Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 45

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 45

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 46

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 46

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 47

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 47

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 48

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 48

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 49

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 45

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 45

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 46

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 46

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 47

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 47

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 48

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 48

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 49
Twilighted :: All-Inclusive, High-Quality Twilight Fan Fiction






Your donations help keep this site running,
thank you very much for the support!
Reviews For Trapped in Heaven
Reviewer: sarasue (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2012 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 17- Just you and I

just found this story and ive read it twice really sweet sexy and wonderful SIGH would love to read more from you read your other story too will it ever be finished i hope so

Reviewer: sarasue (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2012 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 13- And the World Seeps in

omg ' i felt safe i felt love i felt forever'! im a big puddle of mush i love that line the story too thanks for sharing your talent

Reviewer: sarasue (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2012 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 17- Just you and I

THANKYOU FOR THIS BEAUTIFUL ROMANTIC ;D STORY IM GOING THRU A ROUGH PATCH AND THIS MADE ME FORGET AND SMILE FOR A WHILE  I HOPE YOU CONTINUE TO WRITE 

Reviewer: sarasue (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2012 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 17- Just you and I

lovely sweet beautiful story i cried when bella talked about charlie i can totally relate my dads been gone 30 yrs and i still miss him i appreciate the lemons in your story they were sexy sensual and there were no F bombs thank you now im off to read your 2nd story im hooked thanks for putting your heart into this i could tell it was there  I wish you luck love and light

Reviewer: sarasue (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2012 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 7- Relief

wonderful story i was scared in the elevator! 

Reviewer: allthingseandb (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2011 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 17- Just you and I

I just wanted to say although the story isn't new, I wanted to review it, I loved this because it was a steady progression in a love story although the little angst I could handle just enough so i wasnt buried in tears. Bravo! Loved it!

Reviewer: HappyEndingLover (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2011 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 17- Just you and I

That was perfect!

Reviewer: carog91 (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2011 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 2- It's getting hot in here!

haha...Bella is adorable

Reviewer: dudu_tw93 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 17- Just you and I

just amwazing<3

Reviewer: farlilok (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 17- Just you and I

It was so nice to read such a sweet love story.  Thank you so much for sharing it.

Reviewer: KristenM82 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2010 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 17- Just you and I

cute story!

Reviewer: Sydney Witherspoon (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2010 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 10- Reality Bites, or does it?

loving it loving it..you have a very appealling style... thank you...

Reviewer: Sydney Witherspoon (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2010 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 8- The Perfect Date

My name is Sydney...after my father...cute...

Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 17- Just you and I

Great story!!!! KEEP WRITTING!!! Will you finish if not for you?

 

Reviewer: cahhibq (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 17- Just you and I

Love the story, not so much drama or angs in it

great ending

thanks for this fic, really amazing, Love your Edward too!!!

Cinthya A.

 

 

Reviewer: potterchick86 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 2- It's getting hot in here!

that was so cute!

Reviewer: green_eyes4646 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 17- Just you and I

This was a amazing story!!! I hope there is a sequel

Reviewer: twilightcrazy (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 04:06 AM · On: Chapter 1- Reason for Waking

This is a really great story !! Love it!!

Reviewer: Silkissiren (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 17- Just you and I

This was BEAUTIFUL! I found myself tearing at the end... And like you said in one of your earlier chapter notes, your Edward is truly flawless.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading. I have decided to write an epilogue, so watch for it later in the month.

Reviewer: Mya Ray (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 16- A Mended Heart

breaking the stigma of mental illness is HUGE on my list of things I am trying to do.  I struggle with my own dx of bi polar and have a son with schizo affective disorder  I am a certifide vistions for tomorrow instructor (a NAMI sponsored class intended to educate caregivers of children with mental illness)  We are evevry day people that you see on the street.  Mom's teachers friends etc.. Thanks



Author's Response:

Thank you for commenting on this chapter. I am studing to be a professional counselor and I see the stigma that comes with mental illness. I hope that I did the subject justice. This is one chapter that I can't get through without tears, not when I was writing it, editing it , or just rereading. Thank you all the work you do to erase that stigma. Your work is valuable.

Reviewer: jennifertaylor3 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 17- Just you and I

The most beautifulest (is that even a word...lol) purposal ever!! The carriage ride, on Christmas Eve, central park, Music...awwwww.

Although, in my opinion this story was fast forwarded & not enough conversation & thought it turned out really well. I loved the fact that there was no agnst. Edwards character was spot on & that made the story for me.

Great job!!! I would love to read your other story as it sounds very interesting. But I only read stories that are finished ( i can't handle waiting for conclusions). Do you ever plan to finish it? I noticed that it wasn't updated sine July.

Reviewer: jennifertaylor3 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 14- Going home and letting go

I think Edward is absolutly perfect!!!! Exactly how he is suppose to be!! Great chapter!!!

