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Reviewer: emozing (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 32(Shabbyapple)
The feeling of warmth and hope in this chapter made me all tingly (is there such a word?) The love between these two is definitely growing. I like the dependence and acceptance that they are gaining as they adjust to each other. And for Edward to think about marriage - can't wait till he has that conversation with Bella! With your gift of words, this will be awesome.
Giggled at Renee and her bottles! To each their own!
Did not see Riley's idea about the museum coming -- but it is the perfect avenue for Edward. Not only does he get to keep the original nineteen canvases intact, but will also realize a life-long dream. You are brilliant!!
I can't help but feel that things are still not quite right with James. He just seems to feel so evil.
Hard to wait on updates -- but they are so worth the wait. Thanks for writing.
Sparkledamnu on twitter.
Reviewer: dalzieldawn (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 32(Shabbyapple)
One word AWESOME, This story is ssssooooo good. Keep up the great work. I hope Edward decides to leave the paintings as is.
Reviewer: axd3258 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 32(Shabbyapple)
so good.
anxious for the next chapter.
seriously cant get over how much i loved this chapter...and this story in general :D
Reviewer: Luvtwilight14 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 32(Shabbyapple)
This is such a beautifully written story! So much passion even with slow burn! Love that Riley would offer to hang them AS IS! They are his life story since he has met Bella and the fire damage just adds to it in that he could have lost his inspiration but they all survived. Love that he is at her apartment painting and that they are so close now! Their need for each other is a beautiful thing! Great job!
Hugs, Stephanie
Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 32(Shabbyapple)
i'm liking how riley thinks! =) no wonder he's such a smart man.
you accidentally call renee esme. ;) moms. hehe
so..what's with james' 180 turnaround? is it here to stay?
Author's Response: Hey there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Yeah-My beta and I missed that and just saw it when I reread it. I changed it *rolls eyes*
More on the way.
XO
Reviewer: debussy_fan (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 18(shabbyapple)
Great story. I have to ask if anyone does spell check on this. LOL
Lose is not L-o-o-s-e. Peek is not p-e-a-k. It just annoys the grammar nazi in me. ;)
Author's Response: Hi there,
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yes it does get grammar checked-but there's always something that gets missed.
Cheers
Reviewer: feny100 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 27(Shabbyapple)
OMG, my heart is pounding. This story is wonderful, but I have a very bad feeling something horrible is going to happen to Edward. Great writing, by the way, I love it. Have you written any other stories?
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing and for your kind words.
I'm so glad that you are enjoying these two.
Yes- I write a RPF- Finding Forever, and another E/B fic with MizzezPattinson - Of Mustangs & Men. Both here on Twilighted.
More on the way.
XO
Leslie
Reviewer: Mrs Boyscout (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 31(Shabbyapple)
I apologize for being total fail at reviewing, but I got so caught up in the story that I just kept clicking "next".
What a truly unique premise. I've never read anything like it and I always learn things from reading your fics. I even tried ice wine a few weeks ago, remembering it from Finding Forever. And you put it in this one, too ;) Really liked it, btw.
I like how they started out slow and stumbling and then found their stride. There is a great deal of trust now between them and I'm so happy that they have each other for the struggles that they've had to endure.
I will admit to thinking that James was the crazy stalker, but now I think it makes sense that it's a jealous woman -- wanting someone you can't have can make you crazy, that's for sure.
Lauren is totally cracking me up in this fic, she is so desperate for love and attention it's sad.
So looking forward to what's next. Love this so far!
Michelle
Author's Response: Hi Michelle!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Clicking "next" is a good thing! Never apologize for that!
So glad that you are loving these two. That makes me happy on a day like this.
More on the way.
XO
Les
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 31(Shabbyapple)
Well thank goodness they are both going to be physically ok, Poor Edward, all that work, possibly all lost and having to go back to his apartment to face it. I'm sure he'll get through this with the help of his Bella, his family and friends, I get the feeling it may be a long road. I can't wait to read Edward's POV to find out how he's feeling and what he's thinking. Jane x
Author's Response: Hi Jane!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Oh, Edward! Poor guy is a mess right now! His POV is coming up.
XO
Leslie
Reviewer: buffbroinze (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 04:42 AM · On: Chapter 31(Shabbyapple)
I'm so sorry..I'm complete fail at reviewing over here on Twilighted..don't know why..I'm way more polite over on FF.net.
Anyway..I wanted to say that I think your story started off really really and has just been getting better. I wasn't so sure of the Lauren and Edward in the stairwell incident and Bella destroying her flowers and sending them back...but I get why you wrote that. They had a long way to go to trust each other and change and open up.
