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Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 23-Gone

Another spectacular chapter, sweets!  

I wish he'd gotten on that flight, too...maybe paid Jen a personal visit.  ;-)  And that Details shoot would be enough to give ME a vagina allergy (and I have one, haha).  

I hope Mike comes through for him...he's such a sweetheart.  Both Mike and Rob, I mean.

xoxo Sarah



Author's Response:

thanks so much my dear!

it would have been nice to have him make that flight. imagine her face when he came knocking on her door, drenched from the rain since he ran all the way from town on his wonky legs! sigh....

and the Details shoot DID give me a vagina allergy! LOL! nono not really...

heehee. I love Mike. of course we know this! he'll be there for Rob. 

thanks my dear!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: ellahudgens (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 23-Gone

eeeeeeeeek updateeeeeee!



Author's Response:

ssssssooooooooonnnnnnnn!

i promise!

thanks so much!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: suziekew (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 23-Gone

Steph, you've captured his anguish so well it's easy to imagine this was actually happening to him during that Details shoot. Absolutely riveting stuff. I can't wait until they reunite again...I hate to see Rob in any kind of pain, real or imagined!

~Suzie

P.S you got the car wrong...it's gotta be a 65 Chevy Nova, with hydraulics and blasting "California Love"...sidekick optional. :)



Author's Response:

thanks so much my dear! 

i know, dark times are almost over! it hurts to see him this way!

and LOL! isn't it a little eery though that i talk about him in a vintage car... and there he is suddenly!

well, in this story he was driving Jen's car. but i give him props for the awesome Nova... Jen and Mr. P approve.

thanks my dear!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: katiebird (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 23-Gone

I loved those pics of Rob in Details. I really hope that he wasn't in that kind of pain for that shoot. Made me a little sad.
I'm surprised that he didn't call Lizzy himself, sooner.
So glad I know that everything works out later from Rob and Jen. Reading his anguish would have been too hard manage.

Author's Response:

thanks my dear!

i liked the one of him on the love seat. he still looked sad though. if it was meant for him to look lost and vacant, they did a great job. many of the outtakes show a very tired looking Rob though, so you have to wonder just how hungover he really was. buti am sure it was a hangover and not the fact that he lost the love of his life. that would be very sad.

sigh, it is so nice to know what comes after, isn't it? it makes things a little less painful. 

thanks so much my dear!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: CanadianCullen (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 23-Gone

Oh Mack Truck!  Why do I think it's ironic that it takes Lizzy to show Rob that he can go and get Jen?  And I love the "great escape" part of the chapter, images of Mack and Joe racing down the street after the cab!

Looking forward to the next talk with Lizzy - I can guess what's going to happen in that conversation!

Loved it Steph - still can't wait to get out of the 'dark times'

*HUGS*

Ter



Author's Response:

Oh MAck Truck! glad you liked that little "great Escape" moment! heehee

and Lizzy, one smart cookie. poor Rob was thinking... 

dark times are wrapping... thank god!

happier times on its way!

thanks my dear!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: eyeonrob (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 23-Gone

O.K. I'm finally caught up with OTT and I need a stiff drink and a shoulder to cry on. POOR ROB!!!!  OMG. Steph, you do angst so well. And I think I said in a previous review that I thought Nick had somehow partially redeemed himself for his prick behavior. Scratch that comment. I would hate to think that someone like Nick could find out that much info on a person in RL. What a low life stalker! Too bad noone caught him outside Jen's place. I can't wait to read the chapter where Rob finds out the extent of Nick's deceitful and destructive actions. Will Nick confess or does someone else (maybe Mack) uncover the truth? I absolutely loved how you wrote this chapter around the Details photo shoot. It worked perfectly. Those pictures were very disturbing to me. Of course he was beautiful as always but something was definitely wrong. I'm glad Rob was persistent in trying to contact Jen through the blog and finally took some action for himself with the encouragement of Lizzy. And of course, our beloved Mack.....a hero and true friend. *le sigh* Can't wait to see how the next chapter plays out.    

