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Reviewer: pirate51 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 12-You Mean the World

Love his song.  He is so sweet.  I can't even think with the vision of wet RomeRob floating around in my head......THUD!



Author's Response:

thanks hun! one can only hope he is this sweet in real life... gah to have Rob sing you an original song! hell, puff the magic dragon would work for me!LOL!

oh yes. wet Rome Rob... i am evil... hehehe

thanks my dear!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: pirate51 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 11-Tupelo Honey

Poor Rob, he is getting all freaked out.  It will be ok baby, just give her time.  God, I love him!!!



Author's Response:

poor thing. left in the tub, so sad...

isn't it nice knowing how it will turn out?

thanks my dear!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 03:08 AM · On: Chapter 14-Brand New Day

lovely lovely chapter I could just read your stories all day. Thank you for your talent. Looking forward to next chapter.

 

Lilly



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Lilly! Your kind words mean the world to me!

so happy to know you are enjoying both stories!

more soon, always!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: Brumbear (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 14-Brand New Day

I'm glad they kissed and made-up, so to speak!

With Not-so-little-Patty being on the prawl flexing his morning muscle things can ge out of head real quick!

Looking forward to more hilarious descriptions!

 



Author's Response:

heehee thanks hun! yeah it's pretty dangerous being in side the head of a 23 year old voracious man, let me tell you!

hehehe. poor Patty. Well we know how things turn out, so we can't feel too badly now can we?

thanks my dear!

more crazy Patty antics coming soon!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: memphis76 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 14-Brand New Day




Author's Response:

hehe. thanks memphis76!

TentStake Rob left you speechless didn't it? sorry about that! 

got your other review on NTE, thanks for all your support!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: Janners (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 13-Love Is

Oh, WOW, Steph!!  I rec'd you to a bunch of my die-hard Twihards tonight on Twitter.

Edward stories are all well and good but it's hard to find a really good Rob story and here we have TWO!



Author's Response:

thank you so much my dear! always love to here about pimp outs!

you are the best! 

so glad you are enjoying the stories!

have a great weekend!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: jacoblucas (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 14-Brand New Day

amazing as usual



Author's Response:

thanks my dear! 

more soon! 

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: twilightervamp (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 14-Brand New Day

Hey Steph!

Great chapter. I dread tho the one when Rob leaves and all hell breaks loose. I didn't like that one at all. But, I know what comes after so it will be ok!!

thanks.

Hugs,

Louise



Author's Response:

thanks Louise!

yep... those dark times are coming.... but we are blessed with knowing there is a big shining light at the end! 

thanks my dear!

more soon!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 14-Brand New Day

Great Chapter. Can't wait for more. Love hearing what was going inside of his head!!!



Author's Response:

thanks my dear! so glad you liked it!

He really does have alot going on up there! HAHA!

thanks so much !

more soon!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: Uglybear23 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 14-Brand New Day

gosh, I've really forgotten how much I love this story. It's so honest and you're writing is amazing, but you already know that. Haha, I don't believe that Rob doesn't have any thoughts in his head either, he is one amazing man. Keep the goodness coming!

<3



Author's Response:

thanks so much my dearest. 

it's so weird to go back and read and think Oh yeah! i am constantly re-inspired as i go back.

I think there is a lot more going on in the brain of his than he allows us to believe. A 24 year old bloke just doesn't read and listen and experience what he does. he is a lot more complicated than any of us realise maybe... LOL! who knows!

thanks my dear!

more soon!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: Hawkeye (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 14-Brand New Day

Lovely, as always.

Thanks so much for sharing your imagination with all of us!

Oh, and poor Patty.  He does suffer so!!!

 

Hawkeye



Author's Response:

thanks so much Hawkeye!

it has been such a wonderful ride with all of you! having great readers like you make it all worth while!

Poor Patty... alone in the dark... in cramped quarter... poor thing in deed! hahaa!

thanks my dear!

more soon!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 14-Brand New Day

This was so wonderful. Your Rob cracks me up. I loved seeing Jen in the kitchen through his eyes, with his mouth hanging open. Pricless.

Every chapter I read, reminds me of future chapters that I can't wait to get to. I am so glad you decided to do this!



Author's Response:

thanks so much my dear! 

hehe I am really enjoying being in "his" mind. there really is a lot going on in there! LOL!

so glad you are enjoying this! I can't believe i am doing it, but it's been a fun ride!

more soon!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 14-Brand New Day

I just had lunch, but now I want scones, dammit.  Oh well.  

I'm glad they finally made it out of the house, poor things.  I can just imagine the damage overall that they'd do to the house if left inside for too long. *smirk*

Looking forward to the next one! :-)

xoxo Sarah



Author's Response:

oh scones... those evil evil scones! heehee!

they could tear that house down if left to their own devices to be sure! there are so many options for outside activities after all... cough cough mini putt windmill...cough cough... smiles

thanks my dear! 

more soon! 

