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Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 9-Dweller On the Threshold

Wonderful chapter....Forgot about her buying the condoms! LOL!  Can't wait for more and of course more NTE!!!



Author's Response:

Ah condoms... my inner 12 year old boy comes thru... LOL!

glad you liked it!

more soon! always!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: jsjohnson73 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 03:14 AM · On: Chapter 9-Dweller On the Threshold

I saw some pictures today of Rob back in Vancouver and it made me think of this story.  He wasn't smiling in the pics.  He looked tired, worn down.  He looked like what I imagine he looked like in your mind before Jen.  It made me very sad to see the pics.  I just wanted to run and tell the paps and the fans to leave him alone! 

This was a very telling chapter.  To see how the idea of being "caught" or "outted" affected him, to hear his internal monologue about his life, his fame, the craziness of it all.  Very moving. 



Author's Response:

I feel you. This Vancouver reshoot is driving me crazy. So much flurry over this... people with financial concerns rushing off to flyout to see him... really. maddening... and the paps pics are just too much. 

This chapter is really the beginning of this entire story. To have a discussion with Rob, as one of his caring fans, to tell him what he really means to many of us. That he is not just a pretty face, that there is such respect in the world for him. Which is maybe why I get ruffled for being called creepy for writing these stories in the first place. 

If people really knew the manner of respect i had for this man, this chapter, and the corresponding chapter in NTE tells it all. 

He's just a man, in need of some relief, in need of normalcy. 

I can't even truly imagine what goes on in his head when this subject comes up. I am sure it affects him deeply.

thank you, for seeing it. For understanding. It's the whole reason for this story.

more soon.

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: Carson1 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 02:34 AM · On: Chapter 9-Dweller On the Threshold

Hi hun!  Wonderful  chapter as always!  Such great insight into what he's thinking, how's he's struggling with fame, and really just wants to be normal.  The boy does work fast!-He's passionate and emotional-lucky Jen~!  So looking forward to what is coming up. 

Cheers, Leslie



Author's Response:

Thanks so much Leslie. 

This chapter really is the heart of the story- it's not about snut and awkward boys, it's about the cost of fame, and what it does to Rob. 

So glad you liked it!

ah, he is such a fast worker... but i truly believe in love at first sight..... why not for Rob.

thanks my dear!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 01:21 AM · On: Chapter 9-Dweller On the Threshold

It's so great to find out about Robert's thoughts. Yeah, he is fast, falling in love after two days, but well...

I really like "Need to Escape", and it gets so much better, more complex, more intriguing with this companion. Thanks, can't wait to read more! (I'm especially curious about what Nick did to make Rob hit him, but I guess I'll just have to wait...)



Author's Response:

thanks my dear.

Do I believe in love at first sight. absolutely. And does Rob seem the type to jump in full tilt, absolutely. 

I am so glad you are enjoying NTE, and I can only hope this companion story adds more depth to it as we go. I look back at these chapters and think about how far the story has come. It's such a joy to be able add more to the story this way.

Ahh...Nick... I hope to have some of OTT up by end of May that will help to illuminate....

thanks so much for your support, for reading and reviewing and rating! I enjoy every word you the fabulous readers offer me.They are inspiration.

thank you so much! 

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: LiRock (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 12:55 AM · On: Chapter 9-Dweller On the Threshold

I want to thank you for helping to put into words how Rob must feel about the whole fame thing. I've always felt anguish for him having to deal with that all the time. You can see it in his face whenever the paps get his picture.

I've also felt uncomfortable with the teenybopperish fan image we have all been lumped into when I for one feel that there is more to it than that. Jens' words help a little to describe what I'm sure many of us would like to say. Thank you for saying it for the rest of us.

Yes he is sexy, and the eye candy appeal is definatly there, but there are many more reasons for his appeal and you have described it better than I could.



Author's Response:

Thanks LiRock. 

It is the impetus to this story really. My frustration about the craziness that is his life. This chapter is really the beginning for me. My inspiration. Just a conversation with a worn Robert Pattinson and a caring fan that just wants him to have peace in his life. This is how it all began really in my musings.

and here we are... 

It's a subject I care deeply about. And if I could, I'd offer any peace I could. Not in the creepy sort of way. Just a bit of quiet. 

He is so much more than good looks. His talent goes far beyond that which he has been labeled. I look forward to seeing his continued growth as he matures. 

sigh. It's ironic that he is in Vancouver doing reshoots right now, just as he was in this story... 

thanks my dear. It means so much to hear that people understand what i hope i convey. I am glad I am not alone in my thoughts.

thank you.

more soon, always!

MWAH!

steph

 

Reviewer: Brumbear (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 9-Dweller On the Threshold

"Thank God for the Pattinson stamina"  <-- LMAO

That sentence above is why I love your stories, your writing is so real and easy to read. Such a joy to see another update!

I love to get a glimpse in Rob's inner musings, so grown-up on one hand and so adolescent on the other!

Can't wait for the next update!



Author's Response:

LOL! glad you enjoy it! 

I'm a simple girl really, I am so happy to hear that my writing style works. It's comfortable and enjoyable for me to write.