"This weeks visual Robfirmation:

Reviews are like Rob, driving down Pacific Coast Highway in a convertible 1964 Mustang, smiling and carefree, laughing as the sun sets, on his way to a well deserved break. Hey Rob. I know of a great place up the coast... no paps to speak of. Call me." *giggles*



Author's Response:

thanks my dear.

the Details shoot was very disturbing. it is so nice to see so many people agreeing with that. When i came out, i remember hearing so many saying OMG he's hot! and i was scratching my head wondering why a lost and vacant Rob looked hot to them.... he's beautiful, but the emotion means so much when you look at them.

Oh Nick. so close to sanctuary, only for me to drive him back to hell again.. heehee. we'll see some of Nick unravel coming up.

You know i love my Mack. he'll be a true friend to Rob when he needs it most.

glad you liked the Robfirmations. its a little eery considering he was just on PCH this weekend in a vintage car...after this posted.... PARALLELS! eeek!

thanks my dear!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: twilightervamp (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 22-Breaking the Girl

Oh wow Steph! Holy Shit! I needed a freakin' beer after reading these last 2 chapters! Gosh, Nick, what a dickhead!!

I can't wait for Lizzy to find out and show up. That should be a good one too.

Hugs,

Louise



Author's Response:

thanks so much my dear. i know how you feel. my ficbaby is growing daily (that's my growing beer belly that seems to have grown since starting these stories) LOL!

Lizzy is coming soon!

yay!

thanks so much Louise!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: alexandra (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 23-Gone

I feel his pain.....



Author's Response:

thanks so much my dear. good times are coming, i promise!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: jaybean (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 23-Gone

Thank God this LA misery will be coming to an end soon.  I don't know how much more I can take.  Another amazing chapter though.  I have been waiting for this one because of the dreaded Details shoot.  I had the pictures up on the Details website as I was reading and you really hit the nail on the head in describing his mood during the shoot.  He looked miserable and degraded and lost.  Totally lost.

Our savior Lizzy has finally made her appearance and gave Rob the best advice possible.  I can imagine him running down the stairs on those wonky legs!  It's too bad he wasn't able to make his escape, but at least Mack Truck is on his side now. If my calculations are correct, we are now at late Friday night December 11 or early morning on December 12.  Lizzy finds Jen on Thursday the 15th so Rob only has 3 days of uncertainty left.  I hope Mack can keep him hopeful until then.

Rob is finally wising up about Nick; he knows something is up with him.  I don't think he has any idea at this point how bad it really is.  He thinks Nick is his friend and a friend would never pull the stunts Nick has pulled.

Yeah Nick is still burning in hell for me.

Thanks for the update; I can't wait for the next one.

Jayme



Author's Response:

 I just have to say i LOVE you for being able to figure out the dates. it is the 11th of December as we end the chapter, late in the evening. So yes, Rob only has a few days left of torture. But Mack is there for him, and we all know how I love my Mack Truck! he'll be a friend when Rob needs it most.

He is learning a bit more about Nick. Go with your gut, Rob. he knows something is wrong. We'll get to see Nick unvravel from Robs side as the next few days lay themselves out. Remember, Liz has a little talking to with Nick on the 15th...hehehehe

The Details shoot. so glad its a memory now. hard pics to look at. he truly did look lost. 

thanks so much Jayme!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 23-Gone

God having your life handled sounds awful, poor Robert.

Thanks for posting.



Author's Response:

thanks so much my dear.

and if its anything that I can accomplish with this story, its to shed at least a little light on what it might be like to be him. Of course i think this chapter is a little extreme, i don't think they'd be able to keep him from getting on the plane, really. but so much of the rest of his life is handled. it makes you think a little more carefully about it. 

thanks so much! 

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: eryka12 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 23-Gone

Can I join the "I LOVE MIKE" club?  Pretty please with Rob shaped sprinkles on top!!

I knew this chapter was going to be gut wrenching, but you brought some light into the angst.  Thank Rob that I know that there is a light at the end of the tunnel! 

I love your depiction of how the "blow me" shot was captured and your whole view of the shoot, how Rob wouldn't have been totally comfortable with the "edginess" of it.  Mister "I'm allergic to vaginas" LOL

Can't wait for the next chapter and when he finds out that Lizzy has met Jen! (now I have to go back and re-read that NTE chapter!)

Eryka

ps. I hate (your) Nick!! 



