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Reviewer: JanCullen86 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 08:56 AM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
Oh poor Bella. I wish I could give her a big hug.
I loved the scene by the pool. It put a big smile on my face.
Part of me hopes Edward remembers more than he's letting on. I can't wait to read more. I'm really excited to see where this goes. I think it's going to be really good!
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 01:45 PM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
uh. I bet he remembers, but thinks it's a dream.
Reviewer: amwine (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 09:03 AM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
Wow...great story! I feel so bad that Bella thinks of herself as forgettable, but I can understand why... I can't wait to see what is up with Edward! Great job....thanks!
Reviewer: as58807 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 02:19 AM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
Wow, love your writing. I will be a continued reader. I feel so sorry for Bella and cant wait to find out what happens. Keep'em coming
Reviewer: Lou B Jones (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 01:57 AM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
Oh, wow! I can't believe how fantastic this story is! I felt like I was 15 years old all over again! Your writing put me right there in Bella's shoes. She's so cute too!!! I hope you're fast at updating cos I am in love with this story already. So freaking unique - read nothing like this before!!! You are FABULOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT!
Reviewer: Nikkycoly (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 10:45 PM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
Oh shit then iam in trouble haha my stories r always rated m oops lol
Author's Response: No, you'll be fine if they're M rated. Mine are over M: MA/NC17. :)
Reviewer: Nikkycoly (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 10:28 PM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
Why? It takes so long to get validated here : (
Author's Response: I may have to with no choice in the matter. There is trouble on that site with stories rated over M - they're getting pulled with threat of closing the author's account. Otherwise you can always go to The Writers Coffee Shop (Forgettable is there, too) - it's like inbetween here and ffic (banners for stories but with no validation requirements). Heaps of authors are now posting their stories there from ffic just in case. :) Hope this helps your future reading pleasure in the future. Belinda. :D
Reviewer: allybearsmommy8 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 09:32 PM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
This is really good. Please continue updating!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Chapter 2 should be up shortly, so I hope you like it when it goes through! :D Belinda. xx
Reviewer: Nikkycoly (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 07:28 PM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
I cheated...lol I loved it sooooo much I jumped ahead on ff and read what u posted over there eeek sorry I couldn't help it. Add chapter 9 lol I can't wait!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Oooooh, you little Trixta! But what a sweetheart you are for coming back and revewing for me! ;) Thank you!!! Like other MA stories on that site, however, it may be pulled soon - just a heads up. Belinda. xx
Reviewer: newecullen1 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 07:19 PM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
o yes i dig it. that sucks that edward doesnt remember anything he's done with bella. y is he always drinking? i wonder what's changed in his life for him to lose his path? just remember bella a drunk man's words are a sober man's thoughts. keep your head up girly. i enjoyed how you painted this story for us. can't wait for the next chapter! :D
Author's Response: Ah, you're the first one to ask about Edward! The following few chapters shed some light on him and his reasonings. Mmmm, you're a smart girl with your advice to B! How do we tell her? :) Thank you for your review and compliment! Next chapter not too far away, so I hope you like it, too! :D Belinda. xx
Reviewer: amydee (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 07:10 PM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
Very interesting so far. Sad and interesting.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! More on it's way soon. Hope you like it, too. :) Belinda. xx
Reviewer: Purple Akua (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 07:03 PM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
GUH, this was fantastic. The way you write from Bella's POV is so exhilarating, and really makes me remember all those lovely teenagery feelings of first love, and first heartbreak. Her inner monologues were seriously the best. I also really enjoy the way you set up the story, and am really excited to find out more about what kinds of other encounters she and Edward had, and what she plans to do about it now at 19. More soon please!!
Author's Response: Oh, I'm so glad you got all the excitement a 15 year old feels in Bella's shoes! Thank you so much for your review and stars! Love that you liked her inner monologue! Much more to find out, of course - more on it's way soon. :D Belinda. xx
Reviewer: xrxdanixrx (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 06:22 PM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
Congrats on getting your story on T'd! Awesome chapter, girl.:-)
Author's Response: Thank you for your encouragement, "sugar". ;) Love ya!
Reviewer: elislyn (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 06:12 PM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
Poor Bella. Like any self-conscious adolescent needs to think she's not worth remembering...
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! Yeah, she's really had a number pulled on her, hasn't she? Hope you like what's up next. :D Belinda. xx
Reviewer: pomme_de_terre (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 06:01 PM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
Great start, bb! You're doing a wonderful job:)
Author's Response: Thanks so much, honey! So are you. ;)
Reviewer: Replicating (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 02:56 PM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
sounds interesting. please continue.
Author's Response: Thank you so very much for taking the time in reviewing my little tale! Belinda. xx
Reviewer: twichipie (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 10:20 AM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
can't wait for the next chapter, please continue soon ;-) !!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time in reviewing and encouraging me! :D Hope you like the next installment. Belinda. xx
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 10:15 AM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
Are you kidding? PLEASE!!! Continue!! I was dying right along with Bella wanting Edward to at least give her some hint that she was there in his subconscious! Poor girl. Stupid alcohol. Yes, Please do continue and soon!! I'll add this to my favorites so I'll know as soon as you update!! Soon? Please?? Great writing.
*hugs* joanie
Author's Response: Awwww, *hugs u back*. Thank you so much for your fab review and stars! I'm so glad you connected with Bella, and that you are blaming the alcohol and not just Edward. :) Hoping you like chapter 2, too. Belinda. xx
Reviewer: Nikkycoly (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 10:08 AM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
Edward needs a slap in the face. ASSWIPE. Please continue I am hoping we find out something about Edward that Bella doesnt know, like maybe his real feelings. Yes please continue, there is nothing like this on here or anywhere.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review and stars! There is much to find out about Edward, including why he is the way he is. I have not seen something similar to this tale either, which is why I didn't know how well it would be revieved when I started, so I'm very glad you like it! Thanks again for reviewing and encouraging me! Belinda. xx
Reviewer: vivi4567 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 08:46 AM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
I ABSOLUTELY loved this !!!! Please continuue !!!! :)
Author's Response: I absolutely loved your review!!! I shall be continuing! Hope you like the next chapter, too, and thank you so very much for taking the time in letting me know your thoughts! Belinda. xx
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 08:44 AM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
You know I love this story girl. Glad to see it here as well as on FF.
Author's Response: Thanks honey for reviewing here also and for your stars!!! Belinda. :D xx
Reviewer: Babygirl718 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 05:50 AM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
I read this right before I had to take off for school and I am kinda happy there is not another chapter yet because I would have been late for school. I really do hope you keep writing this story because it seems really good.
Author's Response: Awww, thanks so much for taking the time to review when you were off to school!!! :D Hope you like the next chapter, too. :) Belinda. xx
Reviewer: LucyK (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 05:48 AM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
I'm hooked. I love the banter between Rose & Edward, & 15 year old Bella is just so cute. I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Oh, so happy to hook you! :D Thank you so much for taking the time to review and tell me what you liked! I rather liked B at 15, too - she was a sweetie - glad you liked her & the banter. :) Hope you like the next chapter, as well. Belinda. xx
Reviewer: mgg (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 04:33 AM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
Sorry I didn't elaborate on last review, I was feeding my baby and couldn't write more then.
Lovely first chapy, can't waite for next one.
Author's Response: Aww, you've got a bub? Lucky thing, you! :) So happy you liked my little tale, and thanks for your additional details. :D
Reviewer: jlfitz01 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 04:31 AM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
plz continue
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! I hope you like the next chapter, too! Belinda. xx
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