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Reviewer: develindiskies (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 3 (shabbyapple)

I think Bella needs to open up her mind. You did a wonderful job a creating realistic characters!



Author's Response:

Hey there,  Thanks so much for your review!  It's definately a struggle for her...for anyone who has gone through something like this.  It changes the way you view yourself, your life, your ability to trust someone in a relationship.  So, it's going to take her a bite of time to let someone in.  Cheers!

Reviewer: develindiskies (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 2 (shabbyapple)

Towards the beginning Edward overuses the word "recently" otherwise this was very well written. While i don't like Edward (yet), I can tell he has potential. Both characters seem fun and worthy of reading.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Edward does have potential...its buried way down in there...but its there :)  Cheers

Reviewer: develindiskies (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 1

You know what? I just fell in love with your Bella Swan.



Author's Response:

Aw..Thanks!  Glad you're enjoying her...keep the reviews coming!  They make my day.  Cheers

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)

Heyi loved thsi chap =]



Author's Response:

Hey there-Thanks for the review--I'm glad that you're loving it! Cheers!

Reviewer: Kirbs (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)

This is amazingly raw, i love that they are at each other's throats from the beginning - but oh my is there a spark there or what!

Wonder are Edward's pictures of Bella? will she see them? can't wait for more, I think i am going to enjoy this bumpy ride!!



Author's Response:

Hey there!  Thanks so much for your review!  I'm glad you're enjoying the ride..it's definately bumpy 'cause that's just the way I roll.  Keep the reviews coming-they truly do make my day!  Cheers! Leslie

Reviewer: ocd girl (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)

this is so good 1 chapter is just not enough!!!!  I feel like I need to read it over and over again..



Author's Response:

Hey there!  Thanks as always for your comments!  I'm so glad you're enjoying it!  There's more coming...Cheers, Leslie

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)

OMG..Edward what the feck are you doing with that skank on the stairs?



Author's Response:

I know!  He's not thinking is he?  Thanks for taking the time to review.  Cheers!

Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)

Love the update, looking forward to more. =)



Author's Response:

Hey there-Thanks for the review!  Update is coming :)  Cheers

Reviewer: Trysh (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 02:13 AM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)

OHHHHH NOOOOOOO......NOT LAURENNNNN!!!!!!!! Stupid fool!!!!! Can't wait to read more



Author's Response:

Hey there...hehehehehe-yep had to be done...thanks for the review!  Next chappy should be up soon.  Cheers

Reviewer: dedreader (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)

This is so original, and I love it!   More, more, more please...What will it take to get Edward and Bella out of their self-involvement andinvolved with each other? Hmmm, I'm waiting to see!



Author's Response:

Hi there-Thanks so much for the review!  I'm glad you're loving it...what will it take hmm?  More than a vase of flowers that's for sure :)  Cheers

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)

Rejection being uncommon in Edward's life seems to have sparked some good and not so good tendencies in his personality!  It appears that he needed to prove his manhood, and it didn't quite work out the way he expected!  Well, I guess persistence is the key, maybe if he tried to find the real Edward under all the facade and showed it to Bella he'll get a different result!



Author's Response:

Hey there!  OMG you're reading my mind!  He needs to get back to who he was...the real Edward is in there somewhere :)  Thanks so much for your review!  Always love hearing your thoughts.  Cheers

Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)

Shit Eddie. Go see her again. And again. Get Alice on his side for her date. Can't wait to see what you come up with next. Meg

Author's Response:

Poor Edward..what is he thinking?  He will be going to see her these two have a lot to work on :)  Thanks for the review.  Hope you keep enjoying the story!  Cheers

Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)

Shit Eddie. Go see her again. And again. Get Alice on his side for her date. Can't wait to see what you come up with next. Meg

Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 4 (shabbyapple)

Ugh he needed to let em know about the flowers lol. Meg

Author's Response:

:)  LOL...that would be using his head...Cheers, Leslie

Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 2 (shabbyapple)

Em bad boy. A little waring would have been nice.