Author's Response:

LOL! poor Nick. he just can't get a break! hahahaha

You can most definitely join the I LOVE MIKE club. he's my boy. 

oh the shoot. It bugged me from the beginning, and i actually wrote the shoot portion of this chapter back in february when the pics came out. 12 hours of vaginas and boobs have to get old after a while, right?

so glad you enjoyed it!

happier times coming!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: Mrs Boyscout (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 23-Gone

Oh my, killing me!  I can't believe he was ready to hope on a flight himself to find her.  So romantic!  And the Mac truck stopped him and not with brute force, either, with guilt.  He's one smart man.  

Gah! So sad.  Loving him finding her website.  He needs any connection at this point.  

Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Ah our Boy. he tried, but really, the throwing Rob over the shoulder would be bad press, yeah?

But Mack is there for him. he'll make it right. 

and the blog, after he lost his little Jen, it is so important to have that connection for him, otherwise he might fall over the edge.

thanks so much my dear!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: ruthhazelton (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 23-Gone

I actually read this about 2 am but wasn't awake enough to leave a coherent thought.   The boy started becoming a man and developed a spine (which was obviously there - he just hasn't exercised it enough) I am so proud of him - he actually came out of his wallowing enough to make an escape and go look for her - courtesy of Lizzy who asked the question of why he hadn't.  Obviously something happened at the end of the 24 hours which prevented Mack and Rob from going and Lizzie taking over.



Author's Response:

heehee. he is growing up fast. now how he utilizes that spine we'll have to see. 

and yes, something must happen for him to stay in LA and have Liz go up instead. perhaps a little.....NICK...

thanks my dear! love you!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 04:06 AM · On: Chapter 23-Gone

These last few chapters have been hard and emotional to read, but you write them (all) so well, you are so gifted and talented, thank you for sharing both points of view with us....and just in case I haven't mentioned it before, I love both the stories and can't wait for each update - thank you x



Author's Response:

thank yo so much my dear! 

i am so glad you are enjoying both stories! it means a lot to me to know they have found a home in people's hearts! 

it makes it all worthwhile!

thanks!

more soon!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: Laine Quinn (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 23-Gone

Ahhh!  What took Mike so long to offer help?  Poor Rob, he's still so lost. 



Author's Response:

I know right?! well, maybe he was really afraid to step across the line of his job, he has kids and a wife to support. 

But he's there to help now. better times are coming! promise!

thanks so much!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: LaughingWithEmmett (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 23-Gone

Love, love this story. I was wondering when he'd remember the blog. I'm going to have to figure out how to get to the forum now :)



Author's Response:

thanks so much my dear. 

yeah, his mind was a bit preoccupied. 

can't wait to see you on the forum!

thanks my dear!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: bellemeer (Anonymous) · Date: July 21, 2010 03:33 AM · On: Chapter 23-Gone

Thanks for this chapter - only one complaint - I now have the excruciating wait for the next one!!!!



Author's Response:

thanks so much!

yeah, once a week is about as fast as i can conjure. but you know you won't have to wait long! 

thanks!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 23-Gone

Poor Rob! I love to hear what happened on his end though. I is a wonderful story!



Author's Response:

thanks so much my dear! 

i am really enjoying getting in FicRob's head! 

more soon!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: sharonjane (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 02:41 AM · On: Chapter 23-Gone

Well sing hallelluja for Mack, I knew there was a reason I liked him.  He definitely needs more people like Mack and Joe around him.  Nick and Stephanie don't seem to have his best interest at heart, or at the least a very skewed version of what they think he needs.  Rob just needs to hang in there now we are on the home stretch.

Till next time and hopefully with them reunited soon.

Sharon



Author's Response:

thanks so much Sharon!

you know i love my Mack Truck. he will make things better. it takes the every day man to see how another needs help. 

