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Reviewer: Crazybee3 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2011 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 2 (shabbyapple)
Ha, no kidding you aree slow with updates. lol (I'm not trying to be mean. Sarcasm doesnt come out great in text)
Anywho. I really wish you kept with this story :(
Maybe your mind can be changed *lip:(*
Well thank you for this pestering feeling in my gut of an unfinished fic. (Sarcasm, sort of.)
Reviewer: CassN06 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2010 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 2 (shabbyapple)
wish you were still writing this one!
Reviewer: albalola (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 2 (shabbyapple)
CMON IS THIS IT, JUST LIKE THAT, AFTER CHOOSING TANYA....JUST LIKE THAT ...NOP IS TO EASY, YOU NEED ,,NO WE NEED ANOTHER ENDING , MAYBE EDWARD NEEDS A LITTLE LESSON, MAYBE HE CAN SEE HIS DAUGHTER BUT BELLA NEEDS TO GIVE HIM THE COLD SHOULDER.......
Reviewer: sicklittlesuicide (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 2 (shabbyapple)
I love it!
I demand that you update. Now. Now. Now.
Reviewer: twilightmom96 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 1
wish u would finish this
Reviewer: Irishcharm429 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 2 (shabbyapple)
OMG that is just so sweet. There have been a lot of Bella pregnant fanfics, but this one is so different. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: berdb (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 2 (shabbyapple)
Wow, that is messed up. Poor Bella, he didn't choose her. He could have decided to take care of the baby and still be with Bella. But it had to be all or nothing. I don't blame Bella for not telling him. He didn't choose her. & It would have been too messy if he was with Tanya like she thought.
Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 2 (shabbyapple)
oh so sweet iwant more
Reviewer: lain16 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 2 (shabbyapple)
loving this story , obviously they have lots to talk about but i can't help thinking that tanya will come back to ruin thing once again
Reviewer: gabys (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 2 (shabbyapple)
Great story, looking forward to more.
Reviewer: Bon03 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 2 (shabbyapple)
great chapter...i'm glad we didnt have a huge wait to see their reunion.
Reviewer: Shadowdragon13 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 2 (shabbyapple)
What an emotional ride! I'm totally hooked on your story. It's beautiful and well written. More? Please?
Reviewer: Tsumi (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 2 (shabbyapple)
err i think you jumped your story from zero to sixty, things this doest really seem natural you should let your characters feel out their emotions more
Reviewer: loveofhenry (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 1
It sounds like it was a good thing that Tanya left. Glad Edward is going home- cant wait to see what the reunion will be like
Reviewer: MissMartha (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 2 (shabbyapple)
Please don't be slow updating. This is really good and I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next installment. and if you don't think that's uncomfortable...
Reviewer: notreal17 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 1
I cant wait to read more... I love it so far and cant wait to find out how everything will work its way out...
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 1
Well, he was stupid to take Tanya back. I never understood why people would be together for "a child" when it isn't working - the kids know. Bella should have never kept it from him.
Reviewer: MissMartha (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 1
You've gotten my interest. I can't wait for the next installment. Please update soon. I really like how esy to read your story is. It's not bogged down in extraneous details like so many are.
Reviewer: MissMartha (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 1
You've gotten my interest. I can't wait for the next installment. Please update soon. I really like how esy to read your story is. It's not bogged down in extraneous details like so many are.
Reviewer: victoriajoy (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 1
Interesting premise! Really looking forward to reading more about these two -- I mean four!
Reviewer: YuriSeth (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 1
Please keep this coming looks like an awesome story !
Reviewer: BlueBlood (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 1
I love this story. My eyes got a little teary......
Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 1
Wow I really like this. Great start and I can't wait for Edward's reaction when he finds out that Bella is one and the same with a child. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: 01dani (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 1
wow this is such a good story im adding it to my favourites so keep writing!!
Reviewer: momtokyle (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 1
great storyline so far, looking forward continuing read the story as you post chapters and i'm hoping the postings will be smooth without ling waits in between.
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