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Reviewer: MichelleHope (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2013 07:00 PM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
Love the story! Where is the next chapter??
Reviewer: izzycat (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2013 06:19 AM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
where did all the other chapters go? :(
Author's Response: I'm in the process of editing my stories so that I can get them back online. :-)
Reviewer: floweryfaye (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 02:54 AM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
Enjoyed the first chapter, looking forward to the rest!
I don't think Edward is as blase' as he is makin' out, hmmmmm! ;-)
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2011 07:14 AM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
Poor young Bella - that shit is heartbreakikng!! Even as an adult...my best friend once had sex with her boyfriend - the most amazing, earth-shattering, orgasmic, intimate sex they'd ever had - and the next morning, he remembered nothing because he was so fucked up. NICE. She was devastated!! What a loser...
I bet he thinks it was just a horny dream!
Wonder what's up w/ school? maybe he's just given up on ever please Doctor C, and figures why bother finishing if it's not really his dream any way?
Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 12:17 PM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
:)
Reviewer: Tarradactyl (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2010 07:06 AM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
great story already. I am hooked right away.
Reviewer: Dillinger910 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 05:36 AM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
:)
Reviewer: vamps09 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 08:44 PM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
I like the story, cant wait to go read more, poor Bella, Edward is a dork.
Reviewer: twibi (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2010 01:48 AM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
hey belinda,
well thankkkkkkk you so much for sending me the teaser :)
i can't wait for it to fully publish.
and thank you too for responding. y'know, as much as an author loves
comments/review (bec i was an author too), readers loves author's
feedback too :)
Author's Response: You are most welcome! I am also a reader and know how much I enjoy hearing back from authors - it's one of the things I love about ffn instead of novels. It's a shame I don't always get the time between updates to respond to all reviews. This time I'm on it. ;-) Chap 22 should be up within a few days. Belinda xx
Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 09:07 PM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
Like where your going with this! Great start!
Reviewer: isa2346 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 07:25 AM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
Really good. I like it.
Reviewer: twibi (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 04:47 AM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
uhuks~ pity Bella. But Edward really did feel something for her rite? Maybe he just holding his feelings for some reasons... maybe he thinks Bella was just like a sister to him. Got to read more to know more :)
nice story miss author!
Reviewer: Gone_Crazy109 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2010 10:09 PM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
Bella wow you still want him after that hmmmmmm.......i mean nomatter how hot he is........ok no we your living in the same same how i could see how thats hard......:S
Reviewer: sharpshiver (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 10:24 AM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
Nicey Nicey!.. love the chapter..the plot is so good and I am seriously looking forward to read next chapter. I'm having a nagging suspicion that the two guys have something to do with the chaos in Seattle!.. oh please dont let anything bad happen to bella.. i mean the girl is literally holdin' her titties from showing when those two douchebags appear!... (while reading the last part i was literally uttering the words why why why NOW!... let the kids play a teeny bit more please)lol
plus i like the forwardness of bella as well as when she's a little confused and insecure about going at it... the confused inner debate makes it more real, since she hasn't been with anyone except edward!.. and thank you so much for the wonderful lemon.. and ooo.. in the rain.. i never really saw that one coming!... love the emo-edward as you put it.. but i'm more than glad that he has finally made the first move and realized how much time he has already wasted!
keep the good work up.. and update soon!.. i simply cant wait to read more since the ending was totally a cliff hanger. And its killing me.. really
Reviewer: xbellex (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 02:23 PM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
Wow. Haha.. I'm totally absorbed into this story! ;o)
Reviewer: HeatherT (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 05:32 AM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
I'm not quite sure what they said to him, they never told me. He did come over later that evening and apologize for being an ass. We're still friends but it was still painful. I really love the fact that you've written a story in a way that SO many people can relate to.
Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 06:15 AM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
Oh groan!! That's a bit harsh, kissing her like that and having no memory.....I think I might try and do something to trigger his memory! lol Great start to this story, thanks for writing.
Reviewer: NornIronGirlie (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 11:11 AM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
This is fantastic! I absolutely loved the glimpse of Bella at 15. Edward seems like a bit of a prick, but I still like him :P
~Anna-Margaret
xx
Reviewer: ryann (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 04:17 AM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
I think this is one of your best chapters. The way your wrote the build up, and the emotion at the end. . . amazing! Now he knows, I have a feeling that all this time he just thought their first time was a dream. There is so much going on for him now. Bella has had the time to come to terms with what happened, and all she really wanted was for Edward to want her, to love her. Now she has that. He is going to have to deal with the guilt. I think what we know about Edward is that he doesn't really have very good self esteem. He is going to beat himself up over this, even if Bella has all ready forgiven him.
Can't wait for the next chapter. I hate to beg, but please post again soon, sooner the soon.
Author's Response: You were my 900th review! And such a wonderful review it is, too! Thank you so much for putting so much effort in telling me your thoughts on this chapter - it is very much appreciated! You nailed Bella on the head, saying that now all she really wants is for Edward to want her and love her. It's so gratifying when a reader just gets stuff like that! You also know Edward very well. :-) The next chapter shouldn't be too far away if I can help it. :-) Belinda. xx
Reviewer: tkegl (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 01:53 PM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
Ohhh.. okay, I'm loving this so far! :-) My heart broke a little for fifteen-year-old Bella, but I'm guessing Edward might remember more than he's letting on, at least subconsciously... we'll see...
Reviewer: smile_often (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 05:36 AM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
oohhhh...how i am loving this fic. I just want more and more!! i am utterly and totally invested and drawn in by these characters. Such hot and sexy back and forth between Edward and Bella but still believable. Well done
Reviewer: rychgurlkat (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 04:44 AM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
i like the talking in her mind i remember doing that lol very good.
Reviewer: fern10 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 04:21 AM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
What a great story! I discovered it the night before last and spent the rest of the night and half the day yesterday reading the whole thing. I work at home so blowing off half the day means I have to work twice as hard today if I want to get paid this week! But it was worth it. I love your version of Bella and Edward and can't wait to see how this all works out.
I'm wondering what it is Emmett has against Edward and exactly why Carlisle is so hard on him. And I'm wondering if this business with the lock on their door and the talk of something "going on in the city" is foreshadowing something? Don't tel mel, I want to be surprised! Update soon, please!!
Reviewer: wolf lover (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 02:19 AM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
Ohhhh, consider me thoroughly teased!!!!
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you liked it! Not long to wait now. :-)
Reviewer: JacksonsGirl1 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 05:27 AM · On: You're Gonna Kiss Me
Hi,
So my only problem with reading chapter updates on my ipod is that i can't review. so instead i have to save my comments for later and then try to remember what I wanted to say. Luckily for me i saved the last two chapters to read at once. After I finished the last chapter I sort of wished that Bella would forget what actually happened, poetic justic for Edward, but then i felt bad that she did forget. Buyers remorse. So I love Alice, I didn't really like her in the beginning but that was probably because she was trying to hook Bella up with Levi. Thank God that she finally smacked some sense into Bella. I do hope that Ali's plan to jog Eddie memory works because I can just feel more misunderstandings if he doesn't remember since he now thinks that bella is very good at hiding her private life, Levi and Mr. Black.
So thanks for the update, looking forward to seeing how this plays out.
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