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Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 9(shabbyapple)

Jeez, over-reacting there Bella? You could at very least listen to Rob's story about what happened.



Author's Response:

Hi there :)  Thanks for reading and reviewing!  That's her-over-reacting and assuming the worst.  It's all she knows right now--she's afraid of what she's feeling and it's the only way she knows how to deal with it.   She's getting there-at least now, she admits she likes him.  Hope you continue to read and review.  It makes my day.  XO Leslie

Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 9(shabbyapple)

LOL so does that spell the end of the L names?  I kind of liked them too.  But we'll see if Lauren sticks this time.

That was kind of gross...what kind of girl does that in public?  What kind of guy lets her?!  But, it was from Bella's POV..so the "not really trying to stop her" may have been misintrepretated and Edward could very well have been praying to the Gods to chop off his stuff if this bj happened.  right?  I'm excited for his POV.  Poor guy.



Author's Response:

Hey there-Oh, I'm not sure that we're all done with the L names-LOL.  Misinterpretation-definately a possibility!  Thanks as always for reading and reviewing!  Hope you continue to enjoy these two and their crazy, lives.

Cheers,

Leslie

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 05:31 AM · On: Chapter 8(shabbyapple)

So, it's really funny how obsessed with Bella he is and how he works so hard to look like he just playing around!  I'm sure that when he asked to paint Bella she was completely expecting him to ask her for something else.  As for his relationship with his father, and his mother dying and leaving things so unsettled-well now we see how Edward learned his avoidance behavior.  It's no wonder his inflated ego is so precarious.  He doesn't seem to want to dwell on anything deeper, and Bella seems to have rocked his world of the "surface".  So, who's at the door?   Angela maybe?  I hope he turns right around!



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Thanks as always for your review :)  It's like you read my mind :)  His relationship with his father has definately left some scars...he does try oh so hard to look cool and like he could care less-something else he got from Daddy C.  So many unresolved issues.  Angela huh-well, opinion seems to be divided on this one...we'll have to see :)  Update is coming.  Hope you keep reading and reviewing-they really do make my day.  Cheers, XO Leslie

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 03:29 AM · On: Chapter 8(shabbyapple)

Hey great chapb lol thats one way to spend more time with some1 - can i paint u



Author's Response:

Hi there :)  Thanks so much for your review:)  Definately a good way to spend time :) Cheers Leslie

Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 8(shabbyapple)

Very good story I look forward to more.

Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks so much for your review! Hope you continue to enjoy. - Cheers Leslie

Reviewer: Trysh (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 7(shabbyapple)

I don't think it's Lauren at all...I think it's ANGELA!!...a part of his past that came back to get him...it's gotta be....damn it. oh well...a bit of angst before the good stuff :)



Author's Response:

Hey there!  Thanks so much for the review...Angela huh? Views seem to be divided on this one..Hmmm-we'll have to wait and see :)  LOL- Glad you're enjoying it.  Cheers-Leslie XO

Reviewer: melsie69 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 04:40 AM · On: Chapter 8(shabbyapple)

oops- forgot to mention the exchange b/t carlisle and edward--->so awesome! i loved it! it's so unique and fucking hilarious. also good to see some of edward's history- daddy c is not the best role model!!!



Author's Response:

Daddy C---exactly...not a good influence :)  More Daddy C coming up LOL....Cheers, Leslie

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 04:26 AM · On: Chapter 8(shabbyapple)

*LOL* @ Edward's antics in getting Bella to agree to pose for him in return for a donated piece of artwork :)



Author's Response:

:)  He's trying to be oh so cool...Hope you continue to read and review.  Cheers, Leslie

Reviewer: melsie69 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 8(shabbyapple)

i really liked this chapter- being inside edwards head is fun. the exchange between him and bella was great- so not what i expected him to ask!

but the end, the cliffie- you just can't cut a guy a break, can you? i'm betting it's lauren, there with bella? oy. i was hoping that would disappear. poor edward. thanks for the quick updates!



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Thanks so much for your review!  I'm glad you're enjoying it.  Poor Edward :)  Lauren eh...hmmm...we'll have to wait and see *insert evil laugh here*.  LOL XO Leslie

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 8(shabbyapple)

dying for more!



Author's Response:

Hi!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!  Update is on the way :)  Cheers

Reviewer: monica1981 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 8(shabbyapple)

I think I like an irresponsible Carlisle, just because I've never seen him as that type of person.



Author's Response:

Hi there!  He's usually squeaky clean!  But, I like different :)  Cheers, Leslie

Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 8(shabbyapple)

Loved the update! Can't wait to read about Bella and Edward's painting sessions. ;)



Author's Response:

Hi There!  Thanks for your review!  Painting session...hmmm..yes, it's coming :)  Cheers Leslie

Reviewer: meaj123 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 8(shabbyapple)

Thanks, look forward to the next chapter! :)

Author's Response:

Hi there! Thanks -Hope you're enjoying...next chapter is on the way.  Cheers!

Reviewer: MPattz (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 8(shabbyapple)

Holy shit....! Its not bella. Its Angela!

