Reviewer: littlelady (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 16- A Mended Heart
Awwww. It's so good to talk it all out. I'm glad Bella and Renee did.
And it was so sweet seeing Edward with the baby. Yes, one day...
Good job!
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 16- A Mended Heart
Bi polar is such a terrible disease, and you've managed to show what it can do to the families of the sufferers. Great chapter, and you've shown what could happen!
Reviewer: fanficfool2008 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 14- Going home and letting go
This is an amazing chapter. The emotional vulnerability and connection are exceptionally expressed. I love reading and rereading this.
Reviewer: eviltigereye (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 16- A Mended Heart
eeep, i can't wait to see how her life gets better! this story just keeps getting better, i love it!
Reviewer: lovelikethemovies (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 16- A Mended Heart
"and I didn't think that my life could get any better than that, but I was wrong." At first I read that as a foreboding warning, but I'm glad I was mistaken!
Reviewer: LuvCullens (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 16- A Mended Heart
Great Chapter! When is the engagement? I'm waiting for it. You are a great writer. I anticipate your updates. Update soon.
Reviewer: 24601 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 16- A Mended Heart
Great chapter! Now please, please, pretty please update your other story, too?!
Reviewer: Audrella (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 16- A Mended Heart
Great chapter. Oh, I'm so glad Bella and Renee mended fences and got that out in the open! And how touching, Jackson Edward. Gave me chills. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Salanna (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 16- A Mended Heart
I'm happy that Bella learned the truth about why her mother left, it will finally allow her to let go of her past and be happy. The letter was moving, sometimes it's easier to put difficult things down on paper insteas of trying to say them out loud.
Hurray for baby Whitlock! Don't know if you have any children yourself, but I snorted loud at Bella's comment that Alice must be so happy now. Once the baby is born you're happy alright (aka thank god it's over), but giving birth is a bitch (done it 3 times, lol!)
If Bella's life is to get even better, then Edward would have to propose...?
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 16- A Mended Heart
Thanks so much for writing this. My sister is Bi-polar (I'm also a Social Worker) so I see this pain every day. I'm glad that Bella learned the truth.
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 16- A Mended Heart
Please update soon?
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 16- A Mended Heart
Yes bi-polar disease can really destoy a person and it's family. it takes a lot of work, and love to control it and learn to live with it. Mental diseases are like that, they show no exterior signs and that makes it harder for the pacient and all around to understand what is going on.
It was good to have a why to Renee's behaivor, it may be difficult to understand that she felt she had to do what she did, but it was what was best for her at the time. Thankfully life gave her time to let Bella know.
Bella had been through so much, maybe before she wouldn't have been able to move on with Renee, but as she said, the way her life is now gave her that chance along with Edward.
Reviewer: Nicab (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 16- A Mended Heart
So sad L :-( Sounds like more angst is on the way!
Update soon.
Reviewer: cass (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 15- Grand Gestures
whoa update immediatly!
haha this is great
Reviewer: shyhorse (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 15- Grand Gestures
Yay - I am totally loving this story! Please write more soon!! Seriously, it's really great :)
Reviewer: shyhorse (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 13- And the World Seeps in
i like the fluff and citrus - please don't make this too angsty now - definitely want more of the good stuff!
Reviewer: shyhorse (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 12- Release
me like :)
Reviewer: shyhorse (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 10- Reality Bites, or does it?
mmmmm ---- yummy :)
Reviewer: shyhorse (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 8- The Perfect Date
yay! loving the fluff :)
Reviewer: shyhorse (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 7- Relief
yay :)
Reviewer: MuffNbutter (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 15- Grand Gestures
Awww.... so sweet... both Esme AND Edward... Bella was right: they ARE alike... though I don't need a first hand account of how they're similar in the bedroom, of course... I don't know why, but I've never been fully inteested in seeing those two (or even Jasper/Alice, or Emmett/Rosalie) getting it on... too foreign and strange to me I guess hahaha
But yeah. I'm glad that Bella i goign to forgive Renee, and that she's coming for Thanksgiving... I'm very curious to see hwat her personality is like. And to meet the new Cullen! I wonder what it's name will be... God, I won't even say my predictions, because they're too weird lol
Reviewer: shyhorse (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 4- Music for Two
ooooooh - nice!!!
Reviewer: the_other_cullen_girl (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 15- Grand Gestures
what words of praise havent i used!?! master mind!!! that does not even begin to describe how great your writing is!!! great job!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review every chapter. Your the best too.
Melissa
Reviewer: the_other_cullen_girl (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 11- It's all in the touch
that is stunning!!!!! u r the best!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: the_other_cullen_girl (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 8- The Perfect Date
they r so cute you r brillient!!!
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