Gee if i was Bella i would have just grabbed a bottle of wine or a six-pack, locked my self in the bathroom and had my own party that way when i need to throw up i wouldn't have to worry so much and the cold floor would help the hangover. lol

 

might be childish but wouldn't have to worry bout the clean up it would be fairly easy. 

hmmmmm. I think that she handled that fairly well. considering that she has to work with him and with what Alice spilt about him asking about her and knowing it was her.

so why did he ended it? cos he wanted to goto a didd school and like said most relationships don't work cos of all the crazy hours? is this another Edwards (not so) 'brilliant' plan to save her pain? 

 

 

i really love this story so far, please keep writing and post again soon.

Something we don't know about Jake and Edward do. It probably was after Bella left. I hope we find out soon that and why is Rosalie so angry with Bella.

If I were here I would have left and then appologize to Alice. But if she had, well this story would be a little boring. :)

Wonderful story.  I can't wait to see where it goes!

I do hope you update soon!!  I really like this story and I miss it!!!  Please give us more!!  :)

I CAN'T STOP THINKING ABOUT THIS STORY!!!  I read the chapters days ago, and I still think about it during the most random of times...

I want to get into Edward's head.  I'm dying to see what happens next, especially at Bella's first day on the job.  I wonder what Edward must've told Rosalie to make her hate Bella so much.  I want to know why Edward felt the need to break Bella's heart. I think about why Alice wasn't slightly more supportive of Bella at her party, considering the Dr Heartbreak situation and knowing how utterly uncomfortable (to say the least) Bella must've been feeling.

I really hope you'll continue with this story!!

Okay, I'm officially ending my long-standing legacy of lurking to let you know how much I love this story.  The way you've painted Bella as both intelligent and competent, (but still slightly clueless), and Alice as her smart, committed, professional friend is wonderful...I'm so sick of the usual characterizations which rob both characters of any kind of richness.  Alice is always a hyper, controlling shopaholic who is slightly insensitive to Bella's needs while Bella is always depicted as a hugely clumsy, fashion-backward, pseudo-intellectual with co-dependency issues.  It's refreshing to see that you've set up a strong friendship between the two that is based on interests completely separate from Bella's issues with Edward and his family.  It is interesting that Alice can now act as fresh eyes for Bella as she FINALLY begins to trudge through her loads of emotional baggage regarding her failed relationship with Edward (and the resulting emotional effects that have left her scarred).

I can't wait to find out the motivations behind Edward's decision to end their relationship...It seems fairly obvious that he still cares in some capacity.  He's shown that he cares about her well-being by taking such good care of her after she passed out on the bathroom floor, and by bringing the hangover cure kit :).  That was a really sweet gesture!!!  

I noticed after going back and re-reading Bella's comment right before Edward dropped the break-up bomb, that she stated "I don't want to go", which leads me to think that maybe Edward's actions stemmed from Bella's intention not to leave him to pursue her professional career (grad school, internship, etc)?  He could've been thinking that if he let her stay, she might regret it and resent him for it later???  I hope he has a good reason for her if/when they actually talk about it.  Can't wait to witness Bella's first day at work!  I'm loving the longing looks Edward is sending her way, and hope to see more soon!  I'd love maybe an EPOV chapter too!  

Anyway, sorry for the monster review, but I wanted to let you know that you're an amazing writer- I'm hooked because I can actually feel what the characters are feeing.  I'm sooo looking forward to more updates (wink wink)!

I love this story!!!!!

 

will there be any Jake/Edward fistfights? That'd be awesome.

I like this story and can't wait for an update!

My stomach feels like it's going to wretch.  The feelings that are going through her mind are completely believable.  Great job as a writer... keep it coming.  I really want to here Edward's point of view though... I know he wasn't happy about seeing Jacob.  he must have heard that Bella used him as a pick-me-up-lay.  Perhaps he came back one dark night after he had broken Bella, with the idea in mind to beg for Bella's forgiveness, only to peek through a window or hear through a door, that Bella had shacken up with a (stupid, annoying and anything but attractive) native american guy.  I really want to hear what was going through his mind as he and Bella exchanged their first words after those years apart... or how he felt after seeing her for the first time.

 

But really, all I want is another chapter that will at least give me some cheek caressing and hushed whispers of Bella's name on Edwards lips... keep it comin girl. 

LOVE your story! My friend Barbarito recommended it and I am so happy she did. Your writing is great and you have me totally captivated.

Edward has been sneaky and I can't wait to see what was behind his decision to break up with Bella. Also, why Rose is so cold to Bella.

Definitely looking forward to more!

Thanks!!

I have always loved a spunky Alice... keep her coming.

Hey... what the hell happened between her and Edward!!!  And THANK YOU for keeping Jake out of the picture, early.  I really can't stand him... meddlesome twerp.

This story is simply lovely!!!  Please continue!  I can't wait to find out what happened to make Rose so angry with Bella.  Also, I can't wait to see Bella at the hospital wuth Edward and to find out why he broke up with her!!!