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Reviewer: not_done_baking (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 9

Great story so far. I like the originality. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: ChulaB (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 9

Aww I can't wait to see what the morning will bring..

Reviewer: wolvesnvamps (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 9

You are doing a great job of making Bella and Edward's relationship after nine years believable.  The story pulled me right in and am curious to where you are going to go with it.

Reviewer: feathers_mmmm (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 9

Jesus Christ, did you actually have her sing do your ears hang low?? I love you more than life itself...

I am so in love with Edward again, it isn't even funny. I have been reading so much AH fics lately, it is wonderful to be reminded of why we all fell in love with him in the first place. I say again, that this is one of THE most beautifully written pieces I have ever read, and i will continue to pimp it from the mountain tops!

Thx again for the rec, you might want to check out the Author's Notes on my next chapter too lovie...



Reviewer: whynot (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 9

Interesting.  The first part felt a little disjointed, but you recovered nicely.  I am wondering what she's going to say to Chris about all this, but that's where you come in!

Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 9

I'm thinking this is a great story and I loved this chapter. I love Edward goes for it! We all know how he over thinks everything!

Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 9

Great chapter. It's amazing how in character you've got these two.

Reviewer: imjustagirl (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 9

Wow! There are so many directions you can go with this story... I can't wait to see hwere you are going with this! I won't speculate, only because I'd rather read! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 9

I like your story. It contains a lot of interesting hurdles like the romance, Chris' gift and the impending Alice visit. I look forward to your next chapter. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Lena (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 4

Uh, Jacob would have smelled him?!? You can't just stalk a person who hangs out with werewolves! Anyway, continuing with the reading...

Reviewer: PawntoQueen (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 9

Awh...sweet. Lets hope he's there in the morning

Reviewer: littlebit (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 9

I am thinking that he won't change her because of her son and it completely depresses me.::sigh:::

This isn't going to end well I am afraid.....please let them be together.

Reviewer: Alce Tonks (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 9

I love it ples continue

Reviewer: iliveforthis (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 9

awwh so cute :]

ooh chris has a gift similar to edwards? do share :P

Reviewer: newtothis (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 9

i love that they are taking it slow.  great so far.

please post soon.


Reviewer: kimmasen (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 9

This has to be one of my favorite stories.  Keep of the great writing and I can't wait fo rthe next chapter.

Reviewer: forbidden_fruit (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 9

I love this.  I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 9

Love this....please update SOON!

Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 9

I love this story! I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: SinAndShame (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 9

I absolutely adore this beautiful story.

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 9

Very cute :)  loved the whole humourous side of Bella and aging.  I think she did it perfectly.

And I'm happy that edward is now snug under the blankets with Bella.

Another well written chapter.

Reviewer: lostinthought (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 9

yayyyy a new chapter! i love this story. It is slightly bittersweet though b/c how are bella and edward going tohave a relationship when there is a little boy involved...harrruummpphh...I cannot wait to see what happens!

Reviewer: EmmettIsMyTeddyBear (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 9

This is my favorite chapter yet.  I love Bella's internal monolgue.  Beautifully written.  And the banter between her and Edward.  I was laughing out loud.  I like the song!!  Reminds me of something from the chatroom!  I was holding my breath to see if Bella was going to flash Edward!  Hahaha.  You have captured SM characters perfectly and, in my opinion, improved them.  I was tearing up when she went into Chris' bedroom, kissed him, smelled him and said "My baby".  I can relate to that feeling.  Your Bella is such a tender mother, I love it!  I don't think the readers got the best view of Bella's affection toward Ren in BD.  This is wonderful.  Also, loved the part when she is trying to force Edward to move closer to her in the bed.  Hmmph!  hahaha.  You are wonderful have made my day today, honestly!  Can't wait for the next installment!


Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 9

I loved the playfulness of bella and edward inthis chapter as well as the ending...

this chapter was really sweet! :)

Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 9

I've been hoping for an update to this story!  I love the hesitancy of their actions - they need to get to know the "new them" since, as you pointed out, they have changed in all those years.  Loving it!

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