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Reviewer: navy_wife (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2011 11:04 PM · On: Gulp
LOL So...decided to see some of your other work, while I "patiently" wait for SS. :) Cute!
Reviewer: vampgurl777 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 11:11 AM · On: Gulp
lololololololololololololololololololololololololololololol that was funny.
Author's Response: hehe. Thanks!
Reviewer: Dreamer4RP (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 05:29 AM · On: Gulp
Awwww.. so cute!
Author's Response: Thanks SO much for reading AND reviewing!
xxNaya
Reviewer: welshcakes68 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 08:45 AM · On: Gulp
Haha! I would have liked a bit more of the kid backstory, or maybe another chapter to see how someone does attempt to talk their way out of that one. =] But still really good.*WC68*
Author's Response: Thanks SO much for reading AND reviewing.
I'm glad that you did enjoy it. LOL, I don't even know where to begin on how he would get out of that one. Geez poor kid . . . maybe in the next scene there would be like a wet stain on the front of his pants or something. Haha.
xxNaya
Reviewer: sunfire04 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 02:54 PM · On: Gulp
lol this was a cute story. Of course Charlie would be behind him in line.
Author's Response: Right??
LOL, like a TOTAL screwed moment.
I'm glad you enjoyed my little ditty. Thanks SO much for reading and reviewing.
xxNaya
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 06:48 PM · On: Gulp
lmfao
wait a go edward
it was sweet and simple
loved it
well until next time
mbellaandedwardm
Author's Response: Thank you SO much for reading and reviewing! I'm REALLY glad that you enjoyed this. Your review means the world to me.
xxNaya
Reviewer: bella93 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 07:51 PM · On: Gulp
lol yeah yeah
shelbalicous i like it lol :D woohoo
keep writing hun!
love you!
Reviewer: bella93 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 05:59 PM · On: Gulp
love it hun but the text needs to be bigger im blind....
lol but it was funny...poor edward
he might survive
Author's Response: Shelbalicious, what you doing on this side??? hehe.
I KNOW right? I tried to fix that stupid text thing like a bagillion times and couldn't figure it out. I'm comptarded, seriously. So I just left it and was like, whatever my computer hates me.
Remember we taked about that, how he hates that I'm all "plucking the keys" and no "gentle caresses" GAH, drama queen.
Love ya!
Reviewer: FRK921 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2010 03:33 PM · On: Gulp
heheheeh
Author's Response: I'm glad it made you smile. Thank you so much for reading!!!
xxNaya
Reviewer: marti1013 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 04:51 AM · On: Gulp
OMG, that was great! Hilarious, seriously, you should expand and do another one shot on that. You wouldn't believe how doing one little one-shot can turn into a series of one shots! I did it with a teeny tiny plot bunny bite for Harry Potter that turned into a series of 8 one shots/short chapter stories. I know other readers would love to read what you sent me, and I truly appreciate the effort. Please consider submitting an expanded one of that....Please *pouting and offering cutie Edward baby pics*
Marti!
Author's Response: Aww, Marti . . . LOL, I can't say anything's official, but maybe when the hype from my other story sort of dies off and I have some breathing room then I could look into it. If you like angst and dark themes then you might like that story (Stolen Souls), by the way. LOL, shameless plug.
And gosh, chica, I can't thank you enough for your support!
Have a great week!
xxNaya
Reviewer: GGSophie (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 07:47 PM · On: Gulp
Great story :D
Author's Response: Aww thanks. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
xxNayay
Reviewer: lilmissb (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 07:15 PM · On: Gulp
hahahaha awesome
Author's Response: Thanks SO much for reading and reviewing!
xxNaya
Reviewer: marti1013 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 05:05 PM · On: Gulp
Oh that was absolutely cute! And having lived in a small town all my life I completely understand. Poor Charlie, probably getting hit with the 'oh my god, my daughter's growing up and thinking about sex!' A Charlie POV, even a short one would be great if you ever felt in the mood for it.
I loved it, thank you!
Marti
Author's Response: Hola Marti!
Thanks SO Much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Reviews mean the world to me and I value yours. I'm SO sorry but I'm done with this story. I REALLY am very happy with where it ended and how it turned out. I don't want to ruin it, because honestly I think I would, lol, by adding to it. It was my very first one shot, with was hard for me because up until that point I had only seen stories in the sense of long and detailed and well chapters and development, so it was a test for me to see if I could write a one-shot with a definitive beginning, middle and end and still have development but not be a couple chapters. So I'm really very proud of this little ditty and I feel so bad when everyone asks me to continue it.
BUT just for you . . . and this is sorta off the top of my head so bear with me . . .
Charlie's POV.
It's aspirin.
I think I saw Bells hacking up a storm the other day. That's all, aspirin. She's just sick and having Edwin pick up her meds, that's all it is. Kid's pretty green though and I don't think he's moved, or breathed, since I got here.
"What's in the bag son?" I said as I narrowed my eyes at him. He was a weird kid, always acting funny and mumbling. I don't know what Bells sees in the kid. I blame Renee. She's been trying for those two since diapers. A wheeze brought my attention back to the chattering boy in front of me.
He better say aspirin.
"I-I-my mom's-I" I shook my head, kid wasn't all there.
"Hand over the bag son," I said leaning in and taking it from his shaking hand. His eyes closed and I swear I thought I heard him whisper a prayer.
The small white bag rumpled as I opened it and quickly closed it back up, darting my stare back to Edwin. "Get in the cruiser," was all I managed as I fisted the bag and grabbed his shirt when he didn't move. I marched him out of that drugstore and intended to drive him straight to his house and have a talk with those free loving mother of his, not to mention that script writing father of his.
The door slam to the cruiser echoed around the parking lot as I locked him in the back. I couldn't believe this. And one thought rang through my mind as I started the car and looked out through narrow slits.
I blame Renee.
Reviewer: edwrdcu77enlover (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 03:54 PM · On: Gulp
oh Naya, I enjoyed it so much! cracking hilarious!!! this time was even better :)
would you make it multichapter or leave it here?
I can't wait for what you write next!
xoxo
Author's Response: Stop stalking me! I see you outside . . . don't think I don't.
AHHHH you know I love you!!!!!!!!!!!
What I'm writing next . . . hehe . . . is a crackfic about Edward and Gollum from Lord of the Rings. It's disgusting and hilarious!
Then later I've got a Tanya story in mind, like with Carlisle as vampires WAY before Twilight and Esme because Vampire Tanya is like thousands of years old and I think there is a great story there because the Volturi murdered her mother . . . that one I've been thinking about for a while . . . not TO MENTION that I think her and Carlisle got it on . . . just saying I mean HE WAS lonely and she would totally have jumped at the chance in my mind . . . and he SO wasn't a virgin when he married Esme and well being so religious he was definitely a virgin as a human . . . so who's that leave? TANYA. I'm excited about that one . . . doing the research right now, it's complicated because it would be in a different time period and with different accents . . . a lot of research there. But I think it will be good. That one is for way later though.
I'm also finishing up a piece I wrote about a mystery with a Carlisle in a bad situation for a contest, a one shot. That one will probably be posted in the next month or something.
LOL . . . busy me. Hehe.
Reviewer: heathern (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 03:44 PM · On: Gulp
Yeah that was to funny
Author's Response: Hehe . . . I'm glad you thought so. Thanks SO much for reading and reviewing!
xxNaya
Reviewer: Some Brief Folly (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 02:54 PM · On: Gulp
I got to the last line and busted out laughing!!! Great little one-shot.
Author's Response: Thanks SO much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you liked this little ditty. I enjoyed writing it a lot.
xxNaya
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