 

Grrrr I wish there was a next button to click on....

 

I'll be waiting, watching the snow melt!

 

xo



Author's Response:

Well hello there Nancy Drew...hmmm Angela eh?  Perhaps...perhaps not :)  Ahh snow..its going down to -13 tonight...flurries in the forecast...welcome to Spring in Ottawa.  Thanks so much as always for your review.  XO Leslie

Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 7(shabbyapple)

why is he doing logo doodles instead of making millions.  he needs his daily muse fixing and he can't get that anywhere else.

hawaii is over rated and i though sucked...lol.  jk, but i don't think its worth the 5 hr flight and the money.



Author's Response:

Ahhh-You even share my views on Hawaii!!!  It is expensive isn't it?   I was wondering if anyone would make a comment on that!  Yeah...he needs his muse for sure!  Hope you continue to enjoy.  Cheers, Leslie

Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 5 (shabbyapple)

poor jake. tough luck. okay, see you next time.  i guess my comment about taking the stairs should have gone to this chapter...had i not skipped it the first time. LOL.  but they go back up in the elevator in the next chapter..so it kind of fits there..sort of.

poor mike!  there is a trail of broken hearts...



Author's Response:

Poor Mike indeed!  He tries so hard doesn't he?  You make me smile.  XO Leslie

Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 3 (shabbyapple)

apparently i am dumb.  managed to skip a chapter here and there why reviewing huh.

i cannot wait to see what bella's story is. 

flowers to a girls heart. nm that they die instantly and aren't worth the money.  but whatever works right?



Author's Response:

LOL- They do die instantly...why do we love them???? OK, maybe not all of us love them LOL  XO Leslie

Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)

i swear i sound boarderline dumb in these reviews. LOL feel free to ignore and move on.  i giggle everytime he comes up with another L name.  he certainly knows a lot.  i LOVE that bella takes the stairs. =)  she's perfectly capable of walking, just not dancing.  haha



Author's Response:

LOL I would never ignore a review!  It's why I write this crazy stuff in the first place :)  You're the first one to notice the L names...I love it..yep-she's capable of dancing...she just won't...stubborn woman that she is :)  XO Leslie

Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 4 (shabbyapple)

artists are the best. are artists hippies? or are hippies artists? or are the two mutually exclusive? cause i don't really see edward as a hippie..artist yes though.  i think some of his canon characteristics makes him the best silent brooding artistic type. yummy why the hell am i talking about hippies?  wtf..nm



Author's Response:

LOL-artists and hippies...yes!  I've known both :)  Hippies are yummy too!  This Edward, is more of a silent mysterious artist type :)  XO Leslie

Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 2 (shabbyapple)

is this one of those times where you can look back on a shitty situation and laugh about it? cause i think what edward says and not knowing about bella's leg is kind of a funny ice breaker.  not the best impression, but cut the guy some slack he didn't know



Author's Response:

LOL-Exactly!  She's hardened, refuses to let anyone in right now and will use any excuse to dismiss someone.  Oh, Bella...when will you learn?  xo Leslie

Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 1

i really love how they meet.  they are both unique souls that don't really mesh right away. =) 



Author's Response:

Unique is right!  Hope you continue to read and enjoy.  xo Leslie

Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 8(shabbyapple)

okay, i have skirted through this fic every time it has posted, but never reviewed. i know i suck. lol. i'll try better next time ;) but i kind of am loving EB's relationship, quasi one at least.  its not perfect and that's what so awesome about it.  she his muse but she hates his guts. haha. can he have his cake and eat it to?  is that the saying?  you know what i mean right? lol.



Author's Response:

Hi there~ Thanks for taking the time to review!  It really means so much.  Can he have his cake and eat it too...hmmm...well, we'll just have to see about that! LOL  Thanks so much, Cheers, Leslie

Reviewer: rita263 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hello!! I just finished reading all of the chapters, and i must say that i adore this story. I like this Bella. She's so strong, and, most impportantly, she makes Edward flustered! It's so nice to se this side of him, bcz usually he's all cocky and confidant. Continue with the amazing work.

 

XOXO,

Ana



Author's Response:

Hi Ana!  Thank you so much for your review!  It really means so much to me.  I'm glad you're enjoying it!  Some aren't really sure about this Bella-I'm glad you like her :)  Update will be coming soon.  Cheers, Leslie

Reviewer: JasperBelikovDimirtiHale (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 01:36 AM · On: Chapter 7(shabbyapple)

Hey!

I told you I'd review right now :)

Lol

Great chapter! I absolutely love this story. You had me hooked from the first sentence. 

From the disclaimer, even!

:) 

I think he should give them a donation because he's nice and caring and sensitive...and hot!!

Can't wait for the next chapter :)



Author's Response:

:)  Hey there!  Thanks so much for reviewing!  You know I love them-especially today :)  Now...about that donation...it's coming up soon-XO Leslie

Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 12:56 AM · On: Chapter 7(shabbyapple)

I'm really enjoying this story so far. I'm looking forward to the next update.



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Thanks so much for your review!  Glad you're enjoying it!  Update is on the way.  Cheers, Leslie

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