!! and then him hiding the candy- I just kept thinking of that scene in the emperors new groove with that big guy (whats his name) is trying to be covert too. lol. I love your Emmett :) so entertaining.

I really liked this chapter- Edward's family is so entertaining! I really can't wait for the next chapter, and to see Edward with the 'little ankle biter', lol. Men with babies get me every time. 

Poor Bella :( Great chapter. It's nice to hear some more of the characters back story.

Lovley start to a story. I don't usually go for the pregnant Bella stories but I'm loving this one!

great story

I love Emmett. He reminds me of my middle son. Sad, but true, LOL! The dream is interesting...haunting even. Can't wait for more!

Hi,

I really like this story so far... can't wait for Edward to appear :) and who was the father / donor?

update soon

It's ok Bella. You have to weather the storm in order to see the sun :)