Out of nowhere Emmett interrupted, “Rosie, baby, plenty of guys notice you!”
*squeals and claps*
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY HAVE TO BE TOGETHER!!!!
“We all know that you two like each other. It’s obvious. You smile even more and Jasper seems to stick out his chest like he’s trying to show off or something. It’s weird, but even Emmett noticed.”
*squeals and claps some more*
You’re turning me into a fan girl again... I just LOVED that line right there.
As long as I tried to keep Jasper and his bright blue eyes, big smile, dirty blonde hair that I want to run my fingers through, and dimples that I’d love to kiss out of my mind, I’d be fine.
*refrains from squealing*
She is so in deep with this... as if she would be able to keep Jasper out of her mind. That just isn’t possible! And I loved that description... *swoons*
“Dad worked in the World Trade Center and was there extra early. Evidently he forgot an important file, so Mom decided to go there and give it to him. She asked a family friend and neighbor to make sure I made to the bus stop on time, kissed me on my forehead, and walked out the door. I never saw her again.”
Oh my god. How awful :( My eyes are actually welling up right now. I feel like crying about this. Poor Rosalie!
However, that’s not what caught my eye. I stood in wonderment as I watched Jasper do wide pull ups, similar to the ones Will Smith did in I Am Legend. His back was facing me, so he had no idea I was standing there. My eyes scanned his shirtless back as each muscle strained and tightened and then relaxed. He must have been getting tired because the last three pull ups were coupled with deep guttural grunts that made my mind think the naughtiest of thoughts. I was in a trance and couldn’t take my eyes off of his glistening body.
*tries to close mouth again but can’t*
...
*stares at screen in a daze*
Jesus ch-
*faints*
...
Fucking HELL. Sign me up for that NOW. *fans self* the muscles... the deep guttural grunts. Holy crap... *is speechless*
Alice = LUCKIEST GIRL EVER.
Instantly I felt like I was hit with hot flash. My whole body flushed. Seeing his half naked back was nothing compared to seeing him half naked and facing me. I couldn’t control my eyes as they skimmed over his shoulders, pecks and a wonderful six pack He was wearing a dangerously low pair of sweat pants and I bit my lip at the sight of his happy trail.
*dies*
HAPPPY TRAIL!!!?!?!?!?!?!?!
*screams and then dies again*
It doesn’t matter that it isn’t possible to die twice. JASPER HAS A HAPPY TRAIL.
AHHHHHHHHHHH.
*crazy fan girl moment*
AND HE KISSED HER?
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! That was so cute. He kissed her.. but it was a sweet kiss not an all consuming hot kiss. Which I’m sure Alice wouldn’t object to either. I know I wouldn’t. I’m sensing a kiss like that is coming up? I hope so! Although I’ll be crazy jealous when it happens...
“I’m going to take a quick shower. Want to join me?”
YES I DO. YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES.
*melts*
“Yes,” I responded breathlessly.
SHE IS BLATENTLY SAYING YES TO HAVING A SHOWER WITH HIM.
I’d say yes to him, even though he said it was a joke :P
*squeals*
What do you think about Jasper doing pull ups....shirtless? *swoon*
You’re killing me. Very very slowly.
*faints*
Lol, look at this review. It is all squealing and screaming. I will write something normal now.
Jasper’s mum sounds like a goddess! And I can understand why Rosalie would want to look more like her mum now that we know her mum and dad died during 9/11. That was so sad to hear that and as I said above, it made me want to cry.
I can see Bella, Alice and Rosalie becoming really good friends after this. And I can totally see Emmett and Rosalie getting together. Or at least the tension building up between them. And Jasper... I have no words for his perfection. That ending was just a TEASE but you can see how I reacted to it.
I don’t think I mentioned in the other chapter, but Carlisle sounds like an absolutely amazing father. I love Carlisle!
I love this story, and I love you. You are an amazing writer and please please please continue to write this story. I am going to add this to my favourites list on my profile. This is just amazing. I’m so honoured to have this in my series and to have my contributor banner shown as well. You’re making me a very happy girl right now.
To answer your question. Jasper is making me swoon a hell of a lot.
And finally, I’m sorry about the review... I keep rambling on, don’t I?
Author's Response: Oh my goodness! You don't know how happy your review made me! I'm sitting here with a HUGE smile on my face! :) I'm glad that Jasper doing push ups had such an effect on you. I was inspired when I saw a guy doing the same thing at the gym (*faint*) and knew that would be the perfect situation for Jasper & Alice. Yes, there is much more to come, but I definitely want to build the tension.
Thanks again for your incredible review! *smile*