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Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 1

I tried to send you a PM, but it didn't work... I was looking for your story on the Twilighted Forum and I couldn't find it, so started a thread on the New Moon FF forum, here at Twilighted... I hope you don't mind.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! That's so sweet, and I don't mind at all. I'll be over there for sure. Thanks again. 

Reviewer: Jennmc (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 12:04 AM · On: Chapter 5

Wow.  I really like this.  Chris is adorable.  I love the concept of Edward not really leaving Bella.  I can't wait to see what you have planned.

Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 12:01 AM · On: Chapter 5

A very well thought out tale. I enjoyed the emotional confessions by Edward. I am confused about how she knew instantly with the little details given by Chris that the man was Edward. I look forward to your next chapter.

Reviewer: Anna (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2008 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 5

Wow. Amazing chapters. The characters are very compelling and believable. Great job!

Reviewer: Anna (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2008 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 1

Very interesting story! Can't wait to see where you take this......

Reviewer: Chandler (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2008 02:28 AM · On: Chapter 5

This is to die for.  I love this story so much.  I can't wait for the next  chapter.  I have wondered whar would have happened if Edward had never come back, but stayed on the fringe.  This is a perfect story from that perspective.  Keep it going please. 

Reviewer: Chandler (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2008 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 5

This is to die for.  I love this story so much.  I can't wait for the next  chapter.  I have wondered whar would have happened if Edward had never come back, but stayed on the fringe.  This is a perfect story from that perspective.  Keep it going please. 

Reviewer: jackbauer (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2008 01:38 AM · On: Chapter 5

Oh I never would have read this (I just don't like it when Bella gets knocked up by anyone but Edward), but when I saw how many reviews you had for just five chapters I knew it must be good.  It is great.  My mind is reeling... how can she become a vampire when she has a kid.  But if she doesn't want to be a vampire, she will look weird as a grandma married to a 17 year old.  Oh my... what is going to happen?!? 

Author's Response:

lol, I agree. Grandma Bella and sexy Edward just won't do..Thanks for your kind words!

Reviewer: Nimoko (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2008 11:42 PM · On: Chapter 5

Oh, this is simply wonderful!  I love your Bella - how mature and maternal she is.  She can be the one taking care of all the men in her life now - both Edward and her son. 

I look forward to reading more!

Reviewer: chris7100 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2008 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 5

Good stuff here - interesting premise, nice characterizations.  Update soon, please.

Reviewer: Itz193 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2008 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 5

Thank you for updating! Please update regularly because I love this story. My heart really went out for ExB during the scene were Edward was facing the door & Bella wrapped her arms around him, its such a sweet scene, breathtaking!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. :)

Reviewer: Tima83 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2008 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 5

thank you for finally updating! This story has so much potential! Keep it going, please!!


Merry Christmas!!  Have a great 2009!

Reviewer: mamagrace (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2008 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 5

I think this chapter was just beautiful.  I love this Bella's maturity and hope they don't have to go through too much before they get their happily ever after.

Reviewer: Sumsums (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2008 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 5


Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: December 24, 2008 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 5

Reviews are a beautiful thing!!  How sad for Edward, knowing what Bella was going to be put through, that is horrible.  I am in awe of how gently they are communicating and how much more mature Bella is being about the situation.

Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2008 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 5

So I hope this means that they are going to try to be together!

Reviewer: BlueBella (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2008 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 5

More? I have to know what happens next.

Reviewer: Imagine (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2008 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 5

I love reunions like that! minimal stress and great story; i love the little boy!

Reviewer: notmyself (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2008 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 5

Beautiful and hauntingly sweet. Thank you for this chapter. it truly was a gift. Really exceptional.



Reviewer: asrial (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2008 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 5

so happy to see an update!  i really like this story!  have a great Christmas!

Reviewer: closet_twilighter (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2008 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 5

This was great.  Very emotional, but much more realistic than some of the reunion scenes found in the fanfic universe.  I'm interested to see where you go from here.

Reviewer: TwilightMommy (Anonymous) · Date: December 24, 2008 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 5

Oh, I'm so glad you updated this!  I love this story.  It was well worth the wait, Edward struggling with his emotions makes him seem so human.  Love it!

Reviewer: singitloud (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2008 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 1

Uhhh My Gosh.

Soooo Soo Soooo Good!

Update Sooon!!! :]

Reviewer: gaijingirl (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2008 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 5

LOVED IT! You write very well and I love the interplay / dialogue between them. I look forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: SpyketheKlown (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2008 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 5

I like it so far, alittle weird that she's now 10 years older than him though. I'm curious to see where this story heads. Nice job so far.

Happy Holidays! :)

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