Reviewer: jennifertaylor3 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 7- Relief

Just need some clarifications....

In the elavator, why did bella need to change from a skirt & sweater, to his shirt?

4 years of walking to work everyday & they never once made eye contact is "way" unrealistic...4 months to a year would be more suitable. 4 years???

One other problem I noticed was how fast things moved along in this chapter. She really just met Edward & to up & go out of town without even considering it is just way too fast. She should have been given the invitation to gp to the vinyard with the "soul" purpose of ecaping the reporters, & then maybe taking a little time to consider it. After she got there, their first contact should have been a hug maybe & a kiss on the cheek. Things should have started out slowly since their life wasn't in danger any more. Took more time to get to know each other.

Please don't think I am running your story down because I am certainly not. I have read many, many stories here and only 7 has been saved to my favourites. I am very picky over the stories I read & let me tell u, the elevator chapters were amazing!!! I love that you made Edwards character flawless. He was the real gentleman to Bella & I loved it!!

This is afterall a Review and what I mentioned above is just some points that bothered me. So please, don't hate me for speaking my opinions.

I can't wait to see how you proceed!!!

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 17- Just you and I

Excellent story.  Loved the suspense of being trapped in the elevator for a long time.  The beginning to know one another and to start realizing their crushes were founded on each other.  That their personalities were even better than their fantasies.  The slowly falling deeper in love as the story progressed.  The romantic dates of candlelight dates.  More thought behind than actual spending a ton.  When he did spend and impressed her was still all about the romance of being together.  The love relationship between Edward's family and Bella and close bond that was built and growing stronger as days, months passed.  Finally Edward being there to help her deal with all the pain of her relationship with her parents.  Dealing with Charlie's death and the feelings of being abandoned by her mother.  The budding closeness between Bella and her mother.  Also the romantic way Edward proposed, taking her to all the places that had meaning for him and her.  Then the final location of the gazebo with lights and music.  Totally the ultimate in romantic.  I am still curious what was Bella going to give Edward for Christmas?  Or did I miss it?  I know she planned it for a while, but not sure what it was or was going to be?

Truly a story for a hopeless romantic.  Very well written, emotional, and loving.  All the emotions were open during the story.  Excitement of falling in love, being in love and together, sharing past experiences, dealing with loss of parent, feelings of abandonment and unworthiness, and the ultimate being in love and wanting to spend the rest of your life with someone.  I found myself sitting in the library at college with tears rolling down my face sitting at a table with guys doing Calculus homework and computer programming.  Talk about being embarrassed, but it didn't stop me from wanting more.  So I will read your other story as well.  Thank you for taking the time to write you story and post it on this website to share with your fellow Edward/Bella fans.  Just love the Twilight Saga and their love story.

 



Author's Response:

I can't tell you how amazed I am at the time you took to review. I am touched! I am so glad that you saw the true spirit of their love. Thank you for your amazing insight as well as your devotion to the story and the characters. You are awesome!

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 17- Just you and I

Excellent story.  Loved the suspense of being trapped in the elevator for a long time.  The beginning to know one another and to start realizing their crushes were founded on each other.  That their personalities were even better than their fantasies.  The slowly falling deeper in love as the story progressed.  The romantic dates of candlelight dates.  More thought behind than actual spending a ton.  When he did spend and impressed her was still all about the romance of being together.  The love relationship between Edward's family and Bella and close bond that was built and growing stronger as days, months passed.  Finally Edward being there to help her deal with all the pain of her relationship with her parents.  Dealing with Charlie's death and the feelings of being abandoned by her mother.  The budding closeness between Bella and her mother.  Also the romantic way Edward proposed, taking her to all the places that had meaning for him and her.  Then the final location of the gazebo with lights and music.  Totally the ultimate in romantic.  I am still curious what was Bella going to give Edward for Christmas?  Or did I miss it?  I know she planned it for a while, but not sure what it was or was going to be?

Truly a story for a hopeless romantic.  Very well written, emotional, and loving.  All the emotions were open during the story.  Excitement of falling in love, being in love and together, sharing past experiences, dealing with loss of parent, feelings of abandonment and unworthiness, and the ultimate being in love and wanting to spend the rest of your life with someone.  I found myself sitting in the library at college with tears rolling down my face sitting at a table with guys doing Calculus homework and computer programming.  Talk about being embarrassed, but it didn't stop me from wanting more.  So I will read your other story as well.  Thank you for taking the time to write you story and post it on this website to share with your fellow Edward/Bella fans.  Just love the Twilight Saga and their love story.

 

You must login (register) to review.




Share/Save/Bookmark


© 2008, 2009 Twilighted Enterprises, LLC. All Rights Reserved.
Unauthorized duplication is a violation of applicable laws.
Privacy Policy | Terms of Service

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the intellectual property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.