Oh Rob. he really has that duality I think. I think we all do, it just comes out in him more due to all the craziness in his life. 

thanks so much my dearest! 

more soon!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: lattecoug (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 9-Dweller On the Threshold

Brilliant!  I knew Rob and I had something in common--Boddington's!!  YUM.

I'm really enjoying reading this from his POV.  I'm looking forward to how you weave the new stuff into the chapters that already had some of his perspective.

Great job!



Author's Response:

heeehee... oh Boddington's.... so much better than Heine's. 

so glad you are enjoying! i hope the new stuff entertains! it's a lot to do! LOL!

thanks my dear! 

more soon!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: m244robp (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 5 Safe with You

Reading these chapters truly is reliving the early parts of NTE.  It's delightful to be reacquainted with the details of the start of their story.  When taken in context of where NTE is right now, it shows how far they've come.

Great job as always.  I'll always be one of your biggest fans.



Author's Response:

thanks Michelle! 

it's strange to be back here, and yet, offers insight into their lives where they are in NTE, very true... 

I am having a blast writing the story again, from a different angle. I didn't think it would grab me as it has. strange.

Your reviews always bring me joy my dear! Thank you so much for being there for me, blushing profusely at you being a fan, because i am one of your biggest fans! 

love you!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: racheygirl (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 7-Show Me a Garden

Simply put, LOVE IT! Can't wait for more.... I stayed up till 3 in the morning 2 nights in a row reading NTE, both are really good!



Author's Response:

YAY! new reader! HORNS BLARE TRUMPETS SOUND AND THERE WAS MUCH REJOICING! hi and Welcome!

so glad you got a chance to read NTE before this one. I am always floored when i "meet" a new reader that whips thru the chapters in a marathon! WOW! I am so glad you found this story!

thanks so much for your kind words! It truly inspires me to know that readers are enjoying! 

so thank you and welcome again! I update at least once a week and I am currently going back and forth between OTT and NTE, so you get about 2 a week! Woohoo!

more soon!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: m244robp (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 4 Sail Away

This was one of my favorite chapters from NTE.   I love seeing it from Rob's POV.  Calling the shirt "The Stoli" should have been a dead giveaway.  Yum!

 



Author's Response:

heehee. the Stoli... he must have been tired... LOL!

so glad you liked it from his view! I am having a great time on this story. Being inside the mind of a fictitious 23 yr old Brit boy is interesting to say the least!

thanks my dearest Michelle, for all your support from the very beginning!

I love ya!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: edwyna (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 8-Obsession

She ate fifty-three pieces of popcorn. - so cute, such detail, I love it.

She was oblivious to my thoughts, or my battle with Little Patty - laughed out loud to this one. 

He really had a mind of his own around her. I should just resign myself to following wherever he led. He'd certainly get there first at this rate. LOL

so good, keep them coming please, chapters and orgasms...., lol



Author's Response:

heehee... 53 pieces... he doesn't obsess much.

oh his troubles with Little Patty. how I heart his issues....glad you liked his inner monologue! 

more soon! always!

thanks!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 2-Brown Eyed Girl

I really have to say sorryy for not reviewing more to your original story   i spent nearly 4 days going thru to catch on your  nte   so I could make my way here  I love any story from  rpov    but your story was wonderful i was held  captive   for days   cant wait now that i am current with your postings    but being so nibby did i note some symptoms no one else seems to notice being sick being tired  did liz notice also   they have been having unprotected sex most of their relationship  with no fear of conception   well maybe its just me   but i think it would be great  if not maybe just my overactive  fan girl running wild   that could really draw  this out for ever and I am a huge fan of long stories  motu  82 chapters  i never miss an up date  just saying i am in for the long haul here    I LOVE THIS!!!!!



Author's Response:

HAHA! I am so glad you got through all the chapters. no worries about the reviews, really. that was a lot to get thru! LOL!

I can't wait to see what you think of this story in his view... I'm a little excited!

hmmm. the sickness and tired... some have mentioned it... and i will remain mum about it (hahah..mum)

These stories are definitely going to be long. this one will be as many chapters as whatever NTE ends up being , which will be more than 65, i know for sure right now. but we'll see.

oh MotU yes... that one is epic. and i never miss an update either. it's my drop and run and read.

thanks so much my dear... plenty more ahead!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: sharonjane (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 8-Obsession

Another great chapter.  Can't wait for the next one :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! 

another hopefully this weekend! 

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 8-Obsession

I'm developing a strong attachment to Little Patty! 



Author's Response:

LOL! I'm rather fond of Little Patty as well, as well as Big Patty. JS....

thanks my dear!

more soon!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 7-Show Me a Garden

Loved the whole Stolie bit. Also that you mentioned the new black one fans sent him. I remember that! haha. I haven't seen him wear it yet either. Guess there's nothing like the old comfy and soft origianl, with all it's little hand sewn patches. LOL. God, I love that man and all his quirky little ways. 

They are so sweet together and it's obvious they are falling hard for one another already. You are so good at writing tender, heart stopping moments such as their playing together in the music room. Beautiful.



