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Reviewer: eternalprincess (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 23
WOW! That chapter was intense to say the least! Is it weird to say that, while I had this feeling she was safe being around a human with her thrist, I was still surprised when she realized she killed him? Great chapter, just like all the others. Keep 'em coming!! :D
Author's Response: Um I'm a little confused as to what you're asking so I don't know if it's weird or not. Lol sorry. Thanks for reviewing though!
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 23
ooopsy!
Author's Response: LOL
Reviewer: GothicTemptress (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 23
Holy shit! Quite a twist!!!!! *claps* Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 23
holy hell poor bella! i hope that the family can help her! what is she gonna do?! and what about edward? why don't they just talk about it?! they'll be upset, but they'll get over it! they are easily distracted right?
Author's Response: Lol you'll have to wait and see! Next chapter will be up soon!
Reviewer: meeph1 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 23
OMG!! I LOVE this chapter! at first I thought she had sex with the guy and I got so MAD at her, but I was SO glad when I found out she was just sucking his blood..(I am secretly glad she killed dominic hehehe =)) Is that so bad of me? hehehe but I know this will cause her pain but also I think she will realize that she can't do that shit anymore.. Its hurting Edward and its killing the people she cares for.. You reap what you sow!! She will regret this for a LONG time! and secretly (well, not so secret anymore) I am glad she will be in pain! I know I know, she has had a hard time with all the stuff that had happened to her.. but pain gives you strength! And when you make HUGE mistakes you learn from them.. but you have to suffer the consequences.. Hopefully people won't be too hard on her.. and maybe Edward could comfort her but maybe a little distant for a while.. I would LOVE it if Bella tried to prove herself to Edward.. but that will probably not happen.. THIS STORY IS BRILLIANT!! I AM IN LOVE!! your writing is beautiful.. Im dieing for the next chapter!! good job!!
Author's Response: Whoa! You are an evil super good reviewer! Lol I know that doesn't make a lot of sense but don't worry! I will explain. Evil because you happy that Dominic died and that Bella will be in pain. Super good because I laughed the whole time reading this and you said my writing is beautiful! The next will be up soon, try to stay alive!
Reviewer: k4str (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 23
Wow. what to say but i wait patiently for the next chapter every time since I started reading this. wonderful story, wonderfully written.
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 23
err "Ruh Roh!" would be the response to that!
Bella's going to be really upset now... I wonder how much she'll feel for herself, and how much she'll transfer to being Edward's fault?
Will she be returning home for that matter, or trying to run away and hide for a bit?
Author's Response: All very good questions that will be answered in the next chapter! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 23
poor poor bella ... see what has happened toher !!! just bc Tanya is too blind to figure things out and make things right ... and bella wont listen adn edward is trying !!! GAHHHHHH nooooooooooooooooooooo
Author's Response: Lol very sad and confused vampires. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Indianwalker (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 23
oh no! How will she deal with that?
Author's Response: Next chapter up soon!
Reviewer: Habebti Heather (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 23
I am so sad for her. It really is heartwrenching for her not to be able to be with Edward and now she has killed someone that she csred for. Please do not make everyone be angry at her. looking forward to the next post.
Author's Response: Things will get better soon. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 23
Interesting story. I feel sorry for Edward in pinning after Bella. Tanya is a vamp scorned, and blocking her sister because she knows that Edward is interested in her.
Bella is a fool and just let her stubborn pride and poor sense of judgement make her kill her human friend. I hope that Edward don't blame himself for her muderous action. Update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Eddieluv (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 23
Wonderful chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: msbf84 (Anonymous) · Date: April 06, 2010 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 23
Well that action is going to hurt everybody!
Thanks for updating
Author's Response: Yep
Reviewer: Twylight_fan_4_life (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 23
LOL...I'm dying of laughter...Bella's frustration is moving to a new level. Give in and get your man before you murder a village.
Author's Response: ROTFL
Reviewer: chatybebe26 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 23
omg omg omg poor guy:(
Author's Response: Very sad... :(
Reviewer: wendemyre (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 23
Totally did not see that coming!!! Not sure I get it, but maybe I will the next chapter.... Can't wait
Author's Response: Lol next chapter will be up soon!
Reviewer: justfornow (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 23
I really did like this chapter but Bella is really getting on my nerves. I understand her unwillingness to hurt her sister but can't she realize that she is hurting Edward in the process? Either all or nothing, she can't do this inbetween thing. But I do feel bad for her now that she's killed someone. Hopefully this will knock some sense into her.
Author's Response: Yes Bella is being quite frustrating. Sadly I made her that way. Lol Things will come together soon now. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: jessimallows (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 23
Wow! I did not see that one coming. Can't wait for the next chapter! I am completely addicted to this story.
Author's Response: Thanks! Next chapter up soon!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 23
I love the cliffy's you throw in! Great writting. Yes, I am pimping it and put it in our list at our Twi Tins site for everyone to read.
Love the story my updating bunny!
Author's Response: YAY for pimping! Lol thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: fotogirl (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 23
Oh Lord! I was not expecting that to happen!
Author's Response: Lol Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 23
AHHHHHHH BELLA!
Author's Response: LOL
Reviewer: lovesurfer (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 7
OMG!!!! this is great, loved the way they all feeled frustrated it was funny. Can't wait to read BPOV of her meeting Edward.
Kisses. R.
Reviewer: HyphenAnn (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 23
*gasp* =O
Author's Response: Lol
Reviewer: crystal91390 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 1
I kinda hope that Jasper explained to Alice what his relationship to Bella really is... I mean come on shouldn't Alice trust Jasper more?! Even if she doesn't trust Bella she should trust Jasper especially if they've been together for decades! Just because she couldn't see what they're up to when they're gone together doesn't mean that they're doing something wrong.
I feel bad for Edward in this story >_< Bella's so Hot and Cold with Edward all the time. One day they'll be snuggling and cuddling and shit and then the next she's flirting with other guys... talk about mind fucked! LOL!
Can't wait for the next chapter =)
Reviewer: lovesurfer (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 6
this is great can't wait to read more!!!I'm anxious to see how their bond keeps growing and what happens when the Cullens arrive.
Kisses. R.
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