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Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 1

It would be interesting if Bella ended up this way. Edward probably would have hated himself for letting him change her. But yes, I think her transition to being a vampire in BD was a little too easy. Thank you for making it a little more believable.

Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this, although I wish it was longer!

This is a slightly more realistic view of vampire Bella, and I love the angst you infused into this!

Reviewer: Persephonesfolly (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2008 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 1

I'm with you about Bella's transformaton in BD without the consequences all the others had to undergo. It was far too pat and convenient. Your version makes more sense and your Bella lacks the Marysue type qualities Meyer's Bella had. You did a great job with Edward as well. He really agonized alongside Bella.
Bravo!

Reviewer: polaris (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 1

I really liked the idea of your one-shot. I prefer this Bella over the one in the last installment of the series, I think it's much more logical for her to feel nothing but the hunger (at least at first). You described the Edward/Bella interaction perfectly :-) I felt bad for Edward though...

Reviewer: amandasaurus (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2008 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hmm, I don't think that there are any chains in the world that could hold a vampire...

But still a really good story!

Reviewer: kARLOTITA09 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2008 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 1

i hated mary sue bella... i loved this.. there had to be something wrong with her!
great writing!

Reviewer: abcd1234 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2008 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 1

Very interesting! I agree that the Bella's change shouldn't have been quite so easy- especially when we saw what newborn vampires are really like in Eclipse. This seems to be much more realistic. I especially like your characterization of Edward.

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