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: banned2010 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 14-Brand New Day

I love reading Rob's side of your story.  These stories are my "escape" in difficult times.  Thank you for writing them.  I can't wait to read Rob's side of their separation and reunion!  Looking forward to the next!!  A definite 10!



Author's Response:

thank you so much! it has been such a joy to write from his POV! and i am truly humbled to know these stories can bring you an escape. that means a lot to me. thank you! 

oooh! i am dying to post the separation and the reunion! soon! so close!

thanks so much my dear for the read and rate! 

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: eyes of topaz (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 14-Brand New Day

Awww....I just love him to pieces....**SIGH**

It was such a great idea to do this chapter by chapter...usually it feels like overkill to read the same thing twice with different POVs but not this time....and truthfully....not with Midnight Sun or at least what we have to read of it!! UGH

So glad you are doing both sides Steph....just great reads!  AND CONGRATULATIONS on the award...SO DESERVED!!!!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you hun. 

I do worry it will be overkill. each time i post a new chapter, i think that one will be the one that people say, "meh... it's just the same story again..." so it means so much to me that it is reading well. thank you! and i won't be offended when you guys tell me otherwise! LOL!

I am loving this boy, it has been so much fun to be in his head.

thank you for the congrats. i am still alittle stunned! but i love the tremendous support of all of you! it means the world to me! 

more soon!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: CanadianCullen (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 14-Brand New Day

Loved "What was it about Kitchen's that make me randy" line :) haha!  Oh Rob, we wonder the same.   Bet that wouldn't happen if you were in Leroy's kitchen - that double wide isn't big enough to mess around in there!

Love the play list, love the lead up to Mini putt (It's Golf, but more miniature!) haha!

*MWAH*

- Terri



Author's Response:

LOL! poor rob and kitchens! at least we know he is good at something in them!

oh i don't know, i'd be more worried about a staph infection in Leroys trailer kitchen...ewwwww.

yay! mini putt is next! its your chapter!!!! weeeeee!

love ya my dear!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: tgriffin (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 14-Brand New Day

            I'd have to beat the fans off with my ridiculously small club.

Oh dear lord, there's so much ammo in this one little sentence...but I think I've distilled it down to "beat off my ridiculously small club" when I read it. I'm such a perv...honestly...I don't know how you put up with me!

He is one randy little bugger, isn't he? But I love how primal yet soft their connection is...how she can incite such passion in him, but such gentle affection too. It's a heady combination of lust and love...and I think both of those emotions together is what overwhelms him. The idea that she appeals to both sides of his nature...he never stood a chance.

I absolutely adore these two together...they really do just fit.

Wonderful job my dear, as always!

HUGS!

~Tracy

 



Author's Response:

LMAO! you know "Rob" thought that just for your pervy mind right? LOL!

it must be overwhelming to relinquish a hold of the passion and love to one person, one you have known for a few days, and yet they are timeless in their love for you. he is lucky enough to be able to willingly succumb to it. sigh....

thank you tracy. you know i love you, right?

sigh...

more soon.

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: Emrae Penne Degrah (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 14-Brand New Day

Good chapter. I can't wait for more. Rob is a tad bit wordy, but s'all cool.

Cheers!



Author's Response:

haha! he is a wordy git, let me tell you. but i love him and he is too adorable to toss with the trash... LOL!

thanks my dear!

more soon!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: edwyna (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 04:42 AM · On: Chapter 14-Brand New Day

.....and OH, hit the submit button to fast, O U T S T A N D I N G new pic of our Mr. Pattinson....my god he is beautiful !!!!  I know I said that before but can't help myself.  Absolutely adorable !



Author's Response:

thanks my dear! 

glad you like the banner! he is all kinds of beautiful.

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: edwyna (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 04:36 AM · On: Chapter 14-Brand New Day

I love all the internal conversations he has with "little patty", they make me laugh out loud and smile.

 

I also love how he "gets it" that she is all in so to speak at the end.  Damn the press, damn the paps, he knows that she has made her decision her choice. 

.....and lastly I love these two stories ..... you do a great job writing , TY



Author's Response:

heehe, thanks edwyna! 

I do so love Little Patty. if i could do a POV from his angle... oh that could get me in trouble....

oh sigh... that he knows she is his, and he is hers... that nothing will pull them apart... that she is determined... that boy is on e lucky man...

so glad you are enjoying it my dear! it means the word to me...

more soon!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: alexandra (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 14-Brand New Day

Long awaited chapter... never disappointing!  I love me some wordy Rob!



Author's Response:

Ah wordy rob! he keeps me busy! 

thanks Alexandra! 

so glad you are over on the forums! welcome to the craziness! 

