Oh my god. I'm bawling my eyes out here! I'm speechless. I had a thought that maybe she was going to die, but I didn't want to believe it, and then it happened so quickly. The tears just started flowing the second you said this:
The breath that I screamed came out in coughs. And that's when I realized that no one was listening.
I'm still in shock, and still crying. That is really really emotional stuff at the end. I loved the start, it was beautiful how they were together every day and how she said to him that she missed him, but then he said it to her.. *cries* The last line was pretty heartbreaking, but an amazing closing line.
Well done :)
I'd love to add this to my Eternal Hope series for Alice/Jasper stories, I want other Jalice fans to read this.
Author's Response: Hi there!!
I'm soo happy you liked my story!!
I'd be honored for you to add it to ETERNAL HOPE series (would also lovers a link so I can check it out ;) I'm not down on all the sights lolz)
I wrote that for the BLACK BALLOON contest on FF.net. We had to write ANGSTY stuff. THe hubz swears that wasn't angsty but hey lolz... I tried ;)
I do have one more ALICE/Jasper story called the STORYTELLER (its the only other one I have on my page). Its about JASPER as a homeless man and Alice as a receptionist. It all takes place in Bham (where I live)
OMG! But seriously!! Thank you soo much for your review. It makes me soo happy that people out there take the time to tell me their thoughts.
I lovers you for it!
-erikasbuddy