Author's Response:

LOL-exactly!

Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 1

Poor Bella interesting beginning. Meg

Author's Response:

Hey there-Thanks for the review!  Keep them coming!  Cheers

Reviewer: MPattz (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)

MUST HAVE MORE.........

I instantly picture Rob as Dali in Little Ashes all insane looking sans the stache!!!

lol

 

 



Author's Response:

LOL!  More is on the way...thanks for reading and for reviewing...it means a lot.  Cheers

Reviewer: MPattz (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 4 (shabbyapple)

I am sucked the fuck in.........



Author's Response:

:)  Glad you're enjoying!

Reviewer: MPattz (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 3 (shabbyapple)

They're from Edward.....they have to be

Ummmm I'm a fast reader just so you know....so quit everything you do that does not involve writing and uhhh yeah that would be great!

 

xo



Author's Response:

LOL-Fast reader-wow!  Hmmm, how to quit everything now...must find way to clone myself...Thanks for reviewing!

XO

Reviewer: MPattz (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 2 (shabbyapple)

Me again...

I am dying to know if and how he figures out how to get through to Bella...poor Eddie has his work cut out for him...but i love it...I am a angsty kinda h00r ....movin on...........



Author's Response:

Hey :)  OH, yes, he's got his work cut out for him...where's the fun if she just gives in right away LOL.  Thanks for reading and reviewing...it means the world to me.  Cheers

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)

Great chapter!

I hope that Bella doesn't find out about what he did...She'll never go out with him then. =(

Looking forward to your next chapter!



Author's Response:

Hi there,  Thanks so much for the review!  Oh dear...Edward, what were you thinking?  Hmmm, and will she find out? We'll have to wait and see :)  Update is coming.  Cheers, Leslie.   

Reviewer: melsie69 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)

I am really loving your story. I read a lot of stories at a time, and it boggles my mind why you don't have more reviews, especially given that some stories have tons and aren't that good.

Anyway, I like that you aren't making it easy for Edward, but also that you didn't have Bella catch him in the stairwell. That would have been needless angst. Did Bella understand that he sent the flowers? Will she stop being so bitchy soon? I mean I know why she's acting like that, but I'm almost feeling sorry for old Eddie! Keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Thanks so much for your words...they mean the world to me...you've made my day!  Bella is pretty sure now that he sent them from his comment; "Did you know purple hyacinths mean I'm sorry."  Oh, those flowers are coming back into play in a few chappys *insert evil laugh here*.  I want Edward to suffer, just a little...lets face it, he's been a bad boy and he's used to getting what he wants.  Bella will get there, trust me, but it will take a bit more time. Hope you continue to enjoy and to review.  Cheers, Leslie

Reviewer: graceisgone (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)

i love this! poor edward. can't wait for the next update!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  Glad you're enjoying it!  Update is coming.  Cheers!

Reviewer: MPattz (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 1

MizzezPattinson here.....ahem

Well I didn't see that one coming...To be honest I barely read the summary I am jumping into this one because I like the way you write and well..... you're Canadian...just kidding...

I am now about to ignore my son (kidding again) to read this all....On to Chap 2...

 

BTW...I love!!



Author's Response:

Ahem indeed! LOL...We Canadians must stick together!  Hope you enjoy...looking forward to hearing what you think Cheers, Leslie

Reviewer: withherownwings (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)

I really REALLY like this story! Bella is so angry/hurt/bitter, and with good reason, but I just want to scoop her up and hug it all out of her! I hope Edward doesn't give up--I know a lot of guys would have by now.

Keep it up! I can't wait for the next chapter!

-Sara



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Thanks so much for your review!  It really does mean the world to me :)  Yep, she's bitter and Edward's not giving up...at least not yet :) 

Cheers

-Leslie

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