I'm glad to see the Jacob is starting to accept Bella and Edwards relationship.  I think the Volturi was involved in the attack on the wolves.  I like the turn the story has taken.  Keep up the good work.

WHEW!  What a chapter. awesome job.  Not even a cliffhanger.  But that doesn't mean I don't want any more!!!!

 

GIMME!

I love this in its entirety. It has so much promise. You've confined this to a year, a month per chapter, but there isn't a distinct plotline that you have to follow. 

Better yet, it feels realistic and to the book. I don't know how to explain it because there isn't anything overly poetic to me or any moment that absolutely sticks with me, but the simplicity of the events and the humanistic qualities you add make it wonderful. Renee dies. Edward leaves. Teenagers go to a dance and try to make each other jealous (but without that trite writing that makes it bigger than it is). It just life and I think you can take the idea of a full circle to its fullest like this. This is so very refreshing.

I get excited every time I get an email telling me its updated, and I hope they don't stop coming for a while. Happy writing.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! There will be some chapters (coming up) that involve the fantasy world and difficulties that come with it.  Originally, I had just intended on writing one chapter for a Christmas contest, but never felt satisfied with the content.  I canceled my plans, came up with this idea, and the thoughts of what could happen each month haven't been a problem;) The chapters are a little long, but there is just so much that can happen within a month.  Hope you continue to enjoy:)

I think you did a very good job with Charlie's POV.

Nice long chapters with plenty of plot!

Author's Response:

Thanks.  Never hear a lot from Charlie.  I plan on using him more further into the story.  Glad you liked it;)

I'm really intrigued so far and after reading your reviews I am assured that there is no Bella/Jacob ending (maybe confusion...but no ending at least I don't think so). Sorry I just can't get attached to a story that will eventually turn me off in a fateful chapter...its too disappointing and I simply can't read B/J as the goal pairing. Otherwise I love it so far, I'm glad B/E are going through a rough patch b/c it allows for great story drama and hopefully a better relationship in the end. ;)

Author's Response:

What's life without some bumpy roads?  It's the trials we go through that makes up appreciate what we have.  That's the best encouragement I can give you.  Hang in there;)

we need to get inside bellas  head I just can't figure her out.

wow, that was alot in one chapter! I like it:)

Author's Response:

Thanks!  I've made it through March so far (though only one month has been posted due to another story I'm writing) and because of how I'm doing this story, the chapters are long.  I'm trying to only get a couple of weeks in each month...if that makes any sense.  The ideas for the chapters are centered around events that take place each month:  December - Christmas; July - Independence; September - Bella's birthday and so on.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.