Nick and Steph see the big picture, without realising the little things are cascading Rob into oblivion.

we are on our way out of the dark times! good times ahead!

thanks hun!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: edwyna (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 02:08 AM · On: Chapter 23-Gone

Heartbreaking, is all I can muster to say...... so heartbreaking.... and YEAH Lizzy  !!!! Get your head out of your arse and do something bro ..... curiously to see what happens with Mack tho and how it must become evident to Rob that he needs Lizzy to help him.....  it makes it much more bearable in the end knowing what happens, but still lots of emotions playing in my pee brain.  Man he really hated that shoot didn't he, but always the gentleman, helping Meaghan out of the bath and attempting to warm her! Poor guy.  .....i wish he didn't remember breaking the china doll as well, well onto the forumn to see all the great stuff..... Looking forward to NTE update, they'll be home..... hooray..... and yes I know working thru their grief together, but they'll be TOGETHER.



Author's Response:

thanks so much my dear!

a lot of heartbreak, which may explain why he is so intense with her when they are finally together, to have lost something and been so desperate to find it. i think Rob was much worse off than Jen, she had simply thought he had left her for better things, he thought he had screwed up and therefore was hurting her. poor boy.

But my Mack truck is there to fix things, and Liz... 

it really is a nice thing to know what happens, it eases the angst just a tad.

the Details shoot. it will go down in Robinfamy as the shoot that shouldn't have been.

thanks so much my dear! happier times are coming I promise!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 23-Gone

I really think Nick should be swimming with the fishes.  At least Mike is willing to help him out.



Author's Response:

heehee. poor RL Nick. you know he must have some kind of pain he can't figure out by all the hate being thrown towards his fictitious self!

But oh Mike, my mack truck... you know he will be a godsend! he's my boy....

thanks my dear!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 12:53 AM · On: Chapter 23-Gone

He finally found her blog. Mike is going to help him. Lizzy is going to step in soon. Everything will be alright. *huge sigh of relief*

As in NTE, I'm desperately awaiting better times here. I'm hurting for your Rob, I really am. Weird, but that's me ;-)

Thanks for this amazing chapter, I can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

thanks so much my dear. the ball is rolling, the puzzle pieces are falling into place....we're almost out of the dark times. whew.

good times are coming on both fronts, i promise!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: joss859 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 23-Gone

i read chapter 22 again before reading this one and i am a seething mass of hatred for your Nick right now! The names I am calling him in my head, and out loud to my computer, can not be posted here! What if I got banned, what a disaster!LOL!

Right now I just want to rush over there and comfort Rob. I'll buy him beer, I personally track down Jen, anything to save him from his misery. Come on Steph, have mercy on us all, including Rob; get Mack and Lizzy on the case QUICK!

LOVE it, LOVE it, LOVE it, just hurry up and get Rob past this, I don't know if I can stand much more!



Author's Response:

HAHAH! poor Nick.... heehee. we'll get to see him suffer soon from Robs POV. he does have that phone call with Lizzy, you see...

good times are coming i promise. pretty soon, we'll be seeing Robjen texts and pics from Robs pov... weeee!

thanks so much my dear!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: cullenscougar (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 23-Gone

OMG Steph, you just keep outdoing yourself. Poor Rob, I feel for him all over again. Nick is a shifty bugger isn't he? At least Rob has good ole Mike & Joe helping him, and finally Lizzy to the rescue!! Can't wait for more. Please can we have a break from the angst soon??? hugs as always, Clare x(aka biddyswife)



Author's Response:

thanks so much Clare!

i promise. happier times on both fronts coming.

Nick is pretty shifty here. but we'll see him start to unravel as the next few days unfold.

Mike and Joe- two really great guys, Rob is lucky to have them. you know how i love my Mack Truck!

thanks my dear!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: skipabeat (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 23-Gone

Yeah I don't get why he's being held hostage. Do you know if that really happens? That really sucks if it does. At least we are getting somewhere in finding her... And why didn't he think of going to find her himself? Sometimes I wonder about Rob and how much he doesn't speak up for himself until he has reached his limit, which is too late. Interesting!!!



Author's Response:

I doubt it happens to this extreme, but i would think if a manager saw that his client was in danger of having a breakdown (let alone that said manger caused it ) they would have him on protective custody of some sort. 

I think Rob is incredibly intelligent, if not a little naive in how he handles things. i can totally see him doing the hardest thing to make the simplest thing work. sometimes you need someone from the outside to make sense of it all. 

i hope real Rob can stand up for himself a little better, and much sooner. but i think he is pretty naive in some life things as well. 

thanks so much !

MWAH!

Steph

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