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 03:44 AM · On: Chapter 14-Brand New Day

First of all, your new banner is all kinds of gorgeousness. Seriously, how stunningly photogenic Rob is makes me want to cry sometimes.

Onto the new chapter....

*shakes head* I feel like a broken record, but I just adore Rob's POV. I think I've finally worked it out though. You created the story with our beautiful Jen's POV. The whole storyline was created around Jen's thoughts & movements, and you opened up a whole new world there.

Now you're giving us Rob's version, and whilst there are plenty of places where it's going to be good to know what's going on (naturally, I'm just about dying for the whole storyline behind Nick's meddling from where Rob is; not to mention their long-awaited reunion afterwards); you're intertwining and because we pretty much already know what happens, we get to really focus on what they're thinking. I really can't write that eloquently at all... *smacks head on keyboard*

Your RobJen are so cheeky... I loved the bit where he was merrily scrolling through her playlists on the iPod, trying to be all covert about it. *L* His mental battles with 'Patty' almost had me in stitches too. Is it sad that I could picture him staring down at Patty and shaking his finger at 'it'?

And jeez...would you quit with the author note imagery? *L* Rob/sexpenders/sleeveless tank... girl, are you trying to simultaneously combust our undies around the world? *pants*



Author's Response:

thanks my dear! 

so happy to get positive comments on the new banner, i am loving it. he really is beautiful isn't he?

*blushing* i am so happy to hear people are enjoying this POV. it's hard to imagine writing a completely different story from another persons view, especially when the story has already been told. i can only hope to enhance and expand. I am so glad it makes sense to people, and that it is actually enjoyable! LOL!

this has been the hardest to write, and yet the most fun, because "his" mind is so full of thoughts and concerns and ideas. it's been great fun...

I can't wait until we get to Nick... i just can't .... but i will... *pouts*

BWHAHA! shaking his finger at it. poor Patty. having to sit in the dark all day, pressed up close but no salvation, pouting at the injustice of it all... did i just give patty a personality?! yes yes i did!

I'll tryto behave with the AN imagery. but honestly. your reviews deserve a little panty melting imagery. they mean that much to me! LOL!

thanks my dear! 

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: joss859 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 14-Brand New Day

Oh my God, his inner ramblings will be the death of me! This is why I squeel with delight whenever I see an update!

Love the new banner (I already told you I hated the last one!) and I really hope that the images of Rob driving in tent stakes are in your head, because if I have missed any pics I will cry!

By the way, I have never heard any of us Brits say "is all". I think we tend to say "thats all" insteed, but maybe I'm just not listening properly!

As always, waiting with baited breath for the next exciting installment, I don't know how you manage to keep up and reply to all our comments. Do you ever sleep?

Thanks for making my week (again)



Author's Response:

YAY! can i just tell you that I love when i get little titbits of information like this! I really do! it makes writing in his voice that much more meaningful! thank you! *rushes off to fix future chapters...* heehee seriously i love getting info from those who know better. please keep me on the straight and narrow! 

I love that so many are loving his inner ramblings, they are so much fun to write, i almost just want to write those! 

Yeah the last banner was a filler until i had time to make a new one... so glad you like this one! i'm liking it more and more as i see it!

you didn't miss tent Staking Rob... no no... but how nice would that pic be if it existed! 

in answer to your question if i sleep... no. I'm a vampire... i don't sleep... and i type at super human speed...LOL!

oh if only that were true... we'd be at chapter 394 by now... sadface. but coffee is my friend... 

thanks so much my dear for all your support ! it means the world to me! 

more soon!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: Carson1 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 14-Brand New Day

Hi Hun!

"Margaret Thatcher.... Bass fishing...oh dear lord just a little lower...."  hehehehe-oh I so enjoy hearing the inner thoughts of our dear Rob!  Wonderful as always - he's in deep now isn't he?  Looking forward to Ch 15, 16, 17....you get the picture :)  Cheers, Leslie



Author's Response:

Hi Leslie! 

heehee Margaret Thatcher.... i think that might be my fave line right there. he doesn't want to go there, but oh god yes he does!

glad you are liking inner Rob... he's a blast to write. 

thanks my dearest! more soon! always!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 14-Brand New Day

What a sweet chapter - and kind of relaxing to read, so free of angst for a change :-) I love the way you describe Rob. Just the right mixture between overthinking everything and jumping into things without much thinking. But I really do hope that real Rob doesn't feel about Twilight as your Rob does - or I'll feel bad for him every time I watch the movies...

And I know it's just a minor detail, but I laughed so hard when he thought of Margaret Thatcher...



Author's Response:

very nice, that lack of angst, isn't it? sigh... so glad you like Rob's inner self. 

I hope Rob doesn't really feel this badly about the Saga, although i am sure he is ready for it to be done and move on.

heehee, glad you liked Maggie... she made me giggle... 

thanks so much my dear!

more soon!

MWAH!

steph

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