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Reviewer: LitlleMissCullen (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 6

I think they're cute! And I like that it's written in Alice perspective.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review! I'm glad you're enjoying the story! :)

Reviewer: newecullen1 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 6

OMG!!!!!! i swooned right with alice when jasper let her sleep on his chest. i sure wouldn't pass that moment up *squeals and claps* he's making breakfast...my fave blueberry pancakes...o jasper u son of a gun i will marry u....That kiss was it dreamy or what...*swoons* O jasper u can have it any way you want it lol ok let me calm down but that was another great chapter from u...wonderful descriptions and u have a way of making the words come alive and that's a true talent....i love it....just can't get enough of good ol' Jasper...



Author's Response:

*laughing* I'm glad you liked this chapter! So far it's been my favorite to write! Jasper is oh so dreamy!!!

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 6

Did he go to some sort of gentleman’s school because I’ve never met a guy who acts like him.




 


Classic line. I was thinking the same thing myself. There just isn't guys who are that swoony and that much of a gentleman. Maybe he had training? Swoon School? Lol!


 


“Why thank you, darlin’. I’ll make sure the monsters don’t get ya.”


 


*swoon*



I swooned with her just then. I want to squeal really really loud right now. I think my parents will think I'm weird though xD


 


If I weren’t such a lady, I would have thrown him down and had my way with him right then and there. Rosalie and Bella be damned!


 


She deserves a medal for her self control.


 


Upon feeling my fingers in his hair, Jasper moaned into my mouth.


 


Out of nowhere, Jasper pulled back and looked deep into my eyes. Feeling flushed and almost exhausted, I tried to regain my composure when I felt my body being lifted off the ground…and onto the counter.



*splutters*


 


I.. am.. so.. JEALOUS.


 


Jesus. I.. *screams* I don't even know what to say.


 


I wish so much that I was Alice right there. He moaned like literally freaking moaned into her mouth. *fans self*


 


And putting her onto the counter? Sweet Jesus.


 


I love this story!!!!


 


*fans self some more*



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter! It was so fun to write! I wish I were Alice too!!!! Oh boy do I wish! lol

Reviewer: newecullen1 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 5

he is totally swoontastic!!!i can't stop smiling at this story. i promise u it's like i'm right there with these two...jasper is so faintworthy but i'll stay standing this time...last time was totally beyond my control anyways great chapter...please hurry up and update...i can't hold my squeals in for too long lol



Author's Response:

I just submitted a new chapter this morning, so it should be up soon. If you thought chapter 5 was swoontastic, just wait until you read chapter 6!!!! *evil laugh*

Thanks again for all of your great reviews! :)

Reviewer: newecullen1 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 4

Jasper...doing pullups...I can finally die a happy woman *faints*



Author's Response:

I know! That wonderful image makes me smile every time I think about it!

Reviewer: newecullen1 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 3

OMG!!!! the tension is building indeed. this story is so cute...i find myself just smiling and blushing right along with alice....kudos on this great story.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!!!! I'm glad you like the story so far! :)

Reviewer: newecullen1 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 2

oh no!!!!! the dream seemed so real. jasper seems to have an eye for her with his flirting self...i ain't mad at him. if he was flirting with me i would have no words lol i wonder how rosalie and jasper know each other? all i have to say is he better not crush all of alice's hopes and dreams....

Reviewer: newecullen1 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 1

lol alice is so funny and adorable. it reminds me of myself in high school when i saw the cute new boy except i stumbled all over my words and quickly dismissed myself

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 5

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! An update!!! :D

So much so that I wanted to curl up on his bed and take a nap – but I wasn’t that crazy.

I was picturing her walking in there and smelling his clothes. Hell I would have walked around in there.. got into bed and smelt all his things. Okay.. I wouldn't have.. but I'd have been thinking it.. him in the shower? Jesus.. don't put images in my mind. Actually.. no.. please do that :P

“Explore? Did you think you were in a horror movie or something?” Bella joked.

I laughed out loud at that. Your story always makes me do that.. I just love the friendly feel the three girls have. And when Alice was describing the kiss (and I had finished melting) I smiled at how close they are to Rosalie already! I totally see them becoming best friends and gossiping about their guys.. Emmett will totally be into Rosalie.. hell he already was.. but he will be even more when he sees her!

“Well, have a lovely evening, ladies,” Jasper politely interrupted. If he had been wearing a hat, I’m sure he would have tipped it.

I'm trying to laugh quietly.. but.. hahah that was classic. I can just picture him tipping his hat XD AND ASK HIM TO WATCH THE MOVIE WITH YOU!!!!!!!!!!! ALICE CAN LIKE HIDE BEHIND HIM AT THE SCARY PART. Go on, you know you want to make me squeal and act like a fan girl, right?

He turned, smiling lazily and purred, “It was my pleasure, darlin’.”

...

