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Reviews For Nice Catch
Reviewer: mottmom (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 7

awesome....  any kids she had would be "talented" - of course.

Reviewer: Queenofhearts820 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 01:38 AM · On: Chapter 7

Ooo love where this story is going. I Can't wait to read more :)

Reviewer: MyBrownEyes (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 7

OMG! Chris can read minds (or something like that)!!! This was a great chapter! Can't wait to see how Bella and Edward react to that (and to finish discussing things). This was a great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: MidnightSapphires (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 7

What?!??    Awesome ending...but I want MORE!  PLEASE????!?!?!??!!?!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you for writing!



Reviewer: Azrielstar (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 7

So Chris can read minds? How interesting!

Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 7

Awwm wow. amazing. i need more now!

Reviewer: Nashi (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 7

Chris is a very special child! Can't wait to see exactly how special.

Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 7

Wow!!! I wasnt expecting that one!!! That is definitely an unexpected twist to this story!!!  Cant wait for the next update!!!!!

Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 6

I cant wait for the Alice and Bella Reunion...and Emmett too!! Or any of them...i bet rosalie will like Bella more now that she has a kid. Great chapter!!!

Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 5

I really love this story and I love the reunion of them running into each other's open arms, but i think that Bella would've been more in unbelief that he loves her.  she was so sure that he didnt love her or want her anymore and it seems as though she just forgot about that part.  However, your story is captivating and I cant keep from reading!!! This chapter was great...very well written!

Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 4

I want more Edward and Bella but I hope that soon Chris wakes up and he gets me to meet Edward for real.  Love this story!!!

Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 3

Sooo perfect!! Loved, loved, loved this chapter!!!  Fantastic job!

Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 2

WOW...I actually cried at their reunion.  It was a nice way to picture it because I havent seen it done that way before.  This was very well written and I love this story!!!!

Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow!! I can tell this is going to be one of my favorites!!! Very well written!!

Reviewer: notmyself (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 7

Awesome. Just when I thought it was going to float calmly and pleasantly along. Nice curve ball there. I love the new depth to it. Very intriguing.



Reviewer: FalconFeathers (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 7

plot twist!

Reviewer: lostinthought (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 7

this story is so heartfelt. I love it! Please update soon!

Reviewer: redpanda (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 04:40 AM · On: Chapter 7

Cool, unexpected twist.  This is such a sweet story.

Reviewer: twilightfangirl08 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 02:58 AM · On: Chapter 7

This is really good i liked this chapter! keep going i really want to find out what happens !!!!!

Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 7


Crazy news, and I LOVE IT!

Can't wait for more more more, this is getting to be fabulous!

Reviewer: not_done_baking (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 01:00 AM · On: Chapter 7

Dun dun dun duuuun. Cra-zy! I like this. I don't really care for the huge chunks of paragraphs of Bella's inner thought and turmoil, which I know is totally needed for a story like this so I'm counting that off as me being out of school for too long. Probably the best "Edward comes back after so many years and Bella has a kid" fic.

Reviewer: Chandler (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 7

I am so in love with this story.  I am a cynic at heart and this story brings tears to my eyes.  The pain and vulnerability in Edward is astonishing.  I cannot tell you how talented I think you are.  To alter the Twilight universe so completely and still keep the characters so true to themselves is astonishing.   I cannot wait until the next chapter is up.  This story has me truly breathless.

Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 12:46 AM · On: Chapter 7

Oooohhhhh!  This is one of my favorite stories, I was so excited to get an update email on it!  I love this chapter!!!  I'm dying to know what the conversation b/Chris and Edward was!  Can't wait for the next update, keep up the good work!

Reviewer: sherilynn (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 7

dont be cruel, update soon...

Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 7

Oh. My. God! You didn't just end it there! I am so glad you are updating in a few days. I need to know more. This story just took a wicked turn and I am excited to see where you go with this one!

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