I really like the premise of the story...Bella's injury...how it opens up such a caring side of Edward...making him think of someone else instead of focusing only on his own needs. And Bella letting someone help her..someone with a great passion for art..that can show her there is so much more for her to experience.
Jane...was NOT expecting her to be the mad stalker..so well done for the surprise! Love when I can't work our what's going to happen.
Edward in the hospital was wonderful...his worry for Bella was so lovely to see. He really does love her.
So....I never review then give you a long arse review in one go...sorry!
Carry on...lovin' your work!
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing and for your kind words.
Oh my-don't apologize for not reviewing! I'm just glad that you found this story and are enjoying it.
You are so right about them - they have both been through a lot and have come a long way towards accepting themselves and each other. It's amazing how much strength you can find with the help of someone.
More on the way.
XO
Leslie
Reviewer: feny100 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2010 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 21(Shabbyapple)
Exciting. I think the driver is James for some insane purpose.
Author's Response: Hi there!
Hmmm James... we'll have to wait and see!
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
XO
Reviewer: feny100 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2010 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 18(shabbyapple)
I am loving this new Edward, trying so hard to change and be a good guy. I am looking forward to Edward and Bella getting together, they are made for each other.
Author's Response: Hi there,
Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad that you are enjoying these two.
XO
Reviewer: ocd girl (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2010 03:47 AM · On: Chapter 31(Shabbyapple)
ok I'm more then happy for him to stay with me, my husband might not like it but my daughter would love it!!! Thank god all his work isn't destroyed!
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
hehehehe - *sigh* he could stay here too!
Glad you are enjoying.
More on the way.
XO
Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2010 03:25 AM · On: Chapter 31(Shabbyapple)
Bloody silly hospital rules. Why can't they understand that having a hot gorgeous man in your bed is a pretty damn good therapy?
Poor Edward - I hope they are not all totally ruined.
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
LMAO-damn you hospital! Sign me up for that therapy... pretty please?
More on the way.
XO
Reviewer: robskitten (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2010 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 31(Shabbyapple)
oh so good!! ur storytelling is compelling making me not want to stop and wishing i could continue on!! keep up the good work!!
Author's Response: Hi there hun!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
I'm so glad that you are enjoying.
More on the way.
XO
Reviewer: feny100 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 15(shabbyapple)
Edward is so sweet.
Reviewer: feny100 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 14(shabbyapple)
At first I was very disappointed with Edward because he never seems to learn, but he has turned into a very sweet guy, and I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewer: feny100 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 2 (shabbyapple)
Great story, I love it. I am new to fanfiction and just happened upon your story, and I am really glad I did. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Hi there and Welcome!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
I hope that you continue to enjoy. These two are definitely not your usual E and B. They both have quite a bit to get through and overcome.
Lots more on the way.
XO
Leslie
Reviewer: kmac17 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 05:40 AM · On: Chapter 31(Shabbyapple)
loved it post soon please
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Glad you are loving it.
More on the way.
XO
Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 31(Shabbyapple)
Loved it!
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Glad you loved it!
More on the way.
XO
Reviewer: demmy (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 31(Shabbyapple)
I thought it was Renee doing the drumming and cracked up. Still hilarious, though.
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
hehehehe-glad you enjoyed.
XO
Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 03:00 AM · On: Chapter 31(Shabbyapple)
Oh, poor Edward. I can undestand what it is like to have something you worked so hard on destroyed.
But hurray for a happy, in-love Jake. I hate when he pines after Bella for too long. And I really like how in love your Edward and Bella are.
Thank you for the update.
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
I'm glad that you are enjoying these two- yeah - no pining here for this Jake-he's important to her, but he's also in looovvve. hehehe
More on the way.
XO
Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2010 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 31(Shabbyapple)
I'm glad Bella is alright. But poor Edward - he must feel as if his life has been taken from him. Even though he said that he could always paint more and the only important thing is that Bella is fine... His paintings may be replaceable, kind of, but his studio is not. It's his life, and his safe place, and now it's gone. I wouldn't bee too surprised if it took a long time for him to start painting again...
Thanks for updating. I can't wait for the EPOV, to see if I'm maybe right with some of my assumptions about his feelings...
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
You are right about Edward- he's going through an emotional roller coaster right now. This is how he expresses himself, its his life's work.
More on the way. Hope you continue to enjoy.
XO
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2010 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 31(Shabbyapple)
Poor Edward :( So proud that Bella is being the strong one, even though she always tends to be :)
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
You're right! She does tend to be the strong one!
More on the way.
XO
Reviewer: physcofarmgurl (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2010 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 31(Shabbyapple)
Awesome chapter!I can't wait for the next update :)
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Glad you enjoyed!
More on the way.
XO
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