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Reviewer: DeltaFC101 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2011 11:11 AM · On: Chapter 4

Please write more. This is fantastic!

Reviewer: 3diamonds (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2011 06:24 PM · On: Prologue

Just sending you some love...would love an update, just sayin :}

Hope all is well with you!

Reviewer: lauren_joy_mason (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 4

love it keep writing and i hope you update soon xx

Reviewer: Tina02 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 4

Loving this story.
Can't wait to read what happens next

Reviewer: mayi (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 4

TY for updating i've missed this story! i loved the chapter and can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: mayi (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 4

TY for updating i've missed this story! i loved the chapter and can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: twihardfan722 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 4

Just found your story and am really liking it so far! Can't wait to see where you take it from here. Keep up the good work and update soon!:)

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 4

Glad to see this story back :) Love the mini golf (pool scene from Fear lol)

Reviewer: tennisgirl (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 4

um...you said that this was based off the hindi movie aetbaar. is it going to end the same way?

Reviewer: Kyvak (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 4

I am so glad you posted again! I missed you! Great story, and I love Edward so far, even though he was a little violent earlier....

~Kyvak~

Reviewer: vampiremom1221 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 4

Glad to see you back.  Can't wait for more.  This was a great chapter and a wonderful first date for a girll as sheltered as Bella.

Reviewer: rmcrms5 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 4

Yeah, an update! I hope we see more bikerward soon.

Reviewer: enb4life (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2010 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 3

Wow... Ed's got a bit of a temper huh.  I can't wait to see how this pans out.

Reviewer: eirol (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 11:10 PM · On: Prologue

hi! i made a promise to one of the authors here (after i got upset when she pulled out her story without me completely reading it) that i'll try to send reviews for all the stories that i'm reading here as that was for encouragement and to improve the writings of the author and as our (readers) way of showing our appreciation to your efforts.  So here goes for you... on this chapter. 

Carlisle behaviour was ok to be in panic and all about his daughter if the daughter is still a kid or at least in grade school but doesn't look good if the daughter is already in high school isn't it? He would look like a overbearing, possesive father.  And this is were you forget to write the age of Bella at this particular chapter being a prologue. I'm thinking was she still a kid here or what?

That's all for now. Wish you'll update faster and finish this story till the end and not leave us hanging. Good luck!

Reviewer: yankeerose (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 3

How could Bella resist a badboy on a Harley?

Reviewer: twiggs66 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 3

wow! Darkward is really evil in this fic...I'm loving it.  It would seem that both Carlisle and Edward are extreme "emotional" guys and thats why Bella is attracted to Edward...he's her dad, only darker.  I may have to look up the movie that this is loosely based on, sounds like a great story.  I'm hooked on this fic, so I'm hoping you'll update soon. 

Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 3

Cliff hangers are ok as long as the updates are quick! Like giving O2 to a suffocating reader. ;) I guess this is why so many women get beat up. They see a sweet guy, kind, polite and so endearing and things are wonderful... till he gets upset or mad. Then the guy takes it out on the woman! Of course then he's sorry. He'll never do it again! He promises. Yea, right. Loving this tale though! I hope Edward won't hit Bella but it seems to be inevitable. Bring on the next chapter!!! I'm ready! You're spinning one heck of a yarn.
Joan

Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 2

Hmm... not nice, Edward. He's so gentle with Bella but doesn't like being disrespected by others and lashes out in a big way. So if Carlisle is Bella's dad, who preytell is Edward's Dad? Wow... It will be intersting to see if Edward can contain his anger when he's with Bella. Or maybe we should pray that Bella doesn't piss him the hell off! Good story!!
Joan

Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 1

Carlisle drives me crazy with the "Princess" but I love how protective he is. I know it's overkill but still it's sweet. Bella is classy and a good daughter and Edward? wow, he's is even sexier in this tale than he is on the screen. Oh, I mean book. *g* I am enjoying biker Edward very much. The story is really interesting and I'm on the edge of my seat here waiting for something to happen that I know won't be good. Or maybe it will? I have to keep reading to see. :) Love it or Hate it?? Definitely LOVE IT!
Joan

Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 12:02 PM · On: Prologue

That's scary. Did Carlisle cause the crash? And Bella is their child now? Cool. :)

Reviewer: courtney1022 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 3

LUV IT LUV IT LUV IT     CONTINUE PLEASE

Reviewer: jnc420 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 3

creepy nd adoriable...loves it

Reviewer: newecullen1 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 3

i'm not upset about the domestic abuse that u wrote last chapter. i'm against violence of any kind myself but i understand the purpose of its use. you're just being realistic. edward is so impulsive. i wonder where he is going to take her on this date? kudos....

Reviewer: newecullen1 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 10:04 PM · On: Prologue

i like the plot for your story. i've never seen the movie fear but i'm interested in where you are taking this story. kudos on your writing...

p.s. when i saw your banner i couldn't stop laughing...carlisle popping up everywhere

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 3

Can't wait for the date!

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