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Reviews For Behind the Lens
Reviewer: mommyjgv (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2010 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 2

Once again...I love it!  Thank you again for sharing your talent!

Reviewer: TerriG (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2010 11:20 AM · On: Chapter 2

love it

Reviewer: TerriG (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2010 11:11 AM · On: Chapter 1

love it

Reviewer: yna (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2010 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 2

love the phone conversation. they're really missed each other...damn i almost crying...looking forward to the next chapter..hope really soon..plezzz :)

Reviewer: andrearmena (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2010 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 2

Love it!

Reviewer: EmpressOperaDiva (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2010 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 2

I remember how painful this time was for me as a fan. In fact, anytime that these two are apart I am in some measure of agony. Then I think... They must be miserable. I am sure that this was crazy and as much as Kristen had to cut her hair to feel Joan out, I am sure it did bother her on another level. Because her hair was just beautiful. Still. It's growing back now. 

 

I think you have done a great job with establishing the relationship that Dakota and Kristen will have as well as the idea that the paparazzi are just lingering... EVERYWHERE. I Can imagine what will happen with Rob's mobbing and such. NY was killer for him too. 

 

Can I also just say how much I adore the way you wrote him responding to her hair? I love that he loves her no matter what she looks like. That's true love! 

 

These two make my heart jump and leap and do all sorts of crazy Lord of the Dance shit in my chest. 

 

Thank you for the update love! See you soon with the next! 

 

All my best,

Michelle/OperaDiva6

Reviewer: Rory22 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 2

Nice chapter. I liked how you showed that Kris had complex emotions about new hair and their dialogue over the phone is just so sweet. And it's nice to see them interact with some other people too. Can't wait to read your vertion of their reunion.

Reviewer: jerseyhalliwell (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 2

this was a wonderful chapter :)

 

the banter was epic but so were the sweet, tender moments when they admitted to missing each other :)

Reviewer: KiwiEdfan (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 2

Awww *My little bad-ass rock star* So cute!

Love chapter #2. Cant wait for the next update.

Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 2

I like the fact that you are addressing their time apart. I think you have to if you want to give the full impact of them seeing each other again at Comic Con. I can be patient. It will be worth it!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 2

so great!

Reviewer: Mickster (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 2

Thank you so much for the update and without such heartache. They pine for eachother, but it is nice that they are talking about it instead of having breakdowns. It was seriously kicking my ass to read about their depression and freaking out over not being together. I took it to heart and it was pulling on me long after I read it. So I am glad that this chapter was 2 more healthy people missing eachother. And that you are not going to drag the separation out.

Reviewer: Libertysfic (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 2

I'm dying of love.

Dakota freaking out so effin cute. I love this story and the fact it's the summer which is sad that it was a year ago. Wonderful flashback of 'TR' and 'RM' filming.

Reviewer: TwiMomof2Monkeys (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 2

Loved it!   Poor Kris..."it's not like I could glue it back on"...I had to laugh at that.  Sad, but so true.

Could Rob be any more supportive and wonderful?  I WANT THIS MAN. 

Reviewer: amazeofgrace (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 2

"Good night, my little bad-ass rock star."

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 2

Poor guys!  Long distance relationships are hard.  But when they see eachother- the heat is explosive!  I am so looking forward to it!  Great chapter!

Reviewer: twilightmom96 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 2

as always love your writing.

loving having a sequel!

Reviewer: pennycocktail (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 2

More, please...

Reviewer: mgg (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 2

Cool, great as always I love how you make the banter part of there personalities and how it's def sounds like something the would say or do.

I do still think that you and The Shrew have like psiquic powers or monitoring equipment hocked up to them, haha

Anyway, great chapter

XXOO

Reviewer: sportress (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 2

this phone conversation was the best!!!   I alternately laughed and sighed with sadness....

Reviewer: saene (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 2

LOVE IT!

Fantastice chapter

Reviewer: solecito (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 2

wondering what he'll get her?????........ can't wait.

Reviewer: linhey (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 2

I love it.. I love you.. I love them (:

Reviewer: Dada2612 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 2

Fantastic chapter. Dakota was soo sweet.

Please update soon!!!

Reviewer: oneillf4 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oh my god amazing...loving chapter 2...can wait for more!

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