Author's Response:

HEEHEE... my shout out to the girls at RAOR for the black stoli... oh how i wish we could see it, just once... but yeah...the old comfy one... a security blanket perhaps? sigh... we'll never know... and how i want to see that one again!

so glad you like the tender moments. i love writing them playing together. so glad you enjoyed it!

thanks my dearest!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 8-Obsession

I was very much looking forward to his side of this...wonderful! He really knows how to read people well. Can't wait for more... So much is going to be interesting seeing it from his POV! Also, wondering what going to happen next in NTE!



Author's Response:

LOL! so many people were interested in this chapter from his side! that is awesome! so glad you liked it! I think he probably really is very intuitive with people, regardless of what he says about being awkward with women. I think he can probably read them very well...it's the execution that has him bothered.

I am very excited about bringing this all to you! it's been so much fun writing!

next NTE should be up in a day or two! 

thanks my dear!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: CanadianCullen (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 8-Obsession

Interesting - so Rob had seen the blog that early huh?!  and no wonder he reacted the way he did when he spots the VF in her apartment - too funny!

Hooray for revisiting the kitchen again!  I can picture that kitchen pic you posted oh so long ago with the nice stainless steel fridge.  You know, how bad is it that it's still hot, but all I can think is "geez, those smudge real bad.  I wonder is there's a big ass-print smudge on the front now?"

It's a good thing my fridge isn't stainless or I'd be having issues every time I saw it :)

*MWAH*

- Terri



Author's Response:

Iced Coffee Spew from teh ass-smudge comment! LOL!  omg... you know there had to be! Oh to go back and re write! well you know how I like kitchen time... who says Rob isn't good in the kitchen?! heehee

yep. he caught a glimpse of the blog early on. oh the VF... mean mean boy.... ripping it... silly...

thanks my dearest Terri! always wonderful to hear your thoughts!

more soon! 

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: bommarkm (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 8-Obsession

Hot!!  Yet again, he gave her the chance to explain herself and didn't freak out about her being a fan!  Loved it!



Author's Response:

HEHEE! YAY! thanks my dear! 

nice guy, eh? gave he the chance and so desperately needs her to be the nice girl....

thanks my dear!

more soon!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: bommarkm (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 7-Show Me a Garden

That was perfect!!!

Author's Response:

YAY! thanks Keri! so glad you liked it! 

more to come! 

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 5 Safe with You

Well you know how much I love this side of the story, but I'll say it again if you like. I LOVE IT! There. LOL. You've got a lot of catching up to do to get where NTE is at this point, girlfriend. I'll be tapping my toe, while impatiently waiting for updates. ;) Big hug.



Author's Response:

HAHA! so.... you are loving this side of the story? sigh... thanks hun! I am so glad this story is enjoyable! i wasn't really sure how it would play out. so yay!  boy do i have a lot to catch up on! LOL! i have several chapters written... but the gap is closing in! eeek! LOL!

I'll keep those updates coming tho! 

thanks so much my dear! 

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: bommarkm (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 6-Broken

Can't remember if I reviewed this chapter or not. I am terribly behind.

Poor guy was freaking out about her being married.  At least he didn't overreact and let her explain things!



Author's Response:

not nearly as behind as i am! hahaha! i have so many chapters to write now! will somebody tell Jen to finish up already! LOL!

poor guy did freak out a bit, didn't he? at least he did go running!

thanks so much my dear! 

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 4 Sail Away

I really didn't think it could get any better than the original NTE, but this is so damn HOT! Love this naughty boy!! LOL. You rock and roll. Hugs, and more hugs. hehe. Keep it coming. Ooops, that's what he said!



Author's Response:

HAHA! Glad you liked it! I am having a lot of fun writing it from his POV! he is a bit of a naughty boy isn't he?

BIG hugs back! 

thanks my dear! 

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: Uglybear23 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 8-Obsession

hot hot hot hot! this was one of my favorites also and its so good to see it from Rob's point of view. The fact that all he wants is to know Jen and take care of her in everyway( I think she likes that too) is enough to make any girl fall in love. This gets more and more amazing1

<3



Author's Response:

Thanks so much my dear! To let himself be so open and honest, praying that she is just a normal girl, regardless.... awesome... so glad you liked it! 

yay! 

thanks dearest!

more soon!

mwah!

steph

Reviewer: Emily Belle (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 8-Obsession

Steph, part of this was in a lil gift you emailed me a looong time ago as a thanks for reviewing.  It stil fucking kills me.

Thank you,

Emily



Author's Response:

heeheehee... yes it was... heehee...glad it still holds up the second (or 5th) time reading! 

thanks so much my dear! 

more good times coming!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 8-Obsession

I just adore the idea of Rob reading fanfic...  I secretly wonder if he's ever read any or ours, you know?  One can hope, haha.

That counter-top scene gets me every time, Steph.  Sooooo good.... ;-)

xoxo Sarah



Author's Response:

I think i would blush and maybe die a little if I knew he read our work. but if he liked it, then awesome! No lawsuits rob, please... call me we can talk about what i need to change... LOL!

ahhh. counter top loving.... you know ho w i adore it! 

thanks my dearest! 

more soon!

MWAH!

steph

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