*squeals*

"darlin'." I love it when he says that. It makes you all excited and happy and swoony and makes you want to melt and swoony some more :D Lol, I love saying and this and this.. I do it a lot with Jasper fics XD

You SO have to get Alice to ask him to join them IN A DARK ROOM and then they will snuggle up on the couch.. and it will be perfect.. *sighs* Please??? *begs*

YOU MENTIONED ME?!?! *happy dance* You have no idea how much that made me smile! I love you and your story!! :)

By the way, the picture isn't there.. do you think you could put another picture up? I want to see it :)



Author's Response:

*big smile* I'm so glad you liked this chapter! Don't worry, I think Jasper will make an appearance in the dark room during the movie! *wink wink*

I'm not sure why the picture isn't showing up, but I'll fix that!!!

Thanks again for the great review (and the INCREDIBLE banner)!!!! :D

Reviewer: chibi_estefy (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 4

OMG, such a tease!!! Can't wait for next chapter!!!



Author's Response:

More to come! Thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: jajo (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 4

That was evil.  EVIL.  Now I am going to be dreaming about Jasper's back all nigh long.  Pull ups.  Yum.



Author's Response:

hehehehe! What a lovely dream that will be! :)

Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 4

Hey great chap i love how u characterise jasper



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!!!!! :)

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 4

Out of nowhere Emmett interrupted, “Rosie, baby, plenty of guys notice you!”


*squeals and claps*


YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY HAVE TO BE TOGETHER!!!!


“We all know that you two like each other. It’s obvious. You smile even more and Jasper seems to stick out his chest like he’s trying to show off or something. It’s weird, but even Emmett noticed.”


*squeals and claps some more*


You’re turning me into a fan girl again... I just LOVED that line right there.


As long as I tried to keep Jasper and his bright blue eyes, big smile, dirty blonde hair that I want to run my fingers through, and dimples that I’d love to kiss out of my mind, I’d be fine.


*refrains from squealing*


She is so in deep with this... as if she would be able to keep Jasper out of her mind. That just isn’t possible! And I loved that description... *swoons*


“Dad worked in the World Trade Center and was there extra early. Evidently he forgot an important file, so Mom decided to go there and give it to him. She asked a family friend and neighbor to make sure I made to the bus stop on time, kissed me on my forehead, and walked out the door. I never saw her again.”


Oh my god. How awful :( My eyes are actually welling up right now. I feel like crying about this. Poor Rosalie!


However, that’s not what caught my eye. I stood in wonderment as I watched Jasper do wide pull ups, similar to the ones Will Smith did in I Am Legend. His back was facing me, so he had no idea I was standing there. My eyes scanned his shirtless back as each muscle strained and tightened and then relaxed. He must have been getting tired because the last three pull ups were coupled with deep guttural grunts that made my mind think the naughtiest of thoughts. I was in a trance and couldn’t take my eyes off of his glistening body.


*tries to close mouth again but can’t*


...


*stares at screen in a daze*


Jesus ch-


*faints*


...


Fucking HELL. Sign me up for that NOW. *fans self* the muscles... the deep guttural grunts. Holy crap... *is speechless*


Alice = LUCKIEST GIRL EVER.


Instantly I felt like I was hit with hot flash. My whole body flushed. Seeing his half naked back was nothing compared to seeing him half naked and facing me. I couldn’t control my eyes as they skimmed over his shoulders, pecks and a wonderful six pack He was wearing a dangerously low pair of sweat pants and I bit my lip at the sight of his happy trail.


*dies*


HAPPPY TRAIL!!!?!?!?!?!?!?!


*screams and then dies again*


It doesn’t matter that it isn’t possible to die twice. JASPER HAS A HAPPY TRAIL.


AHHHHHHHHHHH.


*crazy fan girl moment*


AND HE KISSED HER?


EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! That was so cute. He kissed her.. but it was a sweet kiss not an all consuming hot kiss. Which I’m sure Alice wouldn’t object to either. I know I wouldn’t. I’m sensing a kiss like that is coming up? I hope so! Although I’ll be crazy jealous when it happens...


“I’m going to take a quick shower. Want to join me?”


YES I DO. YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES.


*melts*


“Yes,” I responded breathlessly.


SHE IS BLATENTLY SAYING YES TO HAVING A SHOWER WITH HIM.


I’d say yes to him, even though he said it was a joke :P


*squeals*


What do you think about Jasper doing pull ups....shirtless? *swoon*


You’re killing me. Very very slowly.


*faints*


Lol, look at this review. It is all squealing and screaming. I will write something normal now.


Jasper’s mum sounds like a goddess! And I can understand why Rosalie would want to look more like her mum now that we know her mum and dad died during 9/11. That was so sad to hear that and as I said above, it made me want to cry.


I can see Bella, Alice and Rosalie becoming really good friends after this. And I can totally see Emmett and Rosalie getting together. Or at least the tension building up between them. And Jasper... I have no words for his perfection. That ending was just a TEASE but you can see how I reacted to it.


I don’t think I mentioned in the other chapter, but Carlisle sounds like an absolutely amazing father. I love Carlisle!


I love this story, and I love you. You are an amazing writer and please please please continue to write this story. I am going to add this to my favourites list on my profile. This is just amazing. I’m so honoured to have this in my series and to have my contributor banner shown as well. You’re making me a very happy girl right now.


To answer your question. Jasper is making me swoon a hell of a lot.


And finally, I’m sorry about the review... I keep rambling on, don’t I?



Author's Response:

Oh my goodness! You don't know how happy your review made me! I'm sitting here with a HUGE smile on my face! :) I'm glad that Jasper doing push ups had such an effect on you. I was inspired when I saw a guy doing the same thing at the gym (*faint*) and knew that would be the perfect situation for Jasper & Alice. Yes, there is much more to come, but I definitely want to build the tension.

Thanks again for your incredible review! *smile*

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 3

“Oh, I’m from the grand state of Texas, m’lady,” he said with a bow and exaggerated accent.

I just melted into a bolb on the chair.

Jasper reached down and grabbed my hand, while continuing his intense gaze upon my face, and brought it up to his lips. I almost melted, in a good way, when his soft lips connected with my skin. Goosebumps formed on my arm and a surge of electricity coursed through my body.

*points to bolb on floor* That's me right there.

HOLY CRAP.

Just before he would have brushed my nose with his, he moved his head slightly to the side and whispered, “Until next time, sweetie.”

You're actually killing me here in the most meanest ways!!!!!!!!! :P

I'm already crazy jealous. This is so unfair. I'm grinning like an idiot right now.. because I'm in love with your Jasper... (your Jasper? I can't be having that.. :P ) and Alice is the luckiest girl ever at the moment..

But bless her, that was so embarrassing.. but it had to happen.. I knew Rosalie and Jasper were cousins! I still think Rosalie was the girl in Emmett's dream.. you sneakily added that one in there...

I love this story! I saw you added a banner to the summary as well.. I love those pictures of Jackson and Ashley.. I ADORE them. And you added my series banner too! I'm so happy right now its unbelieveable.

Fast becoming one of my favourite Jasper/Alice's.. the list keeps growing, I swear XD



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that you like the story!!! I love my Jasper too! ;)

Take care!

Reviewer: isle-esme (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 1

where so the photos from the banner come from? Are the from a magazine shoot? i love the intimacy they exude<3



Author's Response:

My friends found them, but I believe they came from a UK Glamour photoshoot. Here is the article.

http://www.newmoonmovie.org/2009/11/jackson-rathbone-ashley-greene-kellan-lutz-and-nikki-reed-in-uk-glamour-magazine/

You can also find video from the shoot on youtube. :)

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 3

Hey this was a really sweet chap aww i loved how sweet carlisle was =]



Author's Response:

Thanks! :) Two of my favorite characters in the entire series are Carlisle and Jasper!

Reviewer: twitty89 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 3

I'm really enjoying this story! I love Jasper and Alice stories although I always end up being jealous of Alice!

 

I want my own Jasper!



Author's Response:

I want my own Jasper too! :D Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: jajo (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 2

Loving it all.  :)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it! Thanks for your review! :)

Reviewer: oskigal (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 2

Oh poor Alice. I can't wait to see where this is going, I love Jasper/Alice stories, thank you!

Author's Response:

You're very welcome! Thanks for your review! :)

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 2

Oh my god. I can't stop laughing.

All of a sudden Jasper opened his eyes and said, “Want your bad rooomaaaance!”

HAHAHAHAHAH. I haven't even finished reading yet. Hahah. I'm laughing so much at that visual!!!!!!

The dream was so sweet.. I knew it was a dream though.. as time had skipped forward just a bit.. the bad romance bit is still making me laugh.

Jasper smiled, oozing sex, and said, “That you won’t put me in tights.”

Don't put him in anything... *coughs* I mean.. yeah.. no tights..

Oooh so Rosalie is brunette in this? I bet shes the one Emmett is dancing with in the dream...

And Jasper has a girlfriend? I bet there is something more to it than that.. I bet she is his cousin or something..  I won't believe that she is his girlfriend.. XD

Sexy Jasper..

I love this story, please write more! :D



Author's Response:

More is on the way! Thanks! :)

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2010 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 2

Hey another great chap awwwww poor alice =[



Author's Response:

Thank you! :D

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2010 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hey this sounds like a great story =]



Author's Response:

Thank you! More is on the way! :)

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 1

I feel like squealing. A Jasper/Alice story!!!!!!!!! *dances around* And so so cute. I loved this. It was adorable how Alice notices Jasper and can't get him off her mind. Too right, by the way. I'd have been exactly the same.

Team Sexy Jasper!

And their little chat at the end really made my smile. I can't wait to read more of this. I hope you continue to write more and don't have give up on the story after this first chapter.

I'm assuming you're a Jasper/Alice fan? I've got a series on here called Eternal Hope. I'd love to add this story to my series so that I can hopefully get you some more readers? What do you say?

http://i866.photobucket.com/albums/ab223/jaspamer/Twilighted/EternalHopeContributorSmall.jpg

That is the banner you could use if you accept my offer...

:D

I'm so shameless about advertising my series.. :P



Author's Response:

Hi! Thanks so much for your great review. Yes, I'm a definitely a fan of Alice & Jasper. I feel there isn't enough out there about these two characters, who I personally love, especially Jasper! YUM!

Sure, you can add my story to your series! That would be great!

I have two additional chapters written for my story, so more is on the way!

Have a great day! :)

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