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Reviewer: abk (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2011 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Closer
cant wait for the next chapter, thanks.abk
Reviewer: shegoddess (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2011 03:35 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Closer
Poor Bells...Edward will protect her. I bet Grandma cant help but love her when she meets her. I hope!! Esme too
Reviewer: shegoddess (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2011 01:23 AM · On: Chapter 20 - A Night of Shocks
just tell me Aro had nothing to do with what happened to Bella. It just seems so conveniant how careful they were and how Aro had a photo. I think I will thrwo up if he is.
Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2011 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Closer
thanks as always awesome chapter i think the romance is going good not to fast not to slow
Reviewer: shegoddess (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2011 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Becoming Mrs. Cullen Part 2
I felt it was real. Bella is not gonna be party happy and neither is Jazz and he father. Though I am totaly pissed at Charlie. He says he wants to be there for her but when given the chance to support her he throws her away. Not happy. I am glad there was a little piece of safety for her in the end.
Reviewer: Chiquitaf16 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2011 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Closer
All i can say is sooo good. I've been off and on reading this story all day. What a wonderful distraction your writting makes me forget the real world duties, thanks.
Reviewer: s3xyr0s (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2011 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Closer
the plot is really good. all or mostly all the characters were well seeded except edwards family. i cannot wait for the next chapter. the romance is just right. they have to get to know each other first in order to establish a stronger bond. love it!!!!
Reviewer: shegoddess (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2011 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Stand by you
I hope they will do a D&C on her or give her the day after pill so there are no babies involved.
Reviewer: shegoddess (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2011 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Malady
I dont think i can cry anymore
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2011 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Closer
Bella is slowly getting to be a stronger person. I love that Edward and Bella are starting to show some feelings for one another. Edward is also starting to realize that Bella is her own person, and doesn't need special favors from him. Love it. Edward wants everyone to respect Bella too. Love it! CAn't wait for more.
Reviewer: shegoddess (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2011 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Smoke
Ohhhhhhh....Edward is not very nice!
Reviewer: shegoddess (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2011 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 4 - A Plea
from a different chapter it just keeps bugging me. Who would be so hateful to speak and blame a child for her mother leaving like it was her fault. I hope that is just Bellas guilt and misunderstanding.
Reviewer: crf720 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2011 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Closer
so glad you updated! hope for more soon please!
Reviewer: shegoddess (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2011 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Vision Clash
Ha! Good for him. But why would Rose call him darling?
Reviewer: BRITANY14 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2011 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Closer
please update soon
Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2011 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Closer
this ought to be good...can't wait
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2011 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Closer
Things were going so well with Edward and Bella. Hopefully this visit won't set them back.
I can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: dupak (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2011 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Closer
Go Bella! And Edward is being so sweet! He must be so happy that she made the first move! Thanks for the update - looking forward to the next!
Reviewer: Lains (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2011 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Closer
Really loving your story - updates are read as soon as possible!
Reviewer: ast (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2011 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Closer
oh my God it keeps getting interesting!:D
can't wait for your next update... again!....
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2011 12:10 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Closer
Here come the blue birds of unhappiness! I'm glad Bella and Edward are getting closer. I'm proud of Bella for telling Edward what she wants, too.
Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2011 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Closer
Good for Bella on getting a job unrelated to Edward.Good to have a ;ittle space for perspective.
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2011 11:46 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Closer
Good Chapter.....
Reviewer: scricez (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2011 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 21 -The Beginning of Intimacy
Hi! I'm glad Bella stood up for herself again against Lauren, she definetely deserved it..as for Aro and Edward it seems their relationship goes way back in time but I still don't understand what happened between those 2 and Edward's mother..
I really appreciated that even when Edward did not talk to Bella he slept in her room on the couch in case she needed him..that really spoke volumes..
And they kissed! Yes!! ;) I'm not too surprised that Bella initiated it, I don't think Edward would have done it given what happened to her..
Can't wait to read what happens next!
Reviewer: s3xyr0s (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2011 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 21 -The Beginning of Intimacy
i cannot wait for the next one. i am